Bin khuntey ke jo bandhi hogi

by livingbytheday on January 24, 2013, 05:44:41 PM
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Bin khuntey ke jo bandhi hogi
Jaane kaisi wo bebasi hogi

Phir koi kar rahaa wafaa ke waade
Shayad isii baat par hasi hogi

Usko anjaam ka intezaar sa hai
Gehre duldul mein wo fasi hogi

Faadkar dekh lo zameen ke andar
Aaj bhi seeta koi dhasi hogi

Chaawal ke daane se koun fasta hai
Koi nadaan hi fasi hogi

Chamkti aankhon se jo shehr ko gaya
Paagal, uski kya waapsi hogi

Deepak” kar leta hai halaato se souda
Kuch toh uski bhi bebasi hogi
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2013, 05:46:59 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2013, 06:48:23 PM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad umdaa aur gehre khayaalaat ko
khoob lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne... aaghaaz se lekar anjaam
tak kalaam ke sabhi ashar qabil e daad hai janab... Usual Smile

Har ashaar par hazaaroN dili daad qabul kijiye...
Aur Matle ke liye toH bus tareef ko lafz hi nahi hai jee bus
waaH ke siwaa... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2013, 11:38:10 PM »
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Bahuuuuuuuut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe "Sita koi dhansi hogi" wala sher kaafi achha raha.
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 01:34:49 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 02:29:16 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak ji keep it up
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2013, 08:41:05 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on January 24, 2013, 05:44:41 PM
Bin khuntey ke jo bandhi hogi
Jaane kaisi wo bebasi hogi
Phir koi kar rahaa wafaa ke waade
Shayad isii baat par hasi hogi

Usko anjaam ka intezaar sa hai
Gehre duldul mein wo fasi hogi

Faadkar dekh lo zameen ke andar
Aaj bhi seeta koi dhasi hogi

Chaawal ke daane se koun fasta hai
Koi nadaan hi fasi hogi

Chamkti aankhon se jo shehr ko gaya
Paagal, uski kya waapsi hogi

Deepak” kar leta hai halaato se souda
Kuch toh uski bhi bebasi hogi


bahoot bahoot khoob deepakji
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 11:48:35 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2013, 03:36:59 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on January 24, 2013, 05:46:59 PM
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2013, 03:38:12 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 24, 2013, 06:48:23 PM
Deepak Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad umdaa aur gehre khayaalaat ko
khoob lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne... aaghaaz se lekar anjaam
tak kalaam ke sabhi ashar qabil e daad hai janab... Usual Smile

Har ashaar par hazaaroN dili daad qabul kijiye...
Aur Matle ke liye toH bus tareef ko lafz hi nahi hai jee bus
waaH ke siwaa... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

thank you, itne pyaare shabdo ke liye
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2013, 03:39:01 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob livingbytheday jee.Dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2013, 02:52:56 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 24, 2013, 11:38:10 PM
Bahuuuuuuuut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe "Sita koi dhansi hogi" wala sher kaafi achha raha.

thank you sir ji, thank you
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 25, 2013, 01:34:49 AM
wah wah

thank you, thank you
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 25, 2013, 02:29:16 AM
bahut khoob deepak ji keep it up

thank you sir
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2013, 02:54:54 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob
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