berukhi main bhi mohabbat nazar aati hai~~SAAHIL

by salil2002 on September 19, 2009, 04:45:44 AM
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mujhe yeh baat mere ghar kii deewaron kii yaad dilaati hai
kii is duniya main har ek cheez ab khokhli nazar aati hai

tanha pa kar jab kissii k paas ja beitha main
toh meri aankhon mein oonhe vehsat najar aati hai

is jahan main toh ab apno pe bharosa nahin hota
har riste kii buniyaad mein ab ret nazar aati hai

kabhi main khud se kehta hoon kii yeh kya ho gayi duniya
toh kucch kami sabme aur kucch khudme nazar aati hai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai

mera yeh kehna nahin bhaya ,mere dushmano ko
kii mujhe berukhi main bhi mohabbat nazar aati hai

kuch toh nazar kamzor hai "saahil" teri tu nhain samjha
yeh duniya woh nahin jo yeh nazar aati hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2009, 05:46:08 AM »
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aaj main oonhe yaad kar k roya jo mere liye aansu bahate thay
kii dekh aankhon main ashq mere kucch sukoon aaya hoga
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2009, 05:48:09 AM »
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Waah Waah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2009, 06:02:46 AM »
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teri berukhi me mohabbat nazar aati hai...
tab b tho, tere rooht jaane pe b, zindigi guzar jaati hai


very nicely phrased so impressive bhaijan
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2009, 02:30:00 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 19, 2009, 04:45:44 AM
mujhe yeh baat mere ghar kii deewaron kii yaad dilaati hai
kii is duniya main har ek cheez ab khokhli nazar aati hai

tanha pa kar jab kissii k paas ja beitha main
toh meri aankhon mein oonhe vehsat najar aati hai

is jahan main toh ab apno pe bharosa nahin hota
har riste kii buniyaad mein ab ret nazar aati hai

kabhi main khud se kehta hoon kii yeh kya ho gayi duniya
toh kucch kami sabme aur kucch khudme nazar aati hai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai

mera yeh kehna nahin bhaya ,mere dushmano ko
kii mujhe berukhi main bhi mohabbat nazar aati hai

kuch toh nazar kamzor hai "saahil" teri tu nhain samjha
yeh duniya woh nahin jo yeh nazar aati hai

Last ki do line mai sab aa gaya Lil bro... bahoot khoob kaya kamaal ka likha hai.. bahoot khoob!!!

Aor apki yah do line dil per ek asar chorr gai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2009, 06:18:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 19, 2009, 05:48:09 AM
Waah Waah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
thanks a lot sophi dear
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2009, 06:21:28 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on September 19, 2009, 06:02:46 AM
teri berukhi me mohabbat nazar aati hai...
tab b tho, tere rooht jaane pe b, zindigi guzar jaati hai


very nicely phrased so impressive bhaijan
bahut bahut shukriya sidrah

ab har aankh main dekh ashq khushi hoti hai
kii mere ashqon kii is tarah keemat ada hoti hai
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2009, 06:23:09 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 19, 2009, 02:30:00 PM

Last ki do line mai sab aa gaya Lil bro... bahoot khoob kaya kamaal ka likha hai.. bahoot khoob!!!

Aor apki yah do line dil per ek asar chorr gai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob!!

bahut bahut shukriya di kii aapne apna keemti waqt diya

aaj jab ghar se nikla toh na roka kissii ne
isliye ab oos dar par nahin jaaya jaata
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2009, 05:14:04 PM »
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Bohot khoob Salil ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2009, 05:36:09 PM »
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Na behr na wazan na qafia durust!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2009, 06:53:52 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Salil, aapne to jaise dil ki baat kah di mere  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2009, 06:18:54 AM »
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Quote from: Shayara on September 22, 2009, 05:14:04 PM
Bohot khoob Salil ji
bahut bahut shukriya shayara ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2009, 06:25:18 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji really touching n very beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2009, 07:49:07 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 19, 2009, 04:45:44 AM
mujhe yeh baat mere ghar kii deewaron kii yaad dilaati hai
kii is duniya main har ek cheez ab khokhli nazar aati hai

tanha pa kar jab kissii k paas ja beitha main
toh meri aankhon mein oonhe vehsat najar aati hai

is jahan main toh ab apno pe bharosa nahin hota
har riste kii buniyaad mein ab ret nazar aati hai

kabhi main khud se kehta hoon kii yeh kya ho gayi duniya
toh kucch kami sabme aur kucch khudme nazar aati hai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai

mera yeh kehna nahin bhaya ,mere dushmano ko
kii mujhe berukhi main bhi mohabbat nazar aati hai

kuch toh nazar kamzor hai "saahil" teri tu nhain samjha
yeh duniya woh nahin jo yeh nazar aati hai

wah wah wah
aapke har shayer pe daad hazir hai, thx for sharing ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2009, 09:32:55 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 19, 2009, 04:45:44 AM
mujhe yeh baat mere ghar kii deewaron kii yaad dilaati hai
kii is duniya main har ek cheez ab khokhli nazar aati hai

tanha pa kar jab kissii k paas ja beitha main
toh meri aankhon mein oonhe vehsat najar aati hai

is jahan main toh ab apno pe bharosa nahin hota
har riste kii buniyaad mein ab ret nazar aati hai

kabhi main khud se kehta hoon kii yeh kya ho gayi duniya
toh kucch kami sabme aur kucch khudme nazar aati hai

jis aankh main dekho mohabbat kii khumari shaam tak
raat k gujarte hi wahan dehsat nazar aati hai

mera yeh kehna nahin bhaya ,mere dushmano ko
kii mujhe berukhi main bhi mohabbat nazar aati hai

kuch toh nazar kamzor hai "saahil" teri tu nhain samjha
yeh duniya woh nahin jo yeh nazar aati hai


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Khoob Saahil Bhai..

Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash..Bahut Ache
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