Bohat dhuaa hoga.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on October 17, 2010, 04:22:27 AM
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Mera nahi to kisi ka nahi hua hoga
Woh aag hai ho jaha bhi bohat dhuaa hoga


Khayaal uska nahi koi bhoolne jaisa
Jo janta hai usey woh yeh keh raha hoga


Dua kare hai na koi kare hai zidd rabb se
Yaha nahi jo mila woh waha ataa hoga


Mere khayaal mere sher yeh meri batein
Bhala kare na kisi ka to sab bura hoga


Aaj hasti hui dekhi jo muflisi humne
Yaad aaya koi imaa.N kahi beeka hoga


Nahi mumkin nazar aaye koi amal behtar
Kaam achchca to kitabo me bas padha hoga


Beadab belihazz hai zakhm Ghayel ke
Path_tharo se yeh zamane me suna hoga


Sajid Ghayel
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2010, 12:11:49 PM »
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Janab Ghayal Sahab Aadaab!

Bade dino bad aapki koi nayi kalaam nazar nawaaz huyi.. Usual Smile
Aap behad achcha likhate hai is baat meiN bhi koi shak nahi
Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai... Usual Smile

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on October 17, 2010, 04:22:27 AM
Mera nahi to kisi ka nahi hua hoga
Woh aag hai ho jaha bhi bohat dhuaa hoga

Janab mazzart chaheNge aapka yeH umdaa khayaal humare zaheN meiN jagaa hi nahi bana paya shayad hamari kam akhali hai...
Is par aapki Wazahat chaheNge

Khayaal uska nahi koi bhoolne jaisa
Jo janta hai usey woh yeh keh raha hoga

Achcha sher hai janab daad....

Dua kare hai na koi kare hai zidd rabb se
Yaha nahi jo mila woh waha ataa hoga

Beshak.... InshaAllah dene wali zaat uski hai woh zarur deNga... Achcha sher hai janab daad... Hamare khayaal se aur bhi behtar ho skata tha.. Khair..  Is it SO!

Mere khayaal mere sher yeh meri batein
Bhala kare na kisi ka to sab bura hoga

Hmmm janab yeh waqai khayaali pulaav hai tongue3
KauN Jaane kia hoNga...... Wohi hoNga jo manzure khuda hoNga

Aaj hasti hui dekhi jo muflisi humne
Yaad aaya koi imaa.N kahi beeka hoga

Masha Allah Janab aapke aise khayaaloN ke to hum kayal hai ...... Bahot umdaa... Bahut khoob Daad daad daad

Nahi mumkin nazar aaye koi amal behtar
Kaam achchca to kitabo me bas padha hoga

Hmmm Shayad kuch logoN per yeH baat pad sakti hai...
Sher achcha hai daad .. Usual Smile

Beadab belihazz hai zakhm Ghayel ke
Path_tharo se yeh zamane me suna hoga

Maqte ke dusre misre se kuch sher samjh ke bahar hua humare..
Shayad aap zamane "ne" likhana chah rahe the spelling mistake hua ho... Usual Smile
Agar aisa hai to sher kafi achcha hai daad.. Usual Smile

Sajid Ghayel

Aik achchi koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye........
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2010, 07:40:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2010, 08:27:13 AM »
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sajid bhaiii..dil se dheeeer saaari daad hazir e mehfil hain apke liyeeeee..

kubool farmaiye...

bade khubsurat sher kahe hain apne .....

likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2010, 10:56:02 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 17, 2010, 12:11:49 PM
Janab Ghayal Sahab Aadaab!

Bade dino bad aapki koi nayi kalaam nazar nawaaz huyi.. Usual Smile
Aap behad achcha likhate hai is baat meiN bhi koi shak nahi
Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai... Usual Smile

Aik achchi koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye........
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile

Parwaaz saheb aap jaldbazi na kare aur dobara padhe....sher ki wazahat sher ko kamzor kar deti hai. Sher likhne se kaiee zydaa zaroori hai sher ko samajhna. Aap ek baar dobara koshish kare mujhe ummeed hai mujhe samjhana nahi padega.....
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2010, 01:35:09 PM »
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Sajid jee ek behtareen gazal pesh karne ke liye dil se daad .....khas tour par...

aaj haNsti hui dekhi jo muflisi humne
yaad aayaa koi imaaN bikaa hogaa

kyaa baat hai ! badi hee gahari or maarke kee baat kah gaye aap.haqeeqat me kadwa sach shairi ka chola pahan saamne aa khada huaa ho jaise.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2011, 08:11:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on October 17, 2010, 04:22:27 AM
Mera nahi to kisi ka nahi hua hoga
Woh aag hai ho jaha bhi bohat dhuaa hoga


Khayaal uska nahi koi bhoolne jaisa
Jo janta hai usey woh yeh keh raha hoga


Dua kare hai na koi kare hai zidd rabb se
Yaha nahi jo mila woh waha ataa hoga


Mere khayaal mere sher yeh meri batein
Bhala kare na kisi ka to sab bura hoga


Aaj hasti hui dekhi jo muflisi humne
Yaad aaya koi imaa.N kahi beeka hoga


Nahi mumkin nazar aaye koi amal behtar
Kaam achchca to kitabo me bas padha hoga


Beadab belihazz hai zakhm Ghayel ke
Path_tharo se yeh zamane me suna hoga


Sajid Ghayel

bahut khoob sajid sahab
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