Bikhrna lajimi tha

by bekarar on June 07, 2011, 02:35:32 AM
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बिन धागे के फूलों का बिखरना लाजिमी था,
राहों मे गिरे तो फिर कुचलना लाजिमी था

मुश्किल मे मदद का मुझे हाथ ना मिला,
खुद आप ही मेरा, संभलना लाजिमी था

हर वक़्त जो मुस्कान को होठों पे रखता है
उस शख्स का तन्हाई मे सिसकना लाज़िमी था,

हर रोज दिखाए जाते थे ढेर दौलत के,
चिकनी थी मिट्टी, वहाँ फिसलना लाजिमी था,

मासूम है औकात  का गुमान नही है,
चाँद के लिए बच्चे का मचलना लाजिमी था,

Bin dhaage ke foolon ka bikhrna lajimi tha,
Rahon me gire to fir kuchlna lajimi tha,

Mushkil me madad ka mujhe haath na mila,
Khud aap hi mera, sambhlna lajimi tha

Har waqt jo muskaan ko hothon pe rakhta hai
Us shakhs ka tanhaai me sisakna lazimi tha,

Har roj dikhaaye jaate the dher doulat ke,
Chikni thi mitti, wahan fislna lajimi tha,

Masoom hai aukaat  ka guman nahi hai,
Chand ke liye bachche ka Machlna lajimi tha
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2011, 02:57:27 AM »
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aapki peshkas ne subah subah dil khus kar dia…
badi muskil hoti hai aapke post par cmnt karne me…
aapka thanx ki itne ache nagme ko parhne ka mauka dia…

kahte hain--safal wo hai jo thaan kar chala safar e zindgi me
……raahon me magar, oonchi chattano se saamna lazimi tha!

thanx bekaraar ji
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wah wah bekararji.. kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. bahut bahut khub....

daad kubul karen.....   Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Wah Wah Bhuat Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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aaj yoindia ke itihas mai ek or nayab nagma jud gaya
bahut khoob bekarar zi
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Bohat Badhiya Peshkash Rahi Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2011, 08:25:37 AM »
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Akhir iss Ghazal Ke Kis A'shaar Ki tareef Karoon..

Har Ek A'shaar mein Samundar Ki Gehrai basi Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2011, 08:53:18 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 07, 2011, 02:35:32 AM
बिन धागे के फूलों का बिखरना लाजिमी था,
राहों मे गिरे तो फिर कुचलना लाजिमी था

मुश्किल मे मदद का मुझे हाथ ना मिला,
खुद आप ही मेरा, संभलना लाजिमी था

हर वक़्त जो मुस्कान को होठों पे रखता है
उस शख्स का तन्हाई मे सिसकना लाज़िमी था,

हर रोज दिखाए जाते थे ढेर दौलत के,
चिकनी थी मिट्टी, वहाँ फिसलना लाजिमी था,

मासूम है औकात  का गुमान नही है,
चाँद के लिए बच्चे का मचलना लाजिमी था,

Bin dhaage ke foolon ka bikhrna lajimi tha,
Rahon me gire to fir kuchlna lajimi tha,

Mushkil me madad ka mujhe haath na mila,
Khud aap hi mera, sambhlna lajimi tha

Har waqt jo muskaan ko hothon pe rakhta hai
Us shakhs ka tanhaai me sisakna lazimi tha,

Har roj dikhaaye jaate the dher doulat ke,
Chikni thi mitti, wahan fislna lajimi tha,

Masoom hai aukaat  ka guman nahi hai,
Chand ke liye bachche ka Machlna lajimi tha




WAAH BEKARAR JI KYA KHOOB KALAAM PESH KIYA HAI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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wxcellent creation bekarar ji...
bht bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2011, 12:45:04 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on June 07, 2011, 02:57:27 AM
aapki peshkas ne subah subah dil khus kar dia…
badi muskil hoti hai aapke post par cmnt karne me…
aapka thanx ki itne ache nagme ko parhne ka mauka dia…

kahte hain--safal wo hai jo thaan kar chala safar e zindgi me
……raahon me magar, oonchi chattano se saamna lazimi tha!

thanx bekaraar ji

bahoot shukriya bhai nir......magar muskil ki koi baat nahi maine tumhe PM bhi kiya tha...baharhaal nice 2 liner from you also.....wah..
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wah wah bekararji.. kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. bahut bahut khub....

daad kubul karen.....   Applause Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot bahoot shukriya manjum ji  Usual Smile
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Bekaraar sahaaB Aadaab!


Waah janab kia kahne aapke fan e sukhan ke Usual Smile
Behad umdaa ashaar kahe hai.. waqai khawahish
jee ne sahiN kaha hai ke kis sher ki tareef ki
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Quote from: bekarar on June 07, 2011, 02:35:32 AM
बिन धागे के फूलों का बिखरना लाजिमी था,
राहों मे गिरे तो फिर कुचलना लाजिमी था

Waah janab kia kahne .... ise kahte hai
shayari... Usual Smile behad umdaa matla kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile         

मुश्किल मे मदद का मुझे हाथ ना मिला,
खुद आप ही मेरा, संभलना लाजिमी था

Bahut khoob.... daad Usual Smile         

हर वक़्त जो मुस्कान को होठों पे रखता है
उस शख्स का तन्हाई मे सिसकना लाज़िमी था,

Kia kahne behad sahiN kaha janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         

हर रोज दिखाए जाते थे ढेर दौलत के,
चिकनी थी मिट्टी, वहाँ फिसलना लाजिमी था,

waah janab waah bahut khoob Usual Smile         

मासूम है औकात  का गुमान नही है,
चाँद के लिए बच्चे का मचलना लाजिमी था,

Aur aik gazab ka sher dil ko chhu gaya.. Usual Smile
Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         


Is dilkash tarikh bakhsh shayari par dil se daad hazir hai Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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Quote from: Manish Kumar Khedawat on June 07, 2011, 08:05:30 AM
aaj yoindia ke itihas mai ek or nayab nagma jud gaya
bahut khoob bekarar zi
 notworthy notworthy notworthy


Bahoot shukriya Manish ji housla badhate rahen.....  Usual Smile
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Bohat Badhiya Peshkash Rahi Bekarar Ji


housla-afzai ke liye shukriya shabbir ji
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