Beybas huhaa na hotaa, tumko pukaartaa kyoun?

by abdbundeli on February 16, 2013, 08:12:05 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 16, 2013, 03:47:31 PM »
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Wah...Wah.Bahut achha.Bundeli Sahib.Well done.
Really aapka kalaam bahut achha hai.Dili Mubarakbad.
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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2013, 04:56:50 PM »
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bahut umda sir
Aankhoun key saamney to, aankheyn hazaar aayeen;
Main jinkee khoj mein thaa, pahichaan naheen paayaa!
Toofaan-e-reig aaye, rah mein saraa na payee;
Kaisey tumhain bataauun, kab kisney zulm dhhaayaa?

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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2013, 05:59:26 PM »
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waah, kya kehne, bahut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2013, 07:35:36 PM »
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bhut khub ji
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«Reply #19 on: February 17, 2013, 01:08:30 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 03:47:31 PM
Wah...Wah.Bahut achha.Bundeli Sahib.Well done.
Really aapka kalaam bahut achha hai.Dili Mubarakbad.

Shukriyah, Ashq ji!Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #20 on: February 17, 2013, 01:09:35 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 16, 2013, 04:56:50 PM
bahut umda sir
Aankhoun key saamney to, aankheyn hazaar aayeen;
Main jinkee khoj mein thaa, pahichaan naheen paayaa!
Toofaan-e-reig aaye, rah mein saraa na payee;
Kaisey tumhain bataauun, kab kisney zulm dhhaayaa?

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Shukriyah, Mukesh ji!Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #21 on: February 17, 2013, 01:10:57 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on February 16, 2013, 05:59:26 PM
waah, kya kehne, bahut khoob

Shukriyah, 'LBTD' ji!Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #22 on: February 17, 2013, 01:12:06 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 16, 2013, 07:35:36 PM
bhut khub ji

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Rajan ji!
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«Reply #23 on: February 18, 2013, 04:37:49 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #24 on: February 18, 2013, 08:54:36 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on February 18, 2013, 04:37:49 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Prasad ji!
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