Boo-e-gul ka pata to sabaa degi. .............PWFS

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Unki jafaa ki misaal waafa degi,
Boo-e-gul ka pata to sabaa degi.

Chupa rahe jo raaj-e-ulfat tum,
Nigaah nigaah se sab bataa degi.

Dast-e-shaaki se piya jisne zahar,
Na kaam usko duwa na dawaa degi.

Dafn kar aaye the jo awaaz meri,
Be-kasi me wo thujko sadaa degi.

Gaafilan thama tumne jiska daman,
Jindagi wo bhi tumko dagaa degi.

Daba rakhi jo aatish barsoN 'pankaj',
Dekhna ek roz tujhko jalaa degi.

(PWFS 30/07/2012)
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2012, 05:53:49 AM »
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pankaj ji. bahut achhi ghazal inayat ki hai .
bahut mubarakaad aur daad.
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 06:49:25 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on July 30, 2012, 05:40:39 AM
Unki jafaa ki misaal waafa degi,
Boo-e-gul ka pata to sabaa degi.

Chupa rahe jo raaj-e-ulfat tum,
Nigaah nigaah se sab bataa degi.

Dast-e-shaaki se piya jisne zahar,
Na kaam usko duwa na dawaa degi.

Dafn kar aaye the jo awaaz meri,
Be-kasi me wo thujko sadaa degi.

Gaafilan thama tumne jiska haath,
Jindagi wo bhi tumko dagaa degi.

Daba rakhi jo aatish barsoN 'pankaj',
Dekhna ek roz tujhko jalaa degi.

(PWFS 30/07/2012)
 


naaaaaaice ghazal. janaab ek baat kahna hai. aap khoobsoorat alfaaz istemaal karte hain to zara  'j' aur 'z' bhi likhne ka ehtemaam rakhein Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2012, 07:13:37 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on July 30, 2012, 05:40:39 AM
Unki jafaa ki misaal waafa degi,
Boo-e-gul ka pata to sabaa degi.

Chupa rahe jo raaj-e-ulfat tum,
Nigaah nigaah se sab bataa degi.

Dast-e-shaaki se piya jisne zahar,
Na kaam usko duwa na dawaa degi.

Dafn kar aaye the jo awaaz meri,
Be-kasi me wo thujko sadaa degi.

Gaafilan thama tumne jiska haath,
Jindagi wo bhi tumko dagaa degi.

Daba rakhi jo aatish barsoN 'pankaj',
Dekhna ek roz tujhko jalaa degi.

(PWFS 30/07/2012)
 

. bohut khoobsurat ghazal hai, bas J aur Z ka ehatram kijiye, Dheeroon Daaad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2012, 07:17:31 AM »
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baht badhiya ji bahut hi badhiya
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2012, 07:37:10 AM »
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bahut hee shaandaar peshkash pankaj ji dheron daad aur badhaai
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2012, 08:29:34 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi umda gazal..... pankaj ji bahut khub dhero daad qabool faramaye

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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 10:31:30 AM »
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Bhoot bahoot pyaaree gazal
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waah...waah...Pankaj Ji bahur khoob, saare sher ek se badkar ek hain aur makta to bahut kamaal ban pada hai, dili mubaarakbaad aur dheron daad
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 30, 2012, 05:53:49 AM
pankaj ji. bahut achhi ghazal inayat ki hai .
bahut mubarakaad aur daad.
Bahut bahut sukriya Siddiqui Sir isi tarah apna pyaar aur ashirvaad banaey rakiye....
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 05:08:57 PM »
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Bahut umda ghazal kahi hai Pankaj bhai aapne. Waah waah, maza aa gaya padh kar. Ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2012, 05:20:55 PM »
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Bahut shaandaar ghajal inayat ki hai..

bahut bahut khoob Pankaj jee.
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 30, 2012, 06:49:25 AM

naaaaaaice ghazal. janaab ek baat kahna hai. aap khoobsoorat alfaaz istemaal karte hain to zara  'j' aur 'z' bhi likhne ka ehtemaam rakhein Usual Smile Usual Smile
Sukriya KA ji....... J aur Z ka age se khyaal rakhunga...
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2012, 05:27:01 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on July 30, 2012, 05:40:39 AM
Unki jafaa ki misaal waafa degi,
Boo-e-gul ka pata to sabaa degi.

Chupa rahe jo raaj-e-ulfat tum,
Nigaah nigaah se sab bataa degi.

Dast-e-shaaki se piya jisne zahar,
Na kaam usko duwa na dawaa degi.

Dafn kar aaye the jo awaaz meri,
Be-kasi me wo thujko sadaa degi.

Gaafilan thama tumne jiska daman,
Jindagi wo bhi tumko dagaa degi.

Daba rakhi jo aatish barsoN 'pankaj',
Dekhna ek roz tujhko jalaa degi.

(PWFS 30/07/2012)
 
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Quote from: Aarish on July 30, 2012, 07:13:37 AM
. bohut khoobsurat ghazal hai, bas J aur Z ka ehatram kijiye, Dheeroon Daaad qubool kijiye
Aarish ji bahut bahut bahut sukriya....
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