bas khubsurat safar mein aage badhti jati hun.. charan..

by lovely_charan on February 09, 2013, 06:48:55 PM
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har din har pal tere pyar mein chehakti jati hun..
har din har pal tujhe dil-o-jaan, kehti jati hun..

kahan se laaye ho yeh aasmani guldasta tum..
har din har pal isme badastur mehakti jati hun..

kabhi khwaabon ke ishaare pe jagaana tera..
hawaon ki tarah tujhme main bikharti jati hun..

koi hans de..koi ro de.. koi kaise tujhe kho de..
iss ehsaas se hi dekho kaise bilakhti jati hun..

anjaam kya hoga yeh toh khuda jaane mera..
bas khubsurat safar mein aage badhti jati hun..

teri adaa kya khub hai jaana hai maine aaj..
dil doob jaaye aankhon mein, bhatakti jati hun..

khud se wafaa kare Charan ya beimaani rabb se..
har dua mein rabb se, unko apna banati jati hun..
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2013, 07:24:21 PM »
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wha ji wha
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2013, 07:33:13 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2013, 01:48:38 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2013, 03:47:15 AM »
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waah waah waah waah bohut khub lovely ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2013, 03:48:10 AM »
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aaj ka RAU apka hua lovely ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2013, 04:11:40 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder
thanks soooooooooo much sir Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2013, 04:12:38 AM »
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waah waah waah waah bohut khub lovely ji
aaj ka RAU apka hua lovely ji
bahut bahut shukriya apka saahil ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2013, 08:19:23 AM »
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बहुत खुबसुरत लिखा हैं.. हर एक लफ्ज दिल को छू गए..

अंजाम क्या होगा ये तो खुदा जाने मेरा,
बस खुबसुरत सफ़र में आगे बढती जाती हु..

Applause Applause Applause

चरण जी आप जो भी कविताये लिखे क्रप्या कर उनका पहला अक्षर हमेशा
बडा लिखे..इन्हें बोल्ड और सेण्टर में लिखे जिसे आपकी कविता और
भी खुबसूरत हो जाएगी.. यु ही लिखते रहे और हमेशा खुश रहे..
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2013, 08:21:04 AM »
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thank you for the suggestion Usual Smile i ll do this from the next one Usual Smile
thanks a lot rishi ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2013, 08:28:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob Lovely ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2013, 03:17:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shhukriya hriday jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2013, 03:30:49 AM »
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koi hans de..koi ro de.. koi kaise tujhe kho de..
iss ehsaas se hi dekho kaise bilakhti jati hun..

anjaam kya hoga yeh toh khuda jaane mera..
bas khubsurat safar mein aage badhti jati hun..

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exccellant ghazal lovely dear. (haath banda hai.otherwise one more rau for u)
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2013, 07:07:00 PM »
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exccellant ghazal lovely dear. (haath banda hai.otherwise one more rau for u)

thanks a lot suman jee Usual Smile Usual Smile m really excited to know that you like my creation Usual Smile love you
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