Beet jaaye na nisf shab yuun hee!

by abdbundeli on September 08, 2012, 11:30:40 AM
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Teej-tyohaar har, manaao tum!
Shart itnee hai, muskuraao tum!!

Jaan lo, a'am aadmee hain ham:
Khaas rishtoun ko mat bhulaao tum!

Gaa rahey mast parindey kab sey:
Chaahtaa hun, ki, gungunaao tum!

Baat kartee ho: phool khiltey hain:
Muntazir huun, ki, kuchh sunaao tum!
 
Beet jaaye na nisf shab yuun hee:
Ho kahaan par? Qareeb aao tum!

Is sey pahley kabhee huaa ho to,
Waayadey par, 'abd', na aao tum!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2012, 12:02:29 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kaheN aapki is kalaam par.. bus waaH
hi nikal rahi hai... badi khoob kalaam kahi hai...
Behad khoob ahsaas aur behad umda ashaar ... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2012, 12:37:15 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 08, 2012, 11:30:40 AM

Teej-tyohaar har, manaao tum!
Shart itnee hai, muskuraao tum!!

Jaan lo, a'am aadmee hain ham:
Khaas rishtoun ko mat bhulaao tum!

Gaa rahey mast parindey kab sey:
Chaahtaa hun, ki, gungunaao tum!

Baat kartee ho: phool khiltey hain:
Muntazir huun, ki, kuchh sunaao tum!
 
Beet jaaye na nisf shab yuun hee:
Ho kahaan par? Qareeb aao tum!

Is sey pahley kabhee huaa ho to,
Waayadey par, 'abd', na aao tum!

               - abd bundeli


gud-ABD
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2012, 01:05:59 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 08, 2012, 12:02:29 PM
Abd Jee Aadaab!
WaaH janab waaH kia kaheN aapki is kalaam par.. bus waaH
hi nikal rahi hai... badi khoob kalaam kahi hai...
Behad khoob ahsaas aur behad umda ashaar ... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda hafez... Usual Smile
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji! Namaskaar! Khush rahiye!
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 08, 2012, 12:37:15 PM
gud-ABD

Thanks, Khamosh!
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2012, 01:33:46 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2012, 02:06:39 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 08, 2012, 01:33:46 PM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, nandbahu ji!
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2012, 04:40:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 08, 2012, 11:30:40 AM

Teej-tyohaar har, manaao tum!
Shart itnee hai, muskuraao tum!! ghazab ka khayaal hai sir, wah wah wah

Jaan lo, a'am aadmee hain ham:
Khaas rishtoun ko mat bhulaao tum! aap bhi jaan leejiye..ye sher to mujhe khoob bhaaya, dil se daad deta hun

Gaa rahey mast parindey kab sey:
Chaahtaa hun, ki, gungunaao tum!  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Baat kartee ho: phool khiltey hain:
Muntazir huun, ki, kuchh sunaao tum! ahaa  kya baat hai..laajavaab
 
Beet jaaye na nisf shab yuun hee:
Ho kahaan par? Qareeb aao tum!  barhiya hai sir

Is sey pahley kabhee huaa ho to,
Waayadey par, 'abd', na aao tum!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

               - abd bundeli

Baahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahee hai aapne..
bahut bahut mubaarak  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2012, 12:17:14 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 08, 2012, 11:30:40 AM

Teej-tyohaar har, manaao tum!
Shart itnee hai, muskuraao tum!!

Jaan lo, a'am aadmee hain ham:
Khaas rishtoun ko mat bhulaao tum!

Gaa rahey mast parindey kab sey:
Chaahtaa hun, ki, gungunaao tum!

Baat kartee ho: phool khiltey hain:
Muntazir huun, ki, kuchh sunaao tum!
 
Beet jaaye na nisf shab yuun hee:
Ho kahaan par? Qareeb aao tum!

Is sey pahley kabhee huaa ho to,
Waayadey par, 'abd', na aao tum!

               - abd bundeli


waaah bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
aapka yeh kalam hame bahut bahut pasand aaya. one word EXCELLANT  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2012, 05:23:02 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 08, 2012, 04:40:54 PM
Baahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahee hai aapne..
bahut bahut mubaarak  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'mkv' ji! Aap ney meyree gazal ko itnaa 'dulaar' diyaa hai, ki, shukriyah kaa lafz bounaa lag rahaa hai!
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Quote from: suman59 on September 09, 2012, 12:17:14 AM
waaah bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
aapka yeh kalam hame bahut bahut pasand aaya. one word EXCELLANT  Thumbs UP
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji! Aap ney meyree gazal ko pasand kiyaa hai, aur mujhey bhi to khushee milee hai!
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