Chaand aaye tere baahon mein sawarne ke liye

by livingbytheday on December 17, 2012, 03:02:22 AM
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Raat aankhon mein utarne ke liye
Chaand aaye tere baahon mein sawarne ke liye
Ruka ruka sa khada hain waqt har mod yahan
Yeh bhi tehra hain tere saath gujarne ke liye

Koi toh samet_ta hoga har subah inn taaron ko
Phir nayi raat aakash mein bharne ke liye

Gulaabi ishq se khil jaata hain dil ka mausam
Aur kya chahiye bande ko nikharne ke liye

Main hu parwaana rahe ishq ka nasha hurdum
Main toh jeeta hu kisi shamma pe marne ke liye

Teri yaad rahi saath oas ke chaadar ki tarah
Mere raahon ko shabnam se bharne ke liye

Ishq hu, bas ek jagah jee sakta hu “Deepak”
Main toh aaya hu tere dil mein tehrne ke liye
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2012, 04:20:33 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak ji waah
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2012, 04:34:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2012, 07:02:45 AM »
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Gulaabi ishq se khil jaata hain dil ka mausam
Aur kya chahiye bande ko nikharne ke liye

Applause Applause
bahut badhiya deepak jee
kya baat hai.. ek se ek behatreen ashaar
likhte rahiye..dil lootte rahiye sab ka
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2012, 08:58:24 AM »
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Beautiful Ghazal , Deepak ji . Sabhi  sher khubsurat hain khas taur se yeh :
Quote from: livingbytheday on December 17, 2012, 03:02:22 AM


Koi toh samet_ta hoga har subah inn taaron ko
Phir nayi raat aakash mein bharne ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2012, 11:39:54 AM »
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very very nice....
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2012, 05:09:38 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 17, 2012, 04:20:33 AM
bahut khoob deepak ji waah

thank you sir
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2012, 05:10:30 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 17, 2012, 04:34:28 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2012, 05:57:30 PM »
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Very nice...
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2012, 09:58:20 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2012, 05:16:01 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 17, 2012, 04:20:33 AM
bahut khoob deepak ji waah

thank you sir ji, thank you
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2012, 05:16:24 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 17, 2012, 04:34:28 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriyaa
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2012, 05:17:30 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 17, 2012, 07:02:45 AM
Gulaabi ishq se khil jaata hain dil ka mausam
Aur kya chahiye bande ko nikharne ke liye

Applause Applause
bahut badhiya deepak jee
kya baat hai.. ek se ek behatreen ashaar
likhte rahiye..dil lootte rahiye sab ka

thank you, aapne itna pasand kiya, thank you
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2012, 05:18:28 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 17, 2012, 08:58:24 AM
Beautiful Ghazal , Deepak ji . Sabhi  sher khubsurat hain khas taur se yeh :

thank you sir, aapko meri yeh ghazal pasand aayi, thank you
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«Reply #14 on: December 20, 2012, 05:20:22 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 17, 2012, 11:39:54 AM
very very nice....

thank you
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