Bhool gaye............................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 03, 2013, 05:25:07 AM
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Jinki chahat meiN hum, zamana bhool gaye
Waada karke aane ka, woh aana bhool gaye

Woh muskurate hue, is tarah door hue ki
Pakda jo mera haath, toh chhudaana bhool gaye

Shiddath se yeh dil, sirf unhi ko chahta hai
Saamne jab woh aaye, unhe bataana bhool gaye

AshkoN ki motiyoN se, apni palkoN ko sajakar
Apne armaaN, apne khwaab, sajaana bhool gaye

Unki yaadoN ko, apne seeney meiN qaid karkey
Itne hue masroof, ki unhe bhulaana bhool gaye

Ho gaye badnaam, saare jahaN meiN "Aqsh"
Likh kar naam hatheli par, mitaana bhool gaye
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2013, 05:35:37 AM »
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just EXCELLENT bravo
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2013, 05:41:43 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 03, 2013, 05:35:37 AM
just EXCELLENT bravo
thank you saini sir
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2013, 05:46:06 AM »
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Unki yaadoN ko, apne seeney meiN qaid karkey
Itne hue masroof, ki unhe bhulaana bhool gaye

Ho gaye badnaam, saare jahaN meiN "Aqsh"
Likh kar naam hatheli par, mitaana bhool gaye
wah wah Aqsh ji lajawaab ,,,ye dono ashaar to kamaaal hai..
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2013, 05:47:41 AM »
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waah waah bahut hi badhiyaan kalam kahi hai
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Quote from: sahal on January 03, 2013, 05:46:06 AM
wah wah Aqsh ji lajawaab ,,,ye dono ashaar to kamaaal hai..
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thank you so much sahal
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Quote from: pritam tripathi on January 03, 2013, 05:47:41 AM
waah waah bahut hi badhiyaan kalam kahi hai

thnx pritam jee
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2013, 05:56:34 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 03, 2013, 05:56:34 AM
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2013, 06:19:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... aapke lekhni ki khoobsuti din pratidin badhti jaa rahi hai... aajkal aapka likhaa padh ke kuch jaadu saa chhaane lagta hai.. bahut achcha likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!



hum bhoolen nahi hain waadaa, naa tumhaaraa saath bhoolen hain
liyaa thaa kabhi apne haathon me, hum naa wo haath bhoolen hain

tumhaare khayaalon me khoye rehte hain, tumhi ko yaad karte hain
tumse judaa hain hum to kyaa, tumhaari naa koi baat bhoolen hain

us barsaat ki raat ko, jab  dar  ke  mere seene se lag gayi thi tum
hum naa to wo barsaat bhoolen hai, naa hi wo raat bhoolen hain

dekha thaa humne bhi jab tum hamare liye wo laal gulaab laaye the
hum naa to wo gulaab bhoolen hain, naa wo mulaaquaat bhoolen hain

aaj bhi intezaar me hain ki wo gulaab tum humein doge zarur
naa hi hum tumko bhoolen hain, naa tumhaaraa saath bhoolen hain

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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2013, 08:45:32 AM »
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Bohat Khub Ashq Jee!!! Aaise hi likhte rahiye!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 03, 2013, 06:19:35 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... aapke lekhni ki khoobsuti din pratidin badhti jaa rahi hai... aajkal aapka likhaa padh ke kuch jaadu saa chhaane lagta hai.. bahut achcha likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!



hum bhoolen nahi hain waadaa, naa tumhaaraa saath bhoolen hain
liyaa thaa kabhi apne haathon me, hum naa wo haath bhoolen hain

tumhaare khayaalon me khoye rehte hain, tumhi ko yaad karte hain
tumse judaa hain hum to kyaa, tumhaari naa koi baat bhoolen hain

us barsaat ki raat ko, jab  dar  ke  mere seene se lag gayi thi tum
hum naa to wo barsaat bhoolen hai, naa hi wo raat bhoolen hain

dekha thaa humne bhi jab tum hamare liye wo laal gulaab laaye the
hum naa to wo gulaab bhoolen hain, naa wo mulaaquaat bhoolen hain

aaj bhi intezaar me hain ki wo gulaab tum humein doge zarur
naa hi hum tumko bhoolen hain, naa tumhaaraa saath bhoolen hain

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waah waah waah hriday jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne. aapki hazir jawabi ka koi jawab nahi. and many many thnx for ur beautiful reply
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on January 03, 2013, 08:45:32 AM
Bohat Khub Ashq Jee!!! Aaise hi likhte rahiye!!

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thank you so much shireen jee
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«Reply #13 on: January 03, 2013, 10:19:03 AM »
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Thank you so much ji.... jaanke bahut achchaa lagaa ki aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on January 03, 2013, 09:52:53 AM
waah waah waah hriday jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne. aapki hazir jawabi ka koi jawab nahi. and many many thnx for ur beautiful reply
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 03, 2013, 10:19:03 AM
Thank you so much ji.... jaanke bahut achchaa lagaa ki aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi....!!!

ur always welcome hriday jee
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