BULBUL PE , BARG-O-GUL PE .................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: May 04, 2014, 03:59:10 PM »
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Hassan Sabah ko khaaksaar ka aadaab. Ek arsey ke baad rehguzaar-e-sukhan mein paanv rakkhe, aur us mein aapke naqsh e pa dekh kar waheen thahar gaya, aur aapkee khaama se mile faiz ka lutf aise utha liya. Ye ghazal aisi hai jaise ek sangmarmar ki moorat par resham ka pairahan. Sabhi aashaar pur jalwa hain, aur in aashaar par to daad dete hue ruka naheen gaya... Dheron duaon ke saath....zarraa

Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kiye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka 
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai
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«Reply #16 on: May 04, 2014, 06:13:01 PM »
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Waaaah waaaaaah bahut khoob maza aa gaya...Hasan Sahab kya kahne....

"Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
 Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai"
 

bahut khoob.....Raqeeb Lucknowi

Satish ji , Ghazal pasand karne aur Housla afzai k liye tahh e dil se mamnoon o mashkoor hoon . Khush rahye .
 
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«Reply #17 on: May 04, 2014, 10:47:15 PM »
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Kya baat he...
Wahh !!
Thanks a lot Nakul ji . Khush rahye.
Bazm mein aapka isteqbaal hai.
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2014, 12:21:12 PM »
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bahut khoob Hasan ji sabhi ashaar bahut achhe hain.par ye behad pasand aaye

Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Suresh ji , Housla afzai k liye kaise shukria ada karoon . Bus dheron duaaein
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2014, 06:06:00 PM »
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Aadaab Sir
bahut bahut umdah Sir
eik se badhkar eik shér.. lajavaab ghazal
Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai

bahut bahut mubarakbaad
Chiragh saheb tahe dil se mashkoor aur
aapke haq mein duago hoon.
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2014, 06:12:48 PM »
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Waaahhh bahut hi umda kaha janab aapne...
dil chu gaya har sher aapka...
bahut hi umdaa peshkas... subhanallahhh...
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2014, 07:54:57 PM »
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Bulbul pe , Barg - o - Gul pe , na Dasht - o - Daman pe hai
Shaheen ki nigaah to seedhi Gagan pe hai
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Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai
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Ukta ke Zeest se kiye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai
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Hubb - e - Watan ka mujh ko sabaq dene waale Sun
Meri to Jaa - Namaaz bhi Khaak - e - Watan pe hai
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:wah wah wah.......!
Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))tauba tauba main bhala aisa kyon karoon!
Nazrein waheen pe jaa ke thaher jaati hain meri
Chhota sa eik til jo tumhaare Dahan pe hai
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Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai


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Barg o gul = phool, patti ; Dasht o Daman = jangle,desert hills ;
Shaheen=a high flying bird ; dahan = lips ; Daar o rasan = phaansi ka phanda ;
Hubb e watan = desh prem ; baad e marg = after death ; Ja-namaz=Namaz parhne ki carpet


fazal sahab iss khoobsoorat noak-jhhok bhare ghazal ko aainda rau doon gi aap saff mein hain icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2014, 08:45:35 PM »
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RAU HAZIR HAI AAPKI IS SHAHKAAR GHAZAL PER US WAQT NA DE SAKA SO AB DE RAHA HUN
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«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2014, 10:08:54 PM »
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mashaa allah bahut khoob dili mubarak baad qubool keejiye bhaisaheb
Saini saheb , tah ed dil se hukria aur adaaab
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2014, 11:38:04 AM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!

RAU kee bhee bisaat nahin kee chaar chaand lagaa sake per as a mark of appreciation de rsahaa hoo.NNNNNNNNN---RAU KE LIYE 15HRS WAIT KARNA HAI

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Shukriya Mohabbat k liye aur Rau ke waade k liye.
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«Reply #25 on: May 07, 2014, 11:41:00 AM »
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Lajawaab Ghazal Sir!!

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Shukria, bahut bahut duaaein Shireen ji.
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«Reply #26 on: May 07, 2014, 05:29:35 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!

rau
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thanks .... Waada nibhaane k liye
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«Reply #27 on: May 07, 2014, 06:05:41 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!

rau
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thanks .... Waada nibhaane k liye
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«Reply #28 on: May 08, 2014, 12:17:13 AM »
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Hassan Sabah ko khaaksaar ka aadaab. Ek arsey ke baad rehguzaar-e-sukhan mein paanv rakkhe, aur us mein aapke naqsh e pa dekh kar waheen thahar gaya, aur aapkee khaama se mile faiz ka lutf aise utha liya. Ye ghazal aisi hai jaise ek sangmarmar ki moorat par resham ka pairahan. Sabhi aashaar pur jalwa hain, aur in aashaar par to daad dete hue ruka naheen gaya... Dheron duaon ke saath....zarraa

Sazish na hoti apnon ki to dabb gai thhi baat
Har Shakhs ke jo aaj Zubaan - o - Dahan pe hai

Ukta ke Zeest se kiye Ilzaam sab qubool
Abb Mout kaisi paa'oon ye Daar - o - Rasan pe hai

Izhaar baad - e - Marg kiya hai yuun Pyaar ka
Joode se Phool le ke sajaaya Kafan pe hai

Saazish meiN kaamyab huay aise sab Raqeeb
Ilzaam - e - Bewafaai bhi aaya ' Hasan ' pe hai

Zarra saheb , Adaab o Tasleemaat. Aap koo e ghareebaan se guzre aur apni mohabbaton se nawaza , kaise shukria ada karoon . Aap jaise rafeeqaan e Bazm se hi yahaan ki raunaq hai . Aur yaqeenan arse tak idhar rukh na karna wajhe shikayat ban jaata hai. Main hamesha aapki khubsurat ghazlon aur aapke housla afza alfaaz ka muntazir rahta hoon . Bahut bahut duaaon k sath , Hasan
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«Reply #29 on: May 09, 2014, 09:24:47 PM »
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fazal sahab iss khoobsoorat noak-jhhok bhare ghazal ko aainda rau doon gi aap saff mein hain icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

fazal sahib aap ka rau ye raha icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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