Beta bhi muflisi ko samjhne laga hai ab ( Qadeertoopchi)

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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat...

muddat baad apki is mahefil me aana naseeb howa ,, meri tazah o muqtasar si ghazal ap sub hazrat ki nazar umid hai pasand aayegi ..



Kagaz ki kashtiyo.N se Bahelne laga hai ab
Beta bhi muflisi ko samajhne laga hai ab

Purkho.N ke maal pe jo ke magroor tha kabhi
Kashkool haat me liye phirne laga hai ab

Kya maikade ko jaunga mai choor ke usse
shab se hi pahele chaand sanwarne laga hai ab

Aise naseeb paaye hain tone ke kya kaho.N
goodi me tere chaand utarne laga hai aab

Ik baat thi ke jispe kabhi ghar nahi gaaye
Bache ki tarha.N dil kyun machalne laga hai ab..


---------Qadeertoopchi..................
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2011, 01:21:05 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 26, 2011, 12:40:45 PM
Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat...

muddat baad apki is mahefil me aana naseeb howa ,, meri tazah o muqtasar si ghazal ap sub hazrat ki nazar umid hai pasand aayegi ..



Kagaz ki kashtiyo.N se Bahelne laga hai ab
Beta bhi muflisi ko samajhne laga hai ab

Purkho.N ke maal pe jo ke magroor tha kabhi
Kashkool haat me liye phirne laga hai ab

Kya maikade ko jaunga mai choor ke usse
shab se hi pahele chaand sanwarne laga hai ab

Aise naseeb paaye hain tone ke kya kaho.N
goodi me tere chaand utarne laga hai aab

Ik baat thi ke jispe kabhi ghar nahi gaaye
Bache ki tarha.N dil kyun machalne laga hai ab..


---------Qadeertoopchi..................

Qadeer Bhai, Aap huemsha Se Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek rahe Hai..Aur Aapse Huemsha Yehi Shikayat Rahi hai Ke Aap bahut Kam Likhte Hai...


Iss Ghazal Ki tareef Hum Kya Kare..Har ek A'shaar lajawab!! Apne Dil ki Har Baat kehta Hua..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai

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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2011, 02:04:01 PM »
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Qadeer Sahab,
Apko parrna ek alag hi ehsaas deta hai..
Zada aya karo..Apse seekhne kuch milega..
Bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2011, 02:08:07 PM »
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qadir sahab……
mashaallah kya ghazal laye hain aap…
aisi umda ghazal ko hum kahte hain janaseen kalaam…

wah janaab…
kya bayaani hai haqikat ki…

esi ghazalen ek parh lu to shayri aur ghazlon ko parhne ka junun barh jaata hai…

aapko, bekarar ji aur ghayal ji ko parhne ka har waqt ji chahta hai…
plz thoda jada time diya kijiye aap…
ye reqst maan lijiye
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2011, 02:09:04 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai Qadeer saheb.Daad qubool karei.n.F.H.Siddiqui
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2011, 08:48:51 PM »
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Mere bhai tumne to Matle me hi khareed liya Ghayel ki zaat ko......kya kahu yaar chota muh badi baat hai bas.
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2011, 04:01:32 AM »
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wah wah wah.... kya baat hai qadeer saheb.. kamaal ki ghazal hai...

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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2011, 05:44:07 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Qadir Sahab
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2011, 03:47:24 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 26, 2011, 01:21:05 PM
Qadeer Bhai, Aap huemsha Se Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek rahe Hai..Aur Aapse Huemsha Yehi Shikayat Rahi hai Ke Aap bahut Kam Likhte Hai...


Iss Ghazal Ki tareef Hum Kya Kare..Har ek A'shaar lajawab!! Apne Dil ki Har Baat kehta Hua..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai

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janab e khawish sahib aadab ,,

apne ghazal ki bharpoor pazirai ki hai ,, mai tashakur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon ,, allah apko umre khizr ata kare .. khush rahen ..

dua go

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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2011, 05:43:26 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 26, 2011, 12:40:45 PM
Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat...

muddat baad apki is mahefil me aana naseeb howa ,, meri tazah o muqtasar si ghazal ap sub hazrat ki nazar umid hai pasand aayegi ..



