BULBUL PE , BARG-O-GUL PE .................... HASAN

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Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai

Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kiye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai

Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai


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Barg o gul = phool, patti ; Dasht o Daman = jangle,desert hills ;
Shaheen=a high flying bird ; dahan = lips ; Daar o rasan = phaansi ka phanda ;
Hubb e watan = desh prem ; baad e marg = after death ; Ja-namaz=Namaz parhne ki carpet
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2014, 06:19:37 PM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह.....बहुत ही खूबसूरत अंदाज़ और बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....

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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2014, 06:25:05 PM »
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MAhutram Har Aitbaar ghazal laaiq-e-sitaaish hai meri dad qubool karen ..Allah apko mazeed nawaze ..Apko parhne ka mazah apna hai ...bila shuba apke miýaari kalamo'n se humse naumooz ko seekhne ko milta hai ...Hazaron dad

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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2014, 06:26:28 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2014, 06:35:02 PM »
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Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai

Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai

Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai


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Barg o gul = phool, patti ; Dasht o Daman = jangle,desert hills ;
Shaheen=a high flying bird ; dahan = lips ; Daar o rasan = phaansi ka phanda ;
Hubb e watan = desh prem ; baad e marg = after death

Waaaah waaaaaah bahut khoob maza aa gaya...Hasan Sahab kya kahne....

"Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
 Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai"
 

bahut khoob.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2014, 06:58:11 PM »
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Kya baat he...
Wahh !!
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2014, 08:20:33 PM »
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bahut khoob Hasan ji sabhi ashaar bahut achhe hain.par ye behad pasand aaye

Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2014, 09:36:11 PM »
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Aadaab Sir
bahut bahut umdah Sir
eik se badhkar eik shér.. lajavaab ghazal
Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai

bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2014, 07:59:18 AM »
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mashaa allah bahut khoob dili mubarak baad qubool keejiye bhaisaheb
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2014, 02:15:45 PM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह.....बहुत ही खूबसूरत अंदाज़ और बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....

दाद.....दाद.....दाद.....और...................दाद.......

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Shukria , nawazish amit ji . Salamat rahye.
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2014, 05:00:46 PM »
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Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai

Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kiye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai
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Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai

Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai


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Barg o gul = phool, patti ; Dasht o Daman = jangle,desert hills ;
Shaheen=a high flying bird ; dahan = lips ; Daar o rasan = phaansi ka phanda ;
Hubb e watan = desh prem ; baad e marg = after death ; Ja-namaz=Namaz parhne ki carpet


boss!!!!!!!!!!!

RAU kee bhee bisaat nahin kee chaar chaand lagaa sake per as a mark of appreciation de rsahaa hoo.NNNNNNNNN---RAU KE LIYE 15HRS WAIT KARNA HAI

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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2014, 12:14:34 AM »
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MAhutram Har Aitbaar ghazal laaiq-e-sitaaish hai meri dad qubool karen ..Allah apko mazeed nawaze ..Apko parhne ka mazah apna hai ...bila shuba apke miýaari kalamo'n se humse naumooz ko seekhne ko milta hai ...Hazaron dad

dua go

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Shukria , Qadeer saheb . Inayat ki aapne itne khubsurat alfaaz se houla afzai ki . Tah e dil se duaaein .
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2014, 02:50:17 AM »
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Lajawaab Ghazal Sir!!

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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2014, 11:27:20 AM »
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Wah Hasan SahibBahut Shaandaar Gazal Likhee Aapne, Mabarikbaad. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Thanks Surindarn ji ki aap nne ghaal pasand ki aur housla barhaya.Tah e dil se mashkoor hoon.
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2014, 01:12:43 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!

RAU kee bhee bisaat nahin kee chaar chaand lagaa sake per as a mark of appreciation de rsahaa hoo.NNNNNNNNN---RAU KE LIYE 15HRS WAIT KARNA HAI

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