Binaa patey key, teyrey paas mein aauun kaisey?

by abdbundeli on December 24, 2008, 09:23:53 AM
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Binaa patey key, teyrey paas mein aauun kaisey?
Yahee bataa dey, tujhey paas bulaauun kaisey!!

Milee naheen hai nazar; fir bhi, mein hun deewaanah!
Yaheen kaheen hai: magar, saamney paauun kaisey?

Mujh ko gheyrey huye hai, kuchh ajeeb-see khushboo;
Ajeeb haal hai meyraa, pai bataauun kaisey?

Eik aawaaz-see rawaan hai baad-e-magrib mein;
Mein sun rahaa hun ansunee ko, sunaauun kaisey?

Qareeb hai! Mujhey patah hai; par, nigaahoun mein,
Mein binaa deed-e-asl, tujh ko bithhaauun kaisey?
 
Dour-e-parwaaz hai, jaanaa hai bahut door mujhey:
Wazn bhaaree waqaar-e-rooh uthhaauun kaisey?

Nikal parhaa hun akeyley safar pai aaj, ‘abd’,
Raah-e-aamaaj jaantaa naheen, jaauun kaisey?
- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2008, 09:28:23 AM »
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Abd Ji,

Bahut khoob ! Applause

Very nice thoughts...well expressed Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2008, 10:17:53 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on December 24, 2008, 09:28:23 AM
Abd Ji,
Bahut khoob ! Applause
Very nice thoughts...well expressed Thumbs UP
Thanks, you liked it Rajbir ji! Your comments have delighted me!
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2008, 02:12:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 24, 2008, 09:23:53 AM
Binaa patey key, teyrey paas mein aauun kaisey?
Yahee bataa dey, tujhey paas bulaauun kaisey!!

Milee naheen hai nazar; fir bhi, mein hun deewaanah!
Yaheen kaheen hai: magar, saamney paauun kaisey?

Mujh ko gheyrey huye hai, kuchh ajeeb-see khushboo;
Ajeeb haal hai meyraa, pai bataauun kaisey?

Eik aawaaz-see rawaan hai baad-e-magrib mein;
Mein sun rahaa hun ansunee ko, sunaauun kaisey?

Qareeb hai! Mujhey patah hai; par, nigaahoun mein,
Mein binaa deed-e-asl, tujh ko bithhaauun kaisey?
 
Dour-e-parwaaz hai, jaanaa hai bahut door mujhey:
Wazn bhaaree waqaar-e-rooh uthhaauun kaisey?

Nikal parhaa hun akeyley safar pai aaj, ‘abd’,
Raah-e-aamaaj jaantaa naheen, jaauun kaisey?
- abd bundeli


Bahut Khoobsurat... bahut hi pyaara kalaam hai Abd Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2008, 02:39:53 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 24, 2008, 02:12:27 PM
Bahut Khoobsurat... bahut hi pyaara kalaam hai Abd Ji.. Applause
Thanks a lot, Mahiya ji!
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2008, 04:13:22 AM »
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bhaut badiya-----abdji

is kadar tu hain mere khawbo-khayalo mein,
teri khushboo mehesus karta hun mein.
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2008, 05:15:55 AM »
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Quote from: cara on December 25, 2008, 04:13:22 AM
bhaut badiya-----abdji
is kadar tu hain mere khawbo-khayalo mein,
teri khushboo mehesus karta hun mein.
Shukriyah cara ji!
Jhonkey mein hawaa key har, teyrey jism ki khushboo hai;
Par too yahaan naheen hai, aankhoun mein justjoo hai!
Yeh kyaa huaa hai mujh ko, is par bhi, har lamhey mein,
Lagtaa hai, dost meyrey, har simt too hi too hai!
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2008, 05:44:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 24, 2008, 09:23:53 AM
Binaa patey key, teyrey paas mein aauun kaisey?
Yahee bataa dey, tujhey paas bulaauun kaisey!!

Milee naheen hai nazar; fir bhi, mein hun deewaanah!
Yaheen kaheen hai: magar, saamney paauun kaisey?

Mujh ko gheyrey huye hai, kuchh ajeeb-see khushboo;
Ajeeb haal hai meyraa, pai bataauun kaisey?

Eik aawaaz-see rawaan hai baad-e-magrib mein;
Mein sun rahaa hun ansunee ko, sunaauun kaisey?

Qareeb hai! Mujhey patah hai; par, nigaahoun mein,
Mein binaa deed-e-asl, tujh ko bithhaauun kaisey?
 
Dour-e-parwaaz hai, jaanaa hai bahut door mujhey:
Wazn bhaaree waqaar-e-rooh uthhaauun kaisey?

Nikal parhaa hun akeyley safar pai aaj, ‘abd’,
Raah-e-aamaaj jaantaa naheen, jaauun kaisey?
- abd bundeli


Abd Ji,

Bahut hii khoob, eik aur Behtreen Kalaam!!

Wah Wah Wah  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2008, 06:23:51 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 25, 2008, 05:44:11 AM
Abd Ji,
Bahut hii khoob, eik aur Behtreen Kalaam!!
Wah Wah Wah  Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Deepati ji!
Deytaa hai shamma roshnee; chaahey jahaan ho woh!
Mein khush hoon, aa gayaa hoon nazar roshnee ko mein!!
Hotaa mein shamma kaash, to, aatish mein sulagtaa;
Achchhaa hai, aa gayaa hoon nazar roshnee ko mein!!
                                      - abd bundeli
                                 
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2008, 06:59:01 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 25, 2008, 06:23:51 AM
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Deepati ji!
Deytaa hai shamma roshnee; chaahey jahaan ho woh!
Mein khush hoon, aa gayaa hoon nazar roshnee ko mein!!
Hotaa mein shamma kaash, to, aatish mein sulagtaa;
Achchhaa hai, aa gayaa hoon nazar roshnee ko mein!!
                                      - abd bundeli
                                 


Wah Wah Kya baat hai ABD Ji  Usual Smile You are most welcome!!

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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2008, 05:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 25, 2008, 06:59:01 PM
Wah Wah Kya baat hai ABD Ji  Usual Smile You are most welcome!!
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Dhanyawaad Deepati ji! Aisee hi krupa banaaye rakhiyegaa!
Sundar shadaanjali key liye aabhaaree hoon!
                          - abd bundeli
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