qadeer_junaid
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* Jaun Eliya Ki zameen me is haqeer Insaan ki Ghazal
Humse pucho Hai aasmaan me kya
Kya hai masjid me aur azaan me kya
Mujh ko dekha to ji uthi phir se
Aa gai phir se jaan jaan me kya
Bebasi be kali o tanhaaee
Aur rakha hai is makaan me kya
Bhool Jaane ko mujh se kaheti ho
Tumsa dooja bhi hai jahan me kya
Phool kyun aaj raqs karte hain
Koi aaya hai gulsitan me kya
Jhoot kah ke bhi jeet jaata hai
Koi taseer hai zubaan me kya
Jeet jata hai maut se har dam
Har ghadi maan ki hai aman me kya
Ghoom aaye qadeer sub bolo
Kya hai sahera me gulsitan me kya
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amit_prakash_meet
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2012, 05:51:54 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2012, 05:55:33 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2012, 05:56:55 AM » |
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Quateel Ahmad
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2012, 06:10:38 AM » |
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2012, 06:52:18 AM » |
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Bhut pyari peskask h.
Lafjo ko jis tarah aapne bandha h wo wakai tareef ke kabil h.
Es choti si gazal me aap ne dikha diya ki aap ak achche sayar h.
Daad kabool kare.
Isii tarah achchi achchi peshkas laate rahe.
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 06:53:03 AM » |
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Bhut pyari peskask h.
Lafjo ko jis tarah aapne bandha h wo wakai tareef ke kabil h.
Es choti si gazal me aap ne dikha diya ki aap ak achche sayar h.
Daad kabool kare.
Isii tarah achchi achchi peshkas laate rahe.
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2012, 08:27:23 AM » |
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2012, 08:48:23 AM » |
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Achhi peshkash ke liye aad aur mubarakbaad .
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2012, 12:37:28 PM » |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2012, 01:05:41 PM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob
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khwahish
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2012, 01:17:34 PM » |
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2012, 01:52:55 PM » |
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2012, 02:51:28 PM » |
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Bahut khoob, khaastaur pe teesre aur chauthay she'r kaafi achhe lage.
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on eTI community..
