Beet jaauun na teyrey aaney tak?

by abdbundeli on March 06, 2013, 08:20:05 PM
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Sabra jaayegaa kis bahaaney tak?
Beet jaauun na teyrey aaney tak?

Dil ki baateyn kahaan chhupaauun main:
Baat pahunchee hai jaa zamaaney tak?

Log kahtey hain, pahunch hee meyree,
Gar kaheen hai, to, baadahkhaaney tak!

Johtaa baat kharhaa huun rah mein:
Koyi pahunchaaye sanamkhaaney tak!

Nigaah mein hain mahaz chouraahey:
Kahaan rawaan hun wahaan jaaney tak?

Raahrou, kaash, deedahwar koyee,
Saath ho ley patah bataaney tak?

Bheerh hee bheerh hai, ‘abd’, aagey;
Nuzhat-e-zeyhn aazmaaney tak!

     - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2013, 08:24:35 PM »
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waah bohat bohat khoob ,............bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2013, 08:31:00 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on March 06, 2013, 08:24:35 PM
waah bohat bohat khoob ,............bohat c daad,.......

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'laaiba' ji!
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2013, 09:07:06 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2013, 09:44:40 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 06, 2013, 09:07:06 PM
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Shukriyah, Ravi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2013, 10:11:03 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah! Bahut khoob 
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2013, 01:30:25 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 06, 2013, 10:11:03 PM
Waaaaaaaaah! Bahut khoob 

Shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2013, 02:19:00 AM »
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4th and 5th sher wazan se giray huay hein!!

[Johtaa baat kharhaa huun rah mein: Koyi pahunchaaye sanamkhaaney tak! Nigaah mein hain mahaz chouraahey: Kahaan rawaan hun wahaan jaaney tak?]]]

thori se mazeed mehnat se aap bahut achha likh sakte hein!!

 
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2013, 01:18:54 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on March 07, 2013, 02:19:00 AM
4th and 5th sher wazan se giray huay hein!!
[Johtaa baat kharhaa huun rah mein: Koyi pahunchaaye sanamkhaaney tak! Nigaah mein hain mahaz chouraahey: Kahaan rawaan hun wahaan jaaney tak?]]]

thori se mazeed mehnat se aap bahut achha likh sakte hein!!

 
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2013, 01:34:38 PM »
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waah sirji
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Quote from: sarfira on March 07, 2013, 01:34:38 PM
waah sirji

Shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2013, 10:41:45 PM »
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waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Abd ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2013, 08:42:56 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 07, 2013, 10:41:45 PM
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waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Abd ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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Quote from: nandbahu on March 08, 2013, 08:42:56 AM
bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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