CHAAND GHATAAON MEIN KAHEEN ................... HASAN

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NazroN   se   jo   bachta    mera   Mahboob  gaya  hai
Chhup   kar   kahin  padhne   mere  Maktoob  gaya  hai


ZulfoN  meiN  chhupaaye  hue  haiN  woh  Rukh - e - Zeba
Ya   Chaand   ghataoN   meiN  kahiN   doob   gaya   hai


Pur-khaar  hai  ,  phir  bhi  mujhe  Gulzaar  lage  hai
Is   Raah    se   shaayad    mera   Mahboob   gaya  hai


Rota , kabhi  hansta  , kabhi   rukta ,  kabhi   chalta
Naam   aap   ka   leta    koi    Majzoob    gaya   hai


Targheeb  jo   deti   haiN   'Hasan'   bay - amali  kee
Abb   aisi   Rawayaat   se   jee    oob    gaya    hai


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* meri eik purani ghazal ( 1993 )
Maktoob = letter ;  Rukhe zeba = khubsurat chehra ;Rawayat=tradition/saying
purkhar = kanton bhari ; gulzar = phoolon bhari;Targheeb = Encourage ;
majzoob = absorbed in divine thoughts ; be-amali=inaction
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नज़रों से  जो  बचता  मेरा  महबूब  गया है
छुप  क र कहीं  पढ़ने  मेरे  मक्तूब गया है

ज़ुल्फ़ों  में  छुपाये  हुए  हैं  वह  रूखे ज़ेबा
या  चाँद  घटाओं  में  कहीं   डूब  गया है

पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2014, 06:46:33 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2014, 06:51:59 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2014, 07:38:27 PM »
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NazroN   se   jo   bachta    mera   Mahboob  gaya  hai
Chhup   kar   kahin  padhne   mere  Maktoob  gaya  hai  Thumbs UP Applause Applause


ZulfoN  meiN  chhupaaye  hue  haiN  woh  Rukh - e - Zeba
Ya   Chaand   ghataoN   meiN  kahiN   doob   gaya   hai  Applause Applause Applause


Pur-khaar  hai  ,  phir  bhi  mujhe  Gulzaar  lage  hai
Is   Raah    se   shaayad    mera   Mahboob   gaya  hai  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


Rota , kabhi  hansta  , kabhi   rukta ,  kabhi   chalta
Naam   aap   ka   leta    koi    Majzoob    gaya   hai Applause Applause


Targheeb  jo   deti   haiN   'Hasan'   bay - amali  kee
Abb   aisi   Rawayaat   se   jee    oob    gaya    hai Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


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* meri eik purani ghazal ( 1993 )
Maktoob = letter ;  Rukhe zeba = khubsurat chehra ;Rawayat=tradition/saying
purkhar = kanton bhari ; gulzar = phoolon bhari;Targheeb = Encourage ;
majzoob = absorbed in divine thoughts ; be-amali=inaction
....................


नज़रों से  जो  बचता  मेरा  महबूब  गया है
छुप  क र कहीं  पढ़ने  मेरे  मक्तूब गया है

ज़ुल्फ़ों  में  छुपाये  हुए  हैं  वह  रूखे ज़ेबा
या  चाँद  घटाओं  में  कहीं   डूब  गया है

पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है


Aadaab Sir
Bahut khobsurat ghazal hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2014, 08:10:37 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 14, 2014, 06:43:54 PM

NazroN   se   jo   bachta    mera   Mahboob  gaya  hai
Chhup   kar   kahin  padhne   mere  Maktoob  gaya  hai


ZulfoN  meiN  chhupaaye  hue  haiN  woh  Rukh - e - Zeba
Ya   Chaand   ghataoN   meiN  kahiN   doob   gaya   hai


Pur-khaar  hai  ,  phir  bhi  mujhe  Gulzaar  lage  hai
Is   Raah    se   shaayad    mera   Mahboob   gaya  hai


Rota , kabhi  hansta  , kabhi   rukta ,  kabhi   chalta
Naam   aap   ka   leta    koi    Majzoob    gaya   hai


Targheeb  jo   deti   haiN   'Hasan'   bay - amali  kee
Abb   aisi   Rawayaat   se   jee    oob    gaya    hai


....................
* meri eik purani ghazal ( 1993 )
Maktoob = letter ;  Rukhe zeba = khubsurat chehra ;Rawayat=tradition/saying
purkhar = kanton bhari ; gulzar = phoolon bhari;Targheeb = Encourage ;
majzoob = absorbed in divine thoughts ; be-amali=inaction
....................


नज़रों से  जो  बचता  मेरा  महबूब  गया है
छुप  क र कहीं  पढ़ने  मेरे  मक्तूब गया है

ज़ुल्फ़ों  में  छुपाये  हुए  हैं  वह  रूखे ज़ेबा
या  चाँद  घटाओं  में  कहीं   डूब  गया है

पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है



As Always Saheb..Its Just beautiful

Bahut Bahut Khooooob...!!!!!!


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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2014, 10:32:01 PM »
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पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Aapkee 21 saal puraani ghazal dil ko chho gayee.Aik RAU ke saath Bahut-bahut mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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wha wha wha bhut khub aur umda
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2014, 01:08:01 AM »
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Waah Waah Sirji ...kya baat hai
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2014, 02:22:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob. SIDDIQUI li.
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2014, 02:51:39 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahab Aadaab..!

Masha Allaah janab kia kahne is umda aur khoob kalaam ke... badi hi khoobsurat aur bemisaal kalaam huyi hai...
Aur meharbani huyi hum par janab ke itne fasi alfaazoN ke mayne bhi aapne likhe, wagerna kalaam ka maza hi nahi aata... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad aur mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Bazm ko aabaad O roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2014, 06:34:51 AM »
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Bahut Umdah! Hasan Sahib.
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Har rang muhabbat ke ubhar aaen hain khulkar,
har sher ghazal ka kya khoob gaya hai !!

bahut mubaarak ho Hasan sb.!
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