Bikhrna lajimi tha

by bekarar on June 07, 2011, 02:35:32 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2011, 03:34:41 PM »
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Akhir iss Ghazal Ke Kis A'shaar Ki tareef Karoon..

Har Ek A'shaar mein Samundar Ki Gehrai basi Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai icon_salut icon_salut


Khwaish bro....aapki har daad ke liye dil se shukriya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: June 07, 2011, 03:36:18 PM »
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WAAH BEKARAR JI KYA KHOOB KALAAM PESH KIYA HAI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

pasand karne ke liye shukriya....adil ji
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«Reply #17 on: June 07, 2011, 03:37:56 PM »
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wxcellent creation bekarar ji...
bht bht bht khoob...

dili shukriya M-E-I ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: June 07, 2011, 03:40:51 PM »
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Bekaraar sahaaB Aadaab!


Waah janab kia kahne aapke fan e sukhan ke Usual Smile
Behad umdaa ashaar kahe hai.. waqai khawahish
jee ne sahiN kaha hai ke kis sher ki tareef ki
jaye samjh meiN nahi aa raha hai Usual Smile

Behad umdaa kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai Usual Smile
         


is rachna ko bhi aapka pyaar mila...dil se shukriya Parwaaz ji


बिन धागे के फूलों का बिखरना लाजिमी था,
राहों मे गिरे तो फिर कुचलना लाजिमी था

Waah janab kia kahne .... ise kahte hai
shayari... Usual Smile behad umdaa matla kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile         


मुश्किल मे मदद का मुझे हाथ ना मिला,
खुद आप ही मेरा, संभलना लाजिमी था

Bahut khoob.... daad Usual Smile         

हर वक़्त जो मुस्कान को होठों पे रखता है
उस शख्स का तन्हाई मे सिसकना लाज़िमी था,

Kia kahne behad sahiN kaha janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         

हर रोज दिखाए जाते थे ढेर दौलत के,
चिकनी थी मिट्टी, वहाँ फिसलना लाजिमी था,

waah janab waah bahut khoob Usual Smile         

मासूम है औकात  का गुमान नही है,
चाँद के लिए बच्चे का मचलना लाजिमी था,

Aur aik gazab ka sher dil ko chhu gaya.. Usual Smile
Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         



Is dilkash tarikh bakhsh shayari par dil se daad hazir hai Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


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«Reply #19 on: June 08, 2011, 09:01:05 AM »
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Aapka content bahut puracer hai janab bekarar saheb, hazaron daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)

बिन धागे के फूलों का बिखरना लाजिमी था,
राहों मे गिरे तो फिर कुचलना लाजिमी था

मुश्किल मे मदद का मुझे हाथ ना मिला,
खुद आप ही मेरा, संभलना लाजिमी था

हर वक़्त जो मुस्कान को होठों पे रखता है
उस शख्स का तन्हाई मे सिसकना लाज़िमी था,

हर रोज दिखाए जाते थे ढेर दौलत के,
चिकनी थी मिट्टी, वहाँ फिसलना लाजिमी था,

मासूम है औकात  का गुमान नही है,
चाँद के लिए बच्चे का मचलना लाजिमी था,

Bin dhaage ke foolon ka bikhrna lajimi tha,
Rahon me gire to fir kuchlna lajimi tha,

Mushkil me madad ka mujhe haath na mila,
Khud aap hi mera, sambhlna lajimi tha

Har waqt jo muskaan ko hothon pe rakhta hai
Us shakhs ka tanhaai me sisakna lazimi tha,

Har roj dikhaaye jaate the dher doulat ke,
Chikni thi mitti, wahan fislna lajimi tha,

Masoom hai aukaat  ka guman nahi hai,
Chand ke liye bachche ka Machlna lajimi tha

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