Bebasi Bekali o Tanhai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2012, 05:48:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2012, 06:18:22 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2012, 05:48:30 AM
    * Jaun Eliya Ki zameen me is haqeer Insaan ki Ghazal

Humse pucho Hai aasmaan me kya
Kya hai masjid me aur azaan me kya Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
hamaraa farz hai ye unn logo.n ko bataane ka jo bhtke hue hain.
Mujh ko dekha to ji uthi phir se
Aa gai phir se jaan jaan me kya
kyaa khoob kahaa qadeer sahab. waise wo kaun hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Bebasi be kali o tanhaaee
Aur rakha hai is makaan me kya Applause Applause Applause Applause
haan bhai ghar to rishte , insaan aur mohabbat hi se banta hai
Bhool Jaane ko mujh se kaheti ho
Tumsa dooja bhi hai jahan me kya
nahin nahin ye aap ke nazaro.n ki enaayat hai.  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Phool kyun aaj raqs karte hain
Koi aaya hai gulsitan me kya Applause Applause Applause Applause
main to bahut dino.n se nahin aayi yahaan
Jhoot kah ke bhi jeet jaata hai
Koi taseer hai zubaan me kya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
nahin ji bus aise hi loag mujhe sunte kam hain dekhte zayada hain
Jeet jata hai maut se har dam
Har ghadi maan ki hai aman me kya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah wah kya kah diya janaab aapne. ghazal ka center hai ye sher
Ghoom aaye qadeer sub bolo
Kya hai sahera me gulsitan me kya Applause Applause Applause Applause
 her jagah main hi main hoo.n aur kya
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Qadeertoopchi

salaam alaikum qadeer sahab,
  taarif mein bolne waali koi baat hi nahin.jo insaan joun eliya ka contemporary hai uski baat hi kya.
main ne aap ki ghazal enjoy ki aur sher ko apna samaj ka apne dil se comments kiya.per mujh nadaan ladki se koi ghustakhi hui ho comments karte hue to aap maaf karna. kyon ki aap ki ghazal ek aalaa myaar rakhti hai. aur ye ghazal behtreen khyalo.n se bhari hui hai.
aap ki wellwisher.

  sheba
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«Reply #16 on: April 24, 2012, 08:45:31 PM »
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wah qadeer sb
mubarakbad qubool karain

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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2012, 12:31:42 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2012, 05:48:30 AM
    * Jaun Eliya Ki zameen me is haqeer Insaan ki Ghazal

Humse pucho Hai aasmaan me kya
Kya hai masjid me aur azaan me kya

Mujh ko dekha to ji uthi phir se
Aa gai phir se jaan jaan me kya

Bebasi be kali o tanhaaee
Aur rakha hai is makaan me kya

Bhool Jaane ko mujh se kaheti ho
Tumsa dooja bhi hai jahan me kya

Phool kyun aaj raqs karte hain
Koi aaya hai gulsitan me kya

Jhoot kah ke bhi jeet jaata hai
Koi taseer hai zubaan me kya

Jeet jata hai maut se har dam
Har ghadi maan ki hai aman me kya

Ghoom aaye qadeer sub bolo
Kya hai sahera me gulsitan me kya

 

Qadeertoopchi
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Qadeer ji mast kalaam hai apka
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«Reply #18 on: April 25, 2012, 03:13:45 AM »
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bohut khoob qadar sahab
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«Reply #19 on: April 25, 2012, 10:49:15 AM »
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Qadeer_Junaid Sahab,

Waah waah kya kahne bahu khoob kaha
hai tabeeyat khush ho gayee...Chhoti
behr men bahut pyari ghazal...

Aapko bahut din baad padh raha hoon...

Aqeel Nomani Sahab ka ek she'r yaad
aa gaya....

"ye kya ki harfo-sada ka tabaadala bhi naheeN
 kahaaN hai kaisa hai ai dost kuchh bata to sahee"

                                 --- Aqeel Nomani

Aapki is behetreen kaavish ke liye dili
mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
     
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«Reply #20 on: April 26, 2012, 05:35:35 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 24, 2012, 05:51:54 AM
kaabil-e-daad Junaid Ji
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Amit Sahab ,, Badi nawazish ,, Khush rahen
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«Reply #21 on: April 26, 2012, 05:36:31 AM »
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Qalb sahab bahut shukriyah ,, Allah apko khush rakhe
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«Reply #22 on: April 26, 2012, 05:37:11 AM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on April 24, 2012, 05:56:55 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Aatish sahab shukriyah
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«Reply #23 on: April 26, 2012, 05:37:47 AM »
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Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on April 24, 2012, 06:10:38 AM
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Bahot Khoob!! Thumbs UP

Qauteel Ahmed Sahab ,, Apko ghazal pasand aai jaan kar khushi howi ,, dad ke liye shukriyah
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«Reply #24 on: April 26, 2012, 05:38:42 AM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 24, 2012, 06:52:18 AM
Bhut pyari peskask h.
Lafjo ko jis tarah aapne bandha h wo wakai tareef ke kabil h.
Es choti si gazal me aap ne dikha diya ki aap ak achche sayar h.
Daad kabool kare.
Isii tarah achchi achchi peshkas laate rahe.

Masoom Shahzada Saheb ,, Apka husne nazar hai baaqi khuch nahi ,, Allah Apko khush rakhe,,Badi nawazish
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Quote from: sarfira on April 24, 2012, 08:27:23 AM
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Sarfira sahab ,, Shukriyah bhai
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«Reply #26 on: April 26, 2012, 05:40:33 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 24, 2012, 08:48:23 AM
Achhi  peshkash  ke  liye  aad  aur  mubarakbaad . 

F.H.Siddiqui Sahab ,,

Apko ghazal pasand aai mere mahenat rang laai ,, Shukriyah khush ,,rahen ,
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 24, 2012, 12:13:32 PM
Qadeer Bhaijaan Aadaab!


Janab bade dinoN baad bazm meiN aap ko dekhkar badi khushi huyi... Usual Smile
Muafi chahte haiN ke hum jyada yahoo par nahi aate so aapse baat
nahi ho paayi.... Usual Smile

Behad laa jawaab gazal lekar hazir huye hai aap... gazab ke ashaar
gazab ki gehraai aur umdaa bayaani ... WaaH waaH waaH janab badi
hi khoob gazal hai ... Sabhi ashaar Masha Allaah se behad umdaa rahe
behad khoob aur behad achche... Usual Smile


Is umdaa gazal par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
SHaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Mahutram ,, Parvaz sahab ,, Apka tabsera Apki dil me gareeb ki bepanah mahubbat ka pata deta hai ,, Is badle me apka bhai apko sirf dua de sakta hai ,, Allah apko do jahan ki barkaton se nawaze ,, Bhai kahan hain aaj kal Ap ,, zamana guzar giya na salam aata hai na pahunchta hai ummid hai ke ap kahiriyat se honga ,, Apko ghazal pasand aai qeemat wasool ,, Khush rahen ..

Apka bhai

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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 24, 2012, 01:05:41 PM
waah waah bahut khoob

Dr.Sksaini Sahab ,, Shukriyah ,, Khush rahen
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 24, 2012, 12:37:28 PM
"Kya hai masjid main aur azaan main kya"
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Kya baat kahi hai apne sahab..
Bahaut khoob..

Raheem Bhai ,, Kaise hain App ,, Zamane baad Apki dad naseeb howi ,, Acha laga ,, shukriyah ,, Khush rahen jahan rahen ,,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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