Kagaz ki kashtiyo.N se Bahelne laga hai ab
Beta bhi muflisi ko samajhne laga hai ab

Purkho.N ke maal pe jo ke magroor tha kabhi
Kashkool haat me liye phirne laga hai ab

Kya maikade ko jaunga mai choor ke usse
shab se hi pahele chaand sanwarne laga hai ab

Aise naseeb paaye hain tone ke kya kaho.N
goodi me tere chaand utarne laga hai aab

Ik baat thi ke jispe kabhi ghar nahi gaaye
Bache ki tarha.N dil kyun machalne laga hai ab..


---------Qadeertoopchi..................


bahut khoob janaab qadeer sb
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2011, 02:46:17 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 26, 2011, 02:04:01 PM
Qadeer Sahab,
Apko parrna ek alag hi ehsaas deta hai..
Zada aya karo..Apse seekhne kuch milega..
Bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye.!

raheem bhai aasalamwalekum ,,,

kaise hain app ?

apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriyah bhai ..apko ghazal pasand aai jaan kar khushi howi .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

apka bhai

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«Reply #11 on: June 05, 2011, 11:19:01 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on May 26, 2011, 02:08:07 PM
qadir sahab……
mashaallah kya ghazal laye hain aap…
aisi umda ghazal ko hum kahte hain janaseen kalaam…

wah janaab…
kya bayaani hai haqikat ki…

esi ghazalen ek parh lu to shayri aur ghazlon ko parhne ka junun barh jaata hai…

aapko, bekarar ji aur ghayal ji ko parhne ka har waqt ji chahta hai…
plz thoda jada time diya kijiye aap…
ye reqst maan lijiye

nirala sahab tasleemat ,,

apke husn-e-zaan ko salam .. apki nazron ka kamal hai baaqi hamari kya bisaat .. apko ghazal pasand aai go ke meri mahenat rang laai .. umid hai mustaqbil me bhi issi tarhan nawazte rahenge .. allah apko do jahan ki barkaton se nawaze..

dua go

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«Reply #12 on: June 05, 2011, 11:25:48 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 26, 2011, 12:40:45 PM
Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat...

muddat baad apki is mahefil me aana naseeb howa ,, meri tazah o muqtasar si ghazal ap sub hazrat ki nazar umid hai pasand aayegi ..



Kagaz ki kashtiyo.N se Bahelne laga hai ab
Beta bhi muflisi ko samajhne laga hai ab

Purkho.N ke maal pe jo ke magroor tha kabhi
Kashkool haat me liye phirne laga hai ab

Kya maikade ko jaunga mai choor ke usse
shab se hi pahele chaand sanwarne laga hai ab

Aise naseeb paaye hain tone ke kya kaho.N
goodi me tere chaand utarne laga hai aab

Ik baat thi ke jispe kabhi ghar nahi gaaye
Bache ki tarha.N dil kyun machalne laga hai ab..


---------Qadeertoopchi..................

BAHUT DARD CHUPAA HAI MATLE MEIN BAHUT BAHUT WAZNI HAI JANAAB PURI GHAZAL MEIN. DAAD QABUL KAREIN
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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2011, 11:46:27 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 26, 2011, 12:40:45 PM
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Kagaz ki kashtiyo.N se Bahelne laga hai ab
Beta bhi muflisi ko samajhne laga hai ab

Purkho.N ke maal pe jo ke magroor tha kabhi
Kashkool haat me liye phirne laga hai ab

Kya maikade ko jaunga mai choor ke usse
shab se hi pahele chaand sanwarne laga hai ab

Aise naseeb paaye hain tone ke kya kaho.N
goodi me tere chaand utarne laga hai aab

Ik baat thi ke jispe kabhi ghar nahi gaaye
Bache ki tarha.N dil kyun machalne laga hai ab..


---------Qadeertoopchi..................

Tamaam Ghazal Hi Bahut Behtreen Bani Hai ... Qaadeer Sahab !
ek ek ashaar taareef ke qaabil hai ... DheroN Daad ... !
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2011, 07:52:45 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 26, 2011, 02:09:04 PM
Bahut achhi ghazal hai Qadeer saheb.Daad qubool karei.n.F.H.Siddiqui

siddiqui sahab aadab ,,

badi nawazish apki .. allah apko khush rakhe ...

dua go

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