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by marhoom bahayaat on July 27, 2010, 12:26:31 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 29, 2010, 03:38:41 PM »
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bahut khoob ji bahut badhiya~

THANK YOU ABHI
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«Reply #16 on: April 17, 2011, 01:38:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you
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«Reply #17 on: April 17, 2011, 01:43:06 PM »
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excellent composition MB ji..bht hi mastam likha hai apne....

likh lete hain kaise apne dil k saare raaz
milkar MB ji se hum sab aao zara puchein...
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«Reply #18 on: April 17, 2011, 02:14:24 PM »
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idea bahut achha hai aao zara poochen.
likha kaise itna achha aao zara poochen.
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«Reply #19 on: April 18, 2011, 09:14:28 AM »
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excellent composition MB ji..bht hi mastam likha hai apne....

likh lete hain kaise apne dil k saare raaz
milkar MB ji se hum sab aao zara puchein...

bahut bahut shuria kasak ji
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«Reply #20 on: April 28, 2011, 05:38:28 AM »
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BEGAANA JI AAPKI NAZM KA MAIN KAYAL HO GAYA
BESHAK BADI KHOOBSURATI KE SAATH JINDAGI KI SACHHAI KO PESH KIYA HAI

thank u mahashay
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«Reply #21 on: August 23, 2011, 08:49:31 AM »
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idea bahut achha hai aao zara poochen.
likha kaise itna achha aao zara poochen.
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THANK YOU
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«Reply #22 on: September 17, 2011, 08:30:05 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanks ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2012, 09:07:27 AM »
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idea bahut achha hai aao zara poochen.
likha kaise itna achha aao zara poochen.
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thank u
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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2012, 09:20:10 AM »
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                 hai samander kyon bejaan  aao zara poochein.,
                 hai gulistan kyon viraan aao zara poochein.,,

                 aashiqon ki diwaangi ka khel kab tak chalega.,
                 hai ye husn kyon nadaan  aao zara poochein..,

                 ghum se nijaad ka koi aur raah talaasho.,
                 hai ye jaam kyon meharbaan aao zara poochein..,

                 sabhi ne banaa rakha hai yahan raasta apna apna.,
                 hai ye rahbar kyon pareshan aao zara poochein..,

                 pahchante hain sabhi dushman ko mere shahar wale.,
                 hai ye 'marhoom' kyon anjaan aao zara poochein..,


                 


Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2012, 09:33:06 AM »
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very nice marhoomji..
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2012, 12:05:06 PM »
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very good
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«Reply #27 on: September 17, 2012, 12:26:48 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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thank u ji
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