Bazm-e-aatish-bjaan mein aa baithey!

by abdbundeli on September 03, 2012, 01:42:57 PM
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Khumar Barabankawi kee gazal padhtey-padhtey yeh matlaa nazar-e-zeyhn mein khud-b-khud daakhil huaa, to, yah gazal taameer mein aa hee gayee! Main is gazal kee taameer key liye bhai Azeem ji kaa shukraguzaar huun! Na Azeem ji, Khumar ji kee gazal share kartey, na yeh gazal taameer mein aatee!

Bazm-e-aatish-bjaan mein aa baithey!
Daaman-e-syaah bhi jalaa baithey!!

Wo raqeeboun key paas bhi na gaye
Umra bhar, kahkey sarfiraa, baithey!

Noujawaanee qayaam-e-hijra rahee;
Wasl kee yaad bhi chhupaa baithey!

Wo akeyley hain nipat: pahloo mein,
Kaash, jaakar koyi sagaa baithey!

Unkey jalwey hain tasawwur mein nihaan:
Ham unhain baarhaa jataa, baithey!

Maykadey mein hain muhaajir ab to;
Laboun sey jaam-e-may sataa baithey!

Ham bhi beyzaar hain, ao wo beyzaar!
Rab, 'abd', dil kahaan lagaa baithey?

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 01:52:00 PM »
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wah wah wah..

bahut bahut khoob Abd sahab.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 02:10:37 PM »
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ABD Sahaab Aadaab!

Khoob janab bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad OP o mubbarakbad
Kabul kijiye... aur maqte par khususan hazaarOn daad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 02:18:10 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 03, 2012, 01:52:00 PM
wah wah wah..

bahut bahut khoob Abd sahab.. Usual Smile

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Touhid ji!
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 02:21:28 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 03, 2012, 02:10:37 PM
ABD Sahaab Aadaab!

Khoob janab bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad OP o mubbarakbad
Kabul kijiye... aur maqte par khususan hazaarOn daad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar, 'ParwaaZ' ji!
Gazal aapko pasand aayee, bahut-bahut shukriyah! WOH aapko khush wa tandurust rakhey!
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 03:02:04 PM »
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bahut khoob abd sir
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2012, 03:09:01 PM »
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Waah bahaut hi khoob Abd sahab ..... dilee daad o mubarakbaad !!
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 03:57:16 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 03, 2012, 01:42:57 PM
Khumar Barabankawi kee gazal padhtey-padhtey yeh matlaa nazar-e-zeyhn mein khud-b-khud daakhil huaa, to, yah gazal taameer mein aa hee gayee! Main is gazal kee taameer key liye bhai Azeem ji kaa shukraguzaar huun! Na Azeem ji, Khumar ji kee gazal share kartey, na yeh gazal taameer mein aatee!

Bazm-e-aatish-bjaan mein aa baithey!
Daaman-e-syaah bhi jalaa baithey!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Wo raqeeboun key paas bhi na gaye
Umra bhar, kahkey sarfiraa, baithey! icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Noujawaanee qayaam-e-hijra rahee;
Wasl kee yaad bhi chhupaa baithey! Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Wo akeyley hain nipat: pahloo mein,
Kaash, jaakar koyi sagaa baithey! Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Unkey jalwey hain tasawwur mein nihaan:
Ham unhain baarhaa jataa, baithey! Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Maykadey mein hain muhaajir ab to;
Laboun sey jaam-e-may sataa baithey!

Ham bhi beyzaar hain, ao wo beyzaar!
Rab, 'abd', dil kahaan lagaa baithey? Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

              - abd bundeli



naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-ABD Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 04:36:29 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai ABD sir
sabhi ashaar ..behad khoob..wah wah wah
matla aur maqta dono..laajavaab..
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bahot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2012, 12:34:49 AM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2012, 05:12:33 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2012, 03:02:04 PM
bahut khoob abd sir

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
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Quote from: zarraa on September 03, 2012, 03:09:01 PM
Waah bahaut hi khoob Abd sahab ..... dilee daad o mubarakbaad !!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Zarraa' ji!
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 03, 2012, 03:57:16 PM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-ABD Usual Smile Usual Smile
Thanks, 'Khamosh' ji!
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 05:18:06 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2012, 04:36:29 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai ABD sir
sabhi ashaar ..behad khoob..wah wah wah
matla aur maqta dono..laajavaab..
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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