bazm e ahal e hunar,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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bazm e ahal e hunar tha hum bhi  apna  hunar  dikhate chale,
mohhobat kee baat chali aansuo,n ko hasi main chupate chale,

husan walo,n se kaise bachte dil to hamara bhi  dhadkta tha,
faqt eysa ghaat laga dil par dar ba dar thokar khaate chale,

hasrat e parwaaz thee bohat  par dhool hee naseeb huee hame,
takdeer ne eysa dhutkaara kee zakhm pe zakhm badhaate chale,

chashm e tar huee aalam e tanhaayi  main kisi ke gam se yuh,
baadaa ke rind main apni dastaa,n e mohhobat  bataate chale,

qafas e fasurda main qaid zeest meri kab tak tadapte rehti,
saans zism se juda karke gham e naam  uske naam kar chale,

ger  kabhi  yaad  aaye to lout  aana  meri kabr par ek din,
takleef na hogee dhondne main hum naqsh e paa chorte chale,

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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2015, 09:37:54 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2015, 02:55:01 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2015, 10:14:24 AM »
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shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaadddd or rau kabool
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