chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

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ख़्वाब  मेरी  आँखों  के  न बिखरने देगा
अपने दिल की इक रोज़ मुझे करने देगा

मेरा   यकीं  है  अगर  चाँद  पूरा  है तो
क्यूँ  शब  में  समंदर  वो  उतरने  देगा

अच्छा  होता  है फूलों का मिलते रहना
वर्ना  खुश्बू इधर से  कौन गुजरने देगा

उसी  शख़्स  के  ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो  तिश्नगी  को ज़हन  में उतरने देगा

ज़िंदगी यूँ ही जीते हैं की मर जाएँ मगर
पूरी  तरह  से  कोई   नहीं   मरने  देगा

हुनर रखो कोई  ऐसा  की दबा दो सबको
यूँ  दुनियाँ  में  तुम्हें  कौन उभरने देगा

क़ायनात  की  हर  शै सफ़र  है तो फिर
तुझको 'सरु' कौन  इक जगह ठहरने देगा








Khwaab meri aankhoN ken a bikharne dega
Apne     dil    ik    roz    mujhe   karne   dega

Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun  shab  meiN samandar vo utarne dega

Achha  hota  hai  phooloN  ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega

Usi shakhs ke  khyaaloN  meiN dariya hoga
Jo  tishngi   ko  zehan  meiN utarne dega

Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori  tarha  se  koi  nahiN  marne  dega

Hunar  rakho  koi   aisa  ki daba do sabko
Yun  duniaN  meiN tumheN kaun ubharne dega

Kaynaat  ki  har  shai  safar  hai  to fir
Tujhko ’saru’ kaun  ik jagha thaharne dega.
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2014, 05:49:40 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2014, 06:01:07 PM »
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उसी  शख़्स  के  ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो  तिश्नगी  को ज़हन  में उतरने देगा

WAAH WAAH BOHUT HI KHOOB LAJAWAAB
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2014, 06:05:28 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 01, 2014, 05:24:59 PM


ख़्वाब  मेरी  आँखों  के  न बिखरने देगा
अपने दिल की इक रोज़ मुझे करने देगा

मेरा   यकीं  है  अगर  चाँद  पूरा  है तो
क्यूँ  शब  में  समंदर  वो  उतरने  देगा

अच्छा  होता  है फूलों का मिलते रहना
वर्ना  खुश्बू इधर से  कौन गुजरने देगा

उसी  शख़्स  के  ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो  तिश्नगी  को ज़हन  में उतरने देगा

ज़िंदगी यूँ ही जीते हैं की मर जाएँ मगर
पूरी  तरह  से  कोई   नहीं   मरने  देगा

हुनर रखो कोई  ऐसा  की दबा दो सबको
यूँ  दुनियाँ  में  तुम्हें  कौन उभरने देगा

क़ायनात  की  हर  शै सफ़र  है तो फिर
तुझको 'सरु' कौन  इक जगह ठहरने देगा








Khwaab meri aankhoN ken a bikharne dega
Apne     dil    ik    roz    mujhe   karne   dega

Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun  shab  meiN samandar vo utarne dega

Achha  hota  hai  phooloN  ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega

Usi shakhs ke  khyaaloN  meiN dariya hoga
Jo  tishngi   ko  zehan  meiN utarne dega

Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori  tarha  se  koi  nahiN  marne  dega

Hunar  rakho  koi   aisa  ki daba do sabko
Yun  duniaN  meiN tumheN kaun ubharne dega

Kaynaat  ki  har  shai  safar  hai  to fir
Tujhko ’saru’ kaun  ik jagha thaharne dega.







खूबसूरत,,,लाजवाब,,,बेहतरीन,,,!!
शब्द चुनना भारी पढ़ रहे हैं इस कलाम की तारीफ करने वास्ते.यूँ ही लिखते रहिए,आबाद रहिए सुरेशजी.!!
राउ उधार राहा.!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2014, 06:11:25 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya sksaini ji
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 01, 2014, 05:49:40 PM
ek rau ke saath daad dad daad
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Quote from: sahal on May 01, 2014, 06:01:07 PM
उसी  शख़्स  के  ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो  तिश्नगी  को ज़हन  में उतरने देगा

WAAH WAAH BOHUT HI KHOOB LAJAWAAB
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2014, 06:15:34 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya Ravi ji
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 01, 2014, 06:05:28 PM


खूबसूरत,,,लाजवाब,,,बेहतरीन,,,!!
शब्द चुनना भारी पढ़ रहे हैं इस कलाम की तारीफ करने वास्ते.यूँ ही लिखते रहिए,आबाद रहिए सुरेशजी.!!
राउ उधार राहा.!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2014, 06:32:11 PM »
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वाह....वाह.......बहुत ही खूब रही आपकी ये पेशकश......वैसे तो सारे ही आशार एक से बढ़कर एक हैं ....फिर भी.....

मेरा   यकीं  है  अगर  चाँद  पूरा  है तो
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वाह....वाह.......बहुत ही खूब रही आपकी ये पेशकश......वैसे तो सारे ही आशार एक से बढ़कर एक हैं ....फिर भी.....

मेरा   यकीं  है  अगर  चाँद  पूरा  है तो
क्यूँ  शब  में  समंदर  वो  उतरने  देगा

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