chaand poora hai.........................saru................85 -Panna 2:Ghazals

SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2014, 08:52:35 PM »

thanks a lot Sahal ji
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Quote from: sahal on May 01, 2014, 06:01:07 PM

उसी शख़्स के ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो तिश्नगी को ज़हन में उतरने देगा

WAAH WAAH BOHUT HI KHOOB LAJAWAAB
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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2014, 08:58:43 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 01, 2014, 05:24:59 PM

ख़्वाब मेरी आँखों के न बिखरने देगा
अपने दिल की इक रोज़ मुझे करने देगा

मेरा यकीं है अगर चाँद पूरा है तो
क्यूँ शब में समंदर वो उतरने देगा

अच्छा होता है फूलों का मिलते रहना
वर्ना खुश्बू इधर से कौन गुजरने देगा

उसी शख़्स के ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो तिश्नगी को ज़हन में उतरने देगा

ज़िंदगी यूँ ही जीते हैं की मर जाएँ मगर
पूरी तरह से कोई नहीं मरने देगा

हुनर रखो कोई ऐसा की दबा दो सबको
यूँ दुनियाँ में तुम्हें कौन उभरने देगा

क़ायनात की हर शै सफ़र है तो फिर
तुझको 'सरु' कौन इक जगह ठहरने देगा

Khwaab meri aankhoN ken a bikharne dega
Apne dil ik roz mujhe karne dega

Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun shab meiN samandar vo utarne dega

Achha hota hai phooloN ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega

Usi shakhs ke khyaaloN meiN dariya hoga
Jo tishngi ko zehan meiN utarne dega

Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori tarha se koi nahiN marne dega

Hunar rakho koi aisa ki daba do sabko
Yun duniaN meiN tumheN kaun ubharne dega

Kaynaat ki har shai safar hai to fir
Tujhko ’saru’ kaun ik jagha thaharne dega.

boss!!!!!!!!!!!

rau

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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #17 on: May 01, 2014, 09:00:07 PM »

thankewww soooooooooooo much qalb ji
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Quote from: qalb on May 01, 2014, 08:58:43 PM

boss!!!!!!!!!!!

rau

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #18 on: May 01, 2014, 11:29:52 PM »

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-SS


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2014, 11:40:10 PM »

Khwaab meri aankhoN ken a bikharne dega
Apne dil ik roz mujhe karne dega
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Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun shab meiN samandar vo utarne dega
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Achha hota hai phooloN ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega
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Usi shakhs ke khyaaloN meiN dariya hoga
Jo tishngi ko zehan meiN utarne dega
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Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori tarha se koi nahiN marne dega
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Hunar rakho koi aisa ki daba do sabko
Yun duniaN meiN tumheN kaun ubharne dega
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Kaynaat ki har shai safar hai to fir
Tujhko ’saru’ kaun ik jagha thaharne dega.
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waah waah waah bohut hi umda peshkash,,,ek se bhadkar ek poet waaaahhhhhhh eysi dilkash poet rau ki hakdaar haiiiiii,,,,,kabool kijiye


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #20 on: May 02, 2014, 11:44:32 AM »

Fantastic creation beyond any appreciation Usual Smile


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2014, 12:09:32 PM »

अच्छा होता है फूलों का मिलते रहना
वर्ना खुश्बू इधर से कौन गुजरने देगा

उसी शख़्स के ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो तिश्नगी को ज़हन में उतरने देगा

हुनर रखो कोई ऐसा की दबा दो सबको
यूँ दुनियाँ में तुम्हें कौन उभरने देगा

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sangwaan ji,Behad khoobsurat Ashaar kahe hain aapne.Dil ko chhood gaye aapke ye ashaar.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2014, 07:35:35 PM »

bahut 2 shukriya sudhir ji
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 02, 2014, 12:09:32 PM

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sangwaan ji,Behad khoobsurat Ashaar kahe hain aapne.Dil ko chhood gaye aapke ye ashaar.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.


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premdeep

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2014, 07:52:15 PM »

just incredibal maam superb creation ONE RAU.


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2014, 07:58:44 PM »

[size=12 thankewwww soooooooooooo much premdeep ji

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Quote from: premdeep on May 02, 2014, 07:52:15 PM

just incredibal maam superb creation ONE RAU.


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #25 on: May 02, 2014, 07:59:24 PM »

thanks a lot jeet ji
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 01, 2014, 11:40:10 PM