BENEYAZ......(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on February 10, 2010, 08:07:41 PM
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               SAMAJHDAAR JO THAA BE-ASAR HO GAYAA,
               HOSH JISEY THAA BE-KHABAR HO GAYAA,

               MAT KARO WAZAN  MEREY KIRDAAR KO DOST,
               MIZAN BHI ISS HARKAT PEY SHARMSAAR HO GAYAA,

               RAWAYAT-E-TAKALLUF KUCH ISS TARAH NIBHAYAA,
               DUSHMAN JO THAA KAL TAK AAJ HUNSAFAR HO GAYAA,

               WADAA JO KAR KEY GAYE KI ABHI AATEY HAIN,
               INTEZAAR MAIN UNKEY TO SAHAR HO GAYAA,
               
              NAA KARO ISTEMAAL LAFZON KI TARAH APNI GHAZAL MAIN,
              KAL TAK JO 'ZER' THAA WOH AAJ 'ZABAR' HO GAYAA,
               
               EK PHOOL JO RAKHAA THAA APNI MOHABBAT KEY LIYE,
               MAIYYAT MAIN KISI AUR KEY WOH NAZAR HO GAYAA,

               GIREY THEY KHOON JISM SEY JAHAAN TAK KHAMOSH,
               WOH PHOOLON BHARAA RASTAA AB PATHAR HO GAYAA.......!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 12:33:40 AM »
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Wah Wah Khamosh ji.bahut khoobsurat Gazal hai.very touching.mindblowing creation.excellent
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 04:38:19 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 05:32:38 PM »
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Bahot khoob KA ji. Badi shandaar poem likhi hai. Amazing and nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 05:14:01 PM »
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Wah Wah Khamosh ji.bahut khoobsurat Gazal hai.very touching.mindblowing creation.excellent

thanx madhu ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2010, 05:14:30 PM »
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2010, 05:15:05 PM »
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Bahot khoob KA ji. Badi shandaar poem likhi hai. Amazing and nice creation.

thanx riyaz sahab
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2010, 08:31:16 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2010, 11:25:00 AM »
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               SAMAJHDAAR JO THAA BE-ASAR HO GAYAA,
               HOSH JISEY THAA BE-KHABAR HO GAYAA,

               MAT KARO WAZAN  MEREY KIRDAAR KO DOST,
               MIZAN BHI ISS HARKAT PEY SHARMSAAR HO GAYAA,

               RAWAYAT-E-TAKALLUF KUCH ISS TARAH NIBHAYAA,
               DUSHMAN JO THAA KAL TAK AAJ HUNSAFAR HO GAYAA,

               WADAA JO KAR KEY GAYE KI ABHI AATEY HAIN,
               INTEZAAR MAIN UNKEY TO SAHAR HO GAYAA,
               
              NAA KARO ISTEMAAL LAFZON KI TARAH APNI GHAZAL MAIN,
              KAL TAK JO 'ZER' THAA WOH AAJ 'ZABAR' HO GAYAA,
               
               EK PHOOL JO RAKHAA THAA APNI MOHABBAT KEY LIYE,
               MAIYYAT MAIN KISI AUR KEY WOH NAZAR HO GAYAA,

               GIREY THEY KHOON JISM SEY JAHAAN TAK KHAMOSH,
               WOH PHOOLON BHARAA RASTAA AB PATHAR HO GAYAA.......!!

Bahut Khoob KA Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2010, 08:17:41 AM »
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2010, 07:41:52 PM »
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Bahut Khoob KA Ji

THANX RH
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