chaand nikalne mein der ho gai........................saru...................94

by SURESH SANGWAN on May 26, 2014, 01:46:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 26, 2014, 05:08:25 PM »
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thanks a lot Amit ji

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«Reply #16 on: May 26, 2014, 05:09:34 PM »
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thanks a lot parinde ji
सूरत- ए- दुनियां  सँवरने   में   देर  हो  गई
यक़ीनन   चश्मा   बदलने  में   देर  हो  गई

कुछ तो बहके हुए कदमों पर इख्तियार न था
तो  कुछ  दिल  को  संभलने  में  देर  हो  गई

फ़ैसला  जल्दी  का  था इसलिए माफ़ करना
जिंदगी  तुम  तक  पंहुचने  में  देर  हो  गई

तू  छोड़  दे  आवारगी   ए  बादल  फलक पर
देख  आज  फिर  चाँद निकलने में देर हो गई

तिरे  शहर  तिरी  गली की खाक़ छानती रही
मिरी  ख्वाहिश  को  पलटने  में  देर हो गई

बरसात  ना  हुई  कभी धूप ना मिली तब ही
गुल -ए -गुलाब  को  महकने  में देर हो गई

दम  टूटा 'सरु'  मिरा या इसमें जान आई है
बस   यही   बात  समझने   में  देर  हो  गई
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bahut khoooooob saru ji



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«Reply #17 on: May 26, 2014, 07:57:35 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: May 26, 2014, 09:08:33 PM »
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Wooow  awesome  creation  Suresh  ji.  outstanding. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: May 26, 2014, 11:29:35 PM »
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waah waah behad umda peshkash hai waahhhhh dheroooo daaaaaadddd
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«Reply #20 on: May 26, 2014, 11:33:34 PM »
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सूरत- ए- दुनियां  सँवरने   में   देर  हो  गई
यक़ीनन   चश्मा   बदलने  में   देर  हो  गई

कुछ तो बहके हुए कदमों पर इख्तियार न था
तो  कुछ  दिल  को  संभलने  में  देर  हो  गई

फ़ैसला  जल्दी  का  था इसलिए माफ़ करना
जिंदगी  तुम  तक  पंहुचने  में  देर  हो  गई

तू  छोड़  दे  आवारगी   ए  बादल  फलक पर
देख  आज  फिर  चाँद निकलने में देर हो गई

तिरे  शहर  तिरी  गली की खाक़ छानती रही
मिरी  ख्वाहिश  को  पलटने  में  देर हो गई

बरसात  ना  हुई  कभी धूप ना मिली तब ही
गुल -ए -गुलाब  को  महकने  में देर हो गई

दम  टूटा 'सरु'  मिरा या इसमें जान आई है
बस   यही   बात  समझने   में  देर  हो  गई








rau next time,wonderful ma'am
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«Reply #21 on: May 26, 2014, 11:35:16 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: May 26, 2014, 11:35:59 PM »
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rau next time,wonderful ma'am
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«Reply #23 on: May 26, 2014, 11:37:40 PM »
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Yo par aane ka bahut 2 shukriya...please aate rehna...
bahut achha lagta hai

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«Reply #24 on: May 26, 2014, 11:38:58 PM »
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thanks a lot jeet ji
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waah waah behad umda peshkash hai waahhhhh dheroooo daaaaaadddd
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«Reply #25 on: May 27, 2014, 01:50:28 PM »
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thanks a lot sir ji
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lekin maine rau dene men koi der naheen kee
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«Reply #26 on: May 29, 2014, 01:04:54 AM »
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rau next time,wonderful ma'am

rau presented,ma'am
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«Reply #27 on: May 29, 2014, 01:49:19 PM »
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thanx a lot Bahayat ji
rau presented,ma'am
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«Reply #28 on: June 01, 2014, 04:44:26 PM »
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thanks Hriday ji
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waah waah waah kyaa kehne Suresh ji...!!!

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