BARBADIAN THIN NASEEB MAIN

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 12:51:03 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2009, 04:17:41 PM »
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Shukriya Ghaafil Ji
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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2009, 04:41:53 PM »
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बरबादियाँ थीं नसीब में
उनका जो घर था करीब में

हम लुट गए उनकी चाह में
उनका तो दिल था रकीब में

ऊँचा महल उनको भा गया
क्या चाव था इस गरीब में

फिर क्यूँ न घर मेरा टूटता
कमजोरियां थीं जो नींव में

खोते न यूँ अपनी आबरू
होते अगर हम तहजीब में

तू है मसीहा तो जान ले
एक दिन मिलेगा सलीब में
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«Reply #17 on: June 16, 2009, 09:39:05 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 13, 2009, 04:41:53 PM
बरबादियाँ थीं नसीब में
उनका जो घर था करीब में

हम लुट गए उनकी चाह में
उनका तो दिल था रकीब में

ऊँचा महल उनको भा गया
क्या चाव था इस गरीब में

फिर क्यूँ न घर मेरा टूटता
कमजोरियां थीं जो नींव में

खोते न यूँ अपनी आबरू
होते अगर हम तहजीब में

तू है मसीहा तो जान ले
एक दिन मिलेगा सलीब में

Bohot Khoob..bohot umdah Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #18 on: June 17, 2009, 04:18:26 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 09:39:05 AM
Bohot Khoob..bohot umdah Sarvesh Ji

Bahut bahut shukriya Talat Ji
Aap wakai shayari ki achchhi kadardaan hain
All the best
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«Reply #19 on: June 18, 2009, 03:26:53 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 17, 2009, 04:18:26 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Talat Ji
Aap wakai shayari ki achchhi kadardaan hain
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI

Zarra-nawaazi hai Sarvesh Ji....warna main to kuch nahin.....
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«Reply #20 on: July 02, 2009, 03:56:57 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 18, 2009, 03:26:53 PM
Zarra-nawaazi hai Sarvesh Ji....warna main to kuch nahin.....

So nice of you Celmira Ji
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2009, 06:15:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah kaya baat hai SARVESH RASTOGIji
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 08:14:04 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 07, 2009, 06:15:58 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah kaya baat hai SARVESH RASTOGIji

Shukriya Pooja Ji
Meharbani
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 08:41:47 AM »
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Khotey Na Yu'n Apni Aabroo
Hote Agar Apni Tehzeeb Mein...



Beautiful Lines.... Applause Applause

Ye Lines humein ek Lesson bhi deti hai, ki humko Apni Tehzeeb kabhi nahi bhulni chahiye.. aur usko Qayam rakhein...  Taaki hamari next generation bhi is Tehzeeb ko Follow karey.... Humein Apni Tehzeeb par Fakhr hai....

_________Alam
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2009, 05:35:46 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Alam Ji
Bada achchha laga ki mere jazwat is ghazal me theek se communicate hue hain, aapne wahi interpret kiya hai jo maine likha hai.  Congratulations for having deep understanding and wide knowledge of poetry. 
Bas aise hi hausla badhate rahiye.  Ghazal section me meri darjano ghazal hain jo aapko wakai bahut pasand aayengi.  Time mile to dekhiye.
Shukriya meharbani
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«Reply #25 on: July 09, 2009, 05:42:57 AM »
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Very nice and beautiful gazal Sarvesh ji,wonderful lines by Azeem bhai and Alam
ji. Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 06:24:26 AM »
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poori gazal kamaal ki hai... magar dil main yah do line attak kar rah gai:

फिर क्यूँ न घर मेरा टूटता
कमजोरियां थीं जो नींव में
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«Reply #27 on: July 09, 2009, 02:51:11 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 09, 2009, 05:42:57 AM
Very nice and beautiful gazal Sarvesh ji,wonderful lines by Azeem bhai and Alam
ji. Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Bahut bahut Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
So kind of you
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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2009, 11:04:30 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 06:24:26 AM
poori gazal kamaal ki hai... magar dil main yah do line attak kar rah gai:

फिर क्यूँ न घर मेरा टूटता
कमजोरियां थीं जो नींव में

Shukriya Pooja Ji
Shayar wahi likhta hai jo woh dekhta, sunta aur mahsoos karta hai.  Ghazal shayad zindagi ko har pahloo se dekhti aur bayaan karti hai, isiliye ghazal sabse sunder form hai poetry ki.
Bahut shukriya, aapne sunder dhang se daad di.
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