Beete Palon Ke Saye - 1971 - Ram Saraswat

by Ram Saraswat on April 20, 2013, 02:46:14 AM
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Kab  raat  andheri  subah  bane,  hum  aas  lagaye baithe  hain,
kuchh paa kar khoye baithe hain, kuchh kho kar paaye baithe hain.

jee  bhar kar  ham  ne  dekh liya, sone  chaandi  ki  duniya  ko,
lakhon  mein  jahaan  daulat ke liye, iimaan lutaye  baithe hain.

Bistar  hai zameen  chhat  aasmaan , fir  bhi jeene ki aas  liye,
kuchh  badnaseeb  roti  ke  liye,do  haath  badhaaye baithe hain.

Rona  ho  to  ro un ke  aage, ho jin  pe  asar khuchh  aansoo ka,
kya pighlenge wo jo seene mein, paththar ko bithaye baithe  hain.

Aye "Ram" yakeen ham kaise  karein,  tere  in be-maani vaadon ka,
jab  ahle karam ke hi haathon,  hum  dhokhaa khaaye baithe  hain.
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 03:13:08 AM »
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Saraswat Jee Aadaab..!


WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH bahut khoob aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Gehrai hai khayaaloN meiN aur umdaa fikr hai.. bade hi gazab ke khayaal bayaaN kiye hai janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 12:16:14 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurat ghazal kahi hai, saraswat ji.tahe dil swee mubarakbad pesh hai.
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bahut pasand aayi mujhe. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2013, 02:25:25 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on April 20, 2013, 02:46:14 AM
Kab  raat  andheri  subah  bane,  hum  aas  lagaye baithe  hain,
kuchh paa kar khoye baithe hain, kuchh kho kar paaye baithe hain.

jee  bhar kar  ham  ne  dekh liya, sone  chaandi  ki  duniya  ko,
lakhon  mein  jahaan  daulat ke liye, iimaan lutaye  baithe hain.

Bistar  hai zameen  chhat  aasmaan , fir  bhi jeene ki aas  liye,
kuchh  badnaseeb  roti  ke  liye,do  haath  badhaaye baithe hain.

Rona  ho  to  ro un ke  aage, ho jin  pe  asar khuchh  aansoo ka,
kya pighlenge wo jo seene mein, paththar ko bithaye baithe  hain.

Aye "Ram" yakeen ham kaise  karein,  tere  in be-maani vaadon ka,
jab  ahle karam ke hi haathon,  hum  dhokhaa khaaye baithe  hain.
Bahut Umda khayalaat piroye hai SIr
par inka javaab naheen
Rona  ho  to  ro un ke  aage, ho jin  pe  asar khuchh  aansoo ka,
kya pighlenge wo jo seene mein, paththar ko bithaye baithe  hain.

Aye "Ram" yakeen ham kaise  karein,  tere  in be-maani vaadon ka,
jab  ahle karam ke hi haathon,  hum  dhokhaa khaaye baithe  hain.
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Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaazji
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F.H.Siddiqui Sahab bahut bahut shukriya
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Bahut bahut shukriya Aqshji
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MKVji bahut bahut shukriya
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Bahut bahut shukriya Aatishji
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on April 20, 2013, 02:46:14 AM
Kab  raat  andheri  subah  bane,  hum  aas  lagaye baithe  hain,
kuchh paa kar khoye baithe hain, kuchh kho kar paaye baithe hain.

jee  bhar kar  ham  ne  dekh liya, sone  chaandi  ki  duniya  ko,
lakhon  mein  jahaan  daulat ke liye, iimaan lutaye  baithe hain.

Bistar  hai zameen  chhat  aasmaan , fir  bhi jeene ki aas  liye,
kuchh  badnaseeb  roti  ke  liye,do  haath  badhaaye baithe hain.

Rona  ho  to  ro un ke  aage, ho jin  pe  asar khuchh  aansoo ka,
kya pighlenge wo jo seene mein, paththar ko bithaye baithe  hain.

Aye "Ram" yakeen ham kaise  karein,  tere  in be-maani vaadon ka,
jab  ahle karam ke hi haathon,  hum  dhokhaa khaaye baithe  hain.


wah wah wah ram sahab khoob kalaam hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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wah wah wah ram sahab khoob kalaam hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Shebaji , idhar kuchh dinon se fir masroof rahne laga hoon so waqt kam depata hoon , ek baar fir Shuriya
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