behen betiyan

by yati_om on August 24, 2009, 12:19:50 PM
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by omprakash yati

dil meiN sau dard pale behen -betiyaN
ghar meiN baNteN ujale behen-betiyaN

kamna ek man meiN saheje huye ,
ja rahi haiN shivale behen -betiyaN

aisi bateN ki pure safar chup rahiN ,
sharm kee shawl dale behen -betiyaN

ho rahiN shadiyoN ke bahane bahut ,
bheriyoN ke hawale behen -betiyaN

gaon-ghar ki nigahoN ke do roop haiN ,
koi kaise sambhale behen -betiyaN
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2009, 04:08:52 PM »
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by omprakash yati

dil meiN sau dard pale behen -betiyaN
ghar meiN baNteN ujale behen-betiyaN

kamna ek man meiN saheje huye ,
ja rahi haiN shivale behen -betiyaN

aisi bateN ki pure safar chup rahiN ,
sharm kee shawl dale behen -betiyaN

ho rahiN shadiyoN ke bahane bahut ,
bheriyoN ke hawale behen -betiyaN

gaon-ghar ki nigahoN ke do roop haiN ,
koi kaise sambhale behen -betiyaN

Bahut bahut accha likha hai Yati ji  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2009, 04:30:34 PM »
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by omprakash yati

dil meiN sau dard pale behen -betiyaN
ghar meiN baNteN ujale behen-betiyaN

kamna ek man meiN saheje huye ,
ja rahi haiN shivale behen -betiyaN

aisi bateN ki pure safar chup rahiN ,
sharm kee shawl dale behen -betiyaN

ho rahiN shadiyoN ke bahane bahut ,
bheriyoN ke hawale behen -betiyaN

gaon-ghar ki nigahoN ke do roop haiN ,
koi kaise sambhale behen -betiyaN

Bohot Khoob Om Ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2009, 02:23:59 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Yati ji,wonderful gazal. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2009, 02:29:59 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot khoob yati ji
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2009, 06:14:02 PM »
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waah.. waah.. yati ji bohot achhe..
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2009, 10:30:57 PM »
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by omprakash yati

dil meiN sau dard pale behen -betiyaN
ghar meiN baNteN ujale behen-betiyaN

kamna ek man meiN saheje huye ,
ja rahi haiN shivale behen -betiyaN

aisi bateN ki pure safar chup rahiN ,
sharm kee shawl dale behen -betiyaN

ho rahiN shadiyoN ke bahane bahut ,
bheriyoN ke hawale behen -betiyaN

gaon-ghar ki nigahoN ke do roop haiN ,
koi kaise sambhale behen -betiyaN

bahoot khoob OM Yati ji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2009, 02:40:08 AM »
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Gunaha kartainey hai sabhee insaan a rooh anjaan or jaan kar
lakin Khuda ke ghar main mahashoos karte hain
gunaha chhod kar dubara gunaha karne se darte hai
too bee yaad kaar apna safar,or maag le maafi khuda ke roobroo ho kar
Na ho maayush ish kadar dooshron ki bahoon se
waqt se mode le kadam apne in begani raho se
Jism ki bhookh nahi bharti kabhi,dekh le umrr main chahe 100 saal or zod kar
Baith kar soch aik roz fazal ki aag main
kaya khoya kaya paya tune is paap ki barshat main
Ghada bharne se pahale too khuda se or apne bachhono se payar kar
Kho diya hai do nanho ka bachpan or sachhe insaan ki jindgi
5 ko pet main hi maar dala , jaane kitno ki li ander gandgi
bura kiya hai kishi ke saath to fir too na kabhee achhe ka intjaar kar
tu layak hai manjil te manzil fatah karne ki
ye dooa hai kisi ki safar tere saath karne ki
too naa ho jindgi se udaash pooja, sambhaal ja or apni galti ka ahasaas kar
Jaane wala chala gaya ,saab kuchh luta kar or be-aabroo ho tere shahar se
aaankho se aanshoon thame nahi kabhee uske,jo darta nahi tha kisi sartaj se
na de dosh ush naacheej ko, saari umar rota raha jo ter gunha mai gunhgar ho kar
hum to kahite hain ki teri bhookh mite or tujh ko tumhara humsafar mile
dua kar khuda se ki kanman or mujhe chhod tum ko sab fir janam janm mile
Par pooja kon raha hai aabaade ish janhan main kishi ka dil or ghar tod kar
 
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2009, 05:22:52 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Sagari ji,beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause  Applause Applause
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