chaand poora hai.........................saru................85 -Panna 3:Ghazals

SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #30 on: May 04, 2014, 12:36:50 AM »

THanks a lot Annu ji

Quote from: annu_genis on May 03, 2014, 10:50:41 PM

Suresh Ji ...bada emotional likha hai, bahut khoob!

Keep writing!


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #31 on: May 04, 2014, 12:39:20 AM »

thanks a lot dksaxena ji
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on May 01, 2014, 06:32:11 PM

Superb.


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #32 on: May 04, 2014, 06:25:38 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 01, 2014, 05:24:59 PM

ख़्वाब मेरी आँखों के न बिखरने देगा
अपने दिल की इक रोज़ मुझे करने देगा

मेरा यकीं है अगर चाँद पूरा है तो
क्यूँ शब में समंदर वो उतरने देगा

अच्छा होता है फूलों का मिलते रहना
वर्ना खुश्बू इधर से कौन गुजरने देगा

उसी शख़्स के ख़यालों में दरिया होगा
जो तिश्नगी को ज़हन में उतरने देगा

ज़िंदगी यूँ ही जीते हैं की मर जाएँ मगर
पूरी तरह से कोई नहीं मरने देगा

हुनर रखो कोई ऐसा की दबा दो सबको
यूँ दुनियाँ में तुम्हें कौन उभरने देगा

क़ायनात की हर शै सफ़र है तो फिर
तुझको 'सरु' कौन इक जगह ठहरने देगा

Khwaab meri aankhoN ken a bikharne dega
Apne dil ik roz mujhe karne dega

Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun shab meiN samandar vo utarne dega

Achha hota hai phooloN ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega

Usi shakhs ke khyaaloN meiN dariya hoga
Jo tishngi ko zehan meiN utarne dega

Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori tarha se koi nahiN marne dega

Hunar rakho koi aisa ki daba do sabko
Yun duniaN meiN tumheN kaun ubharne dega

Kaynaat ki har shai safar hai to fir
Tujhko ’saru’ kaun ik jagha thaharne dega.

It Is Justtttt Beautiful Saru Jee...

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob....Khaas Taur Par Yeh Sher's...

Mera yakeeN hai agar chaand poora hai to
Kyun shab meiN samandar vo utarne dega

Achha hota hai phooloN ka milte rehna
Verna khushboo idhar se kaun gujarne dega

Jindagi yun hi jeete haiN ki mar jaayeN magar
Poori tarha se koi nahiN marne dega


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #33 on: May 05, 2014, 03:25:56 AM »

Wah wah wah !!! Behad hi umda aashaar Saru ji !! Gehree soch bhi hai aur kuchh n kuchh nayee baat bhi !! Bahaut bahaut mubaarakbaad aap ko is behtareen qalaam par !!

Applause


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #34 on: May 05, 2014, 08:03:48 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 01, 2014, 05:24:59 PM

wah wah wah saru !


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #35 on: May 08, 2014, 06:06:40 PM »

thankewww sooooooooo much khwahish ji
wav

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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #36 on: May 08, 2014, 06:09:30 PM »

thanks a lot Zarra ji
wav

Quote from: zarraa on May 05, 2014, 03:25:56 AM

Wah wah wah !!! Behad hi umda aashaar Saru ji !! Gehree soch bhi hai aur kuchh n kuchh nayee baat bhi !! Bahaut bahaