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by marhoom bahayaat on July 27, 2010, 12:26:31 PM
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                 hai samander kyon bejaan  aao zara poochein.,
                 hai gulistan kyon viraan aao zara poochein.,,

                 aashiqon ki diwaangi ka khel kab tak chalega.,
                 hai ye husn kyon nadaan  aao zara poochein..,

                 ghum se nijaad ka koi aur raah talaasho.,
                 hai ye jaam kyon meharbaan aao zara poochein..,

                 sabhi ne banaa rakha hai yahan raasta apna apna.,
                 hai ye rahbar kyon pareshan aao zara poochein..,

                 pahchante hain sabhi dushman ko mere shahar wale.,
                 hai ye 'marhoom' kyon anjaan aao zara poochein..,


                
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2010, 10:25:48 PM »
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BEGAANA JI AAPKI NAZM KA MAIN KAYAL HO GAYA
BESHAK BADI KHOOBSURATI KE SAATH JINDAGI KI SACHHAI KO PESH KIYA HAI
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2010, 01:51:29 AM »
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Waah MB ji waah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2010, 09:56:58 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 09:08:29 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 09:15:07 AM »
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bahut khoob ji bahut badhiya~
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 10:20:27 PM »
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BEGAANA JI AAPKI NAZM KA MAIN KAYAL HO GAYA
BESHAK BADI KHOOBSURATI KE SAATH JINDAGI KI SACHHAI KO PESH KIYA HAI

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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 10:03:50 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 08:27:51 AM »
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Waah MB ji waah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 08:30:43 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2010, 10:19:09 AM »
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bahut khoob ji bahut badhiya~

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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 01:14:43 AM »
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                 hai samander kyon bejaan  aao zara poochein.,
                 hai gulistan kyon viraan aao zara poochein.,,

                 aashiqon ki diwaangi ka khel kab tak chalega.,
                 hai ye husn kyon nadaan  aao zara poochein..,

                 ghum se nijaad ka koi aur raah talaasho.,
                 hai ye jaam kyon meharbaan aao zara poochein..,

                 sabhi ne banaa rakha hai yahan raasta apna apna.,
                 hai ye rahbar kyon pareshan aao zara poochein..,

                 pahchante hain sabhi dushman ko mere shahar wale.,
                 hai ye 'marhoom' kyon anjaan aao zara poochein..,


                 

Bahut Khoob MB Ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2010, 03:54:57 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 29, 2010, 03:36:00 PM »
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Waah MB ji waah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

THANK YOU HRIDAY JI
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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2010, 03:37:17 PM »
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THANK YOU
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