Bhool jana to ab nahi bas mai

by aaina on June 03, 2010, 11:36:16 PM
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zindagi bat gayi do khaano mai
aapki nazro.N ke paymaano mai

jab se deewaangi samjh aayii
hum bhi shamil huway deewaano mai

dam jo bhrte the hum pe marne ka
aate hain ab nazar begaano mai

bhool jana to ab nahi bas mai
teer e dil na rha kamaano mai

tay parindo ko musafat karke
lot jana hai aashiyano mai

haar se keh do door hat jaaye
ab hai aslam teri amaano mai



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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2010, 12:03:30 AM »
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Aslam bhai ,,salamwalekum.. bade din baad koi aisa sher nazar se guzra ke jis pe saari raath wah - ahh karte howe guzar den to bhi sher ki bhar pai nahi hosakti ,,

Tay parindo ko musafath karke !!
Laut jaana hai ashiyano me !!

wah wah bahi wah .. parindon aur ashiyane ka kya qoob istemaal kiya hai yaara ..wah .. ye sher apki ghazal ka kaleja hai bhai....maza aa gaya bada sanjeeda sher hai .. waise ghazal pori sir se paa tak qoob hai .. dad hazir hai qubool karen ..allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2010, 02:09:29 AM »
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  Waah waah Aslam ji,Kya mazedaar ghazal pesh ki hai aapne,har sher lajawaab.Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2010, 06:59:55 AM »
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ASLAM BHAI NA AAH NA WAAH BAS WALLAH HI NIKAL PADA .LAFZON KE SAMANDAR ME KHAYALON KI GOTAKHORI KARKE ASAAR KE JO NAYAB MOTI AAP CHUN LAAYE HAIN BEMISAAL HAIN.
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2010, 07:51:57 AM »
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nice ghazal aslam ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2010, 08:02:54 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Ji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2010, 11:26:14 AM »
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Aslam Bhai bahot purkashish aur purlutf ghazal kahi hai aapne. Bahot khoobsurat kalaam hai aapka. Hazaron daad hazir hain.
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2010, 04:37:07 PM »
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aslam saheb bahot hi umda ghazal iss bazm ko ata ki hai aapne,qadeer bhai ki rae se mei bhi ittefaq karta hoon bahot din baad istehe ka shair nazar nawaz hua..iss haqeer ki jaanib se daad khobol karein,aur bazm ko aisi hi nayaab ghazlaon se roshan karte rahiye.
Quote from: aaina on June 03, 2010, 11:36:16 PM
zindagi bat gayi do khaano mai
aapki nazro.N ke paymaano mai

jab se deewaangi samjh aayii
hum bhi shamil huway deewaano mai

dam jo bhrte the hum pe marne ka
aate hain ab nazar begaano mai

bhool jana to ab nahi bas mai
teer e dil na rha kamaano mai

tay parindo ko musafat karke
lot jana hai aashiyano mai

haar se keh do ke door hat jaaye
ab hai aslam teri amaano mai



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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2010, 09:50:53 AM »
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bahut hi umdaa peshkash hai aaina ji.bahut khoob...
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2010, 12:10:23 PM »
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TAY PARINDO KO MUSAFAT KARKE LAUT JAANA.......BAHUT KHOOB AAINA JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2010, 10:42:20 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 04, 2010, 12:03:30 AM
Aslam bhai ,,salamwalekum.. bade din baad koi aisa sher nazar se guzra ke jis pe saari raath wah - ahh karte howe guzar den to bhi sher ki bhar pai nahi hosakti ,,

Tay parindo ko musafath karke !!
Laut jaana hai ashiyano me !!

wah wah bahi wah .. parindon aur ashiyane ka kya qoob istemaal kiya hai yaara ..wah .. ye sher apki ghazal ka kaleja hai bhai....maza aa gaya bada sanjeeda sher hai .. waise ghazal pori sir se paa tak qoob hai .. dad hazir hai qubool karen ..allah apko khush rakhe ..


apka bhai

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Qadeer bhai nawazish hai, aapki mohabbat hai jo aap aisa sochte haiN yuN hi saath daite rahiye khush rahiye


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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2010, 10:43:21 PM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 04, 2010, 02:09:29 AM
  Waah waah Aslam ji,Kya mazedaar ghazal pesh ki hai aapne,har sher lajawaab.Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne. icon_thumleft


Bhut shukriya Tamanna jii ghazal ki pasndgi ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN



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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2010, 10:44:17 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 04, 2010, 06:59:55 AM
ASLAM BHAI NA AAH NA WAAH BAS WALLAH HI NIKAL PADA .LAFZON KE SAMANDAR ME KHAYALON KI GOTAKHORI KARKE ASAAR KE JO NAYAB MOTI AAP CHUN LAAYE HAIN BEMISAAL HAIN.


Zarranawaazi hai Mamta ji jo aap aisa sochti haiN bhut shukrya in khoobsurat alfaazoN ke liyN


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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2010, 10:44:51 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 04, 2010, 07:51:57 AM
nice ghazal aslam ji Applause Applause Applause

bhut shukrya Sheba jii.........


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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2010, 10:45:33 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 04, 2010, 08:02:54 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Ji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Hosala afzaii ka bhut shukriya Khwaish sahab



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