Chaahate Hain Ab Bhula Den Usko Apne Dil Se Hum.......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on August 28, 2011, 11:52:44 AM
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चाहते हैं अब भुला दें उसको अपने दिल से हम
प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम
chaahate haiN ab bhula deN usko apne dil se ham
pyar karte haiN bahut jis husn-e-laahaasil se hum
 
गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए क़ातिल से हम
garmiye lab se kisee kee roz paate haiN hayaat
qatl hote haiN hamesha abru -e- qaatil se ham

बस, ख़ुदा का शुक्र कह कर, टाल देता है हमें
हाल जब भी पूछते हैं इस दिले-बिस्मिल से हम
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
 
आएगा भी या नहीं अब वो सफ़ीना लौटकर
बारहा पूछा किये मंझधार और साहिल से हम
aayegaa bhee yaa naheeN ab wo safeena lautkar
baarhaa poochhaa kiye majhdhaar aur saahil se hum

मुस्कुराहट पर किसी की, खा गए धोका 'रक़ीब'
दिल लगा बैठे किसी मगरूर से, संगदिल से हम
muskuraahat par kisee kee khaa gaye dhoka 'Raqeeb'
dil laga baithe kisee magroor se, sangdil se hum

                              --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2011, 04:17:32 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob gazal kahi hai janab... Sabhi ashaar
aik se badh kar aik raheN.. Usual Smile

Is sher ke kia kahne janab waah bahut khoob Usual Smile
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
           



Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile           

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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2011, 05:05:50 PM »
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SATISH ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
DAAD kabool kijiye....
yuN likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2011, 05:11:23 PM »
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ParwaaZ Ji Aadaab,

Jawaab dene aur ghazal pasand karne
ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Aage bhi saath dete rahiyega.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2011, 05:13:59 PM »
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satish ji....... icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut bohut khoob he aapki soch...brilliant ...
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2011, 05:15:38 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahab,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shuriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2011, 05:19:22 PM »
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tamanna1 ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya, jawab dene
aur ghazal pasand ke liye.

Aage bhi saath dete rahen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2011, 06:36:23 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
"गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
 क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए क़ातिल से हम "
'रोज़ पाते हैं हयात' और फिर 'क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा'......अति सुन्दर !

"प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम".......लाज़बाब !
शुभकामनायें |
- अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2011, 06:45:27 PM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya, jawab dene ke liye.

Aapke jawab itne achchhe lagte hain ki
aur achchha kahne ka jee karta hai...

Yeh sneh aage bhi banaaye rakhen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2011, 11:33:37 AM »
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चाहते हैं अब भुला दें उसको अपने दिल से हम
प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम
chaahate haiN ab bhula deN usko apne dil se ham
pyar karte haiN bahut jis husn-e-laahaasil se hum   Applause  Applause
 
गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए क़ातिल से हम
garmiye lab se kisee kee roz paate haiN hayaat
qatl hote haiN hamesha abru -e- qaatil se ham

बस, ख़ुदा का शुक्र कह कर, टाल देता है हमें
हाल जब भी पूछते हैं इस दिले-बिस्मिल से हम
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
 
आएगा भी या नहीं अब वो सफ़ीना लौटकर
बारहा पूछा किये मंझधार और साहिल से हम
aayegaa bhee yaa naheeN ab wo safeena lautkar
baarhaa poochhaa kiye majhdhaar aur saahil se hum   Applause

मुस्कुराहट पर किसी की, खा गए धोका 'रक़ीब'
दिल लगा बैठे किसी मगरूर से, संगदिल से हम
muskuraahat par kisee kee khaa gaye dhoka 'Raqeeb'
dil laga baithe kisee magroor se, sangdil se hum  Applause Applause Applause

                              --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Bahut khoob Satish ji 
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2011, 04:53:45 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2011, 07:34:52 AM »
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mkv ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2011, 07:36:39 AM »
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Suresh Ji,

Thanks a lot for
reply.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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