Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

by abdbundeli on December 14, 2008, 03:51:26 PM
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Kyaa kaheyn ham? Kuchh kahaa jaataa naneen!
Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

Hijra hai yah, yaa ki, qaid-e-zindagee?
Ab, akeylaapan sahaa jaataa naheen!
 
Kahaan ley pahunchey mujhey ab, naakhudaa?
Bahr mein, yoon hee bahaa jaataa naheen!

Patah hotaa? Aastaan kee khoj mein,
Usee koochey baarhaa jaataa naheen!

Gar rahey hotey yaheen par tum kaheen:
Baag yeh, kyoun lahlahaa jaataa naheen?

Koh dhhahtey reig key, hotey rawaan:
Paikar-e-dam* hoon, dhhahaa jaataa naheen!

Ab, ‘abd’, ham kyaa kaheyn? Laachaar hain!
Bahut hai, par, kuchh  kahaa jaataa naneen!!
* Rooh kaa jism
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2009, 03:43:23 PM »
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MashaAllah Kya khoob likha hai.. bahoot Bahoot Pyaari Ghazal hai ABD ji.. bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2009, 03:47:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 25, 2009, 03:43:23 PM
MashaAllah Kya khoob likha hai.. bahoot Bahoot Pyaari Ghazal hai ABD ji.. bahoot khoob!
Thanks Sophi ji!
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2009, 04:24:02 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 14, 2008, 03:51:26 PM
Kyaa kaheyn ham? Kuchh kahaa jaataa naneen!
Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

Hijra hai yah, yaa ki, qaid-e-zindagee?
Ab, akeylaapan sahaa jaataa naheen!
 
Kahaan ley pahunchey mujhey ab, naakhudaa?
Bahr mein, yoon hee bahaa jaataa naheen!

Patah hotaa? Aastaan kee khoj mein,
Usee koochey baarhaa jaataa naheen!

Gar rahey hotey yaheen par tum kaheen:
Baag yeh, kyoun lahlahaa jaataa naheen?

Koh dhhahtey reig key, hotey rawaan:
Paikar-e-dam* hoon, dhhahaa jaataa naheen!

Ab, ‘abd’, ham kyaa kaheyn? Laachaar hain!
Bahut hai, par, kuchh  kahaa jaataa naneen!!
* Rooh kaa jism
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Bohot hi Khoob Babu Ji...Dil ke behad qareeb lagi ye ghazal !!
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2009, 04:26:22 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2009, 02:50:12 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 14, 2008, 03:51:26 PM
Kyaa kaheyn ham? Kuchh kahaa jaataa naneen!
Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

Hijra hai yah, yaa ki, qaid-e-zindagee?
Ab, akeylaapan sahaa jaataa naheen!
 
Kahaan ley pahunchey mujhey ab, naakhudaa?
Bahr mein, yoon hee bahaa jaataa naheen!

Patah hotaa? Aastaan kee khoj mein,
Usee koochey baarhaa jaataa naheen!

Gar rahey hotey yaheen par tum kaheen:
Baag yeh, kyoun lahlahaa jaataa naheen?

Koh dhhahtey reig key, hotey rawaan:
Paikar-e-dam* hoon, dhhahaa jaataa naheen!

Ab, ‘abd’, ham kyaa kaheyn? Laachaar hain!
Bahut hai, par, kuchh  kahaa jaataa naneen!!
* Rooh kaa jism
                              - abd bundeli


Kyaa kaheyn ham? Kuchh kahaa jaataa naneen!
Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

Wah wah waaaah... bahut bahut accha laga padkar.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2009, 02:53:33 AM »
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Mil kya gaye hum tum sanam, sab ko milan ye khal gaya
Kehne ko toh sab khil gaye, dil her kisi ka jal jaya

Dono sada chup the magar, dil ki lagi chup na saki
Aankhein bayan ker gayi, yu raj dil ka khul gaya

Pyar jalka diya tumne, dil per asar hona hi tha
Laakhon jatan karti rahi, fir b erada tal gaya

Ab laa rahi hai rang vo, pichle janam ki dosti
Ab her gadi ka saat hai, jalta rahe jo jal gaya

Ker yaad vo wada zara, tha jo kabhi humne milkar kiya
Gar chah na hoti tujhe mujhse, kyu fir yahan mil gaya?

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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2009, 04:04:55 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 26, 2009, 04:24:02 PM
Bohot hi Khoob Babu Ji...Dil ke behad qareeb lagi ye ghazal !!
Thanks a lot, Celmira!
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2009, 04:06:55 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2009, 04:26:22 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2009, 04:09:56 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 27, 2009, 02:50:12 AM

Kyaa kaheyn ham? Kuchh kahaa jaataa naneen!
Bin tumhaarey, ab rahaa jaataa naheen!!

Wah wah waaaah... bahut bahut accha laga padkar.  Thumbs UP



Thanks a lot, Roja!
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2009, 04:23:27 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 27, 2009, 02:53:33 AM

Mil kya gaye hum tum sanam, sab ko milan ye khal gaya
Kehne ko toh sab khil gaye, dil her kisi ka jal jaya

Dono sada chup the magar, dil ki lagi chup na saki
Aankhein bayan ker gayi, yu raj dil ka khul gaya

Pyar jalka diya tumne, dil per asar hona hi tha
Laakhon jatan karti rahi, fir b erada tal gaya

Ab laa rahi hai rang vo, pichle janam ki dosti
Ab her gadi ka saat hai, jalta rahe jo jal gaya

Ker yaad vo wada zara, tha jo kabhi humne milkar kiya
Gar chah na hoti tujhe mujhse, kyu fir yahan mil gaya?

 Usual Smile



Aaj jyoun hee gulshan-e-mahfil gayaa:
Khizaan mein bhi gul-e-gulbun khil gayaa!
Jisey paaney key liye beytaab thaa;
Justjoo thee, par, yakaayak mil gayaa!!

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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2009, 04:42:38 AM »
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 Wah wah Abd ji and Roja ji bahut khoob,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2009, 05:02:53 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 27, 2009, 04:42:38 AM
Wah wah Abd ji and Roja ji bahut khoob,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.
 icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Madhu!
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«Reply #13 on: September 10, 2009, 03:02:49 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 27, 2009, 04:23:27 AM


Aaj jyoun hee gulshan-e-mahfil gayaa:
Khizaan mein bhi gul-e-gulbun khil gayaa!
Jisey paaney key liye beytaab thaa;
Justjoo thee, par, yakaayak mil gayaa!!

                          - abd bundeli

Daur-jawani apna to aise guzer gaya
Jaise hawa ka jhonka edhar se udhar gaya..

Vo josh-e-jawani tha ek bersaat ka tufaa.n
Kuch dher uthal-puthal ki, aur fir utar gaya..
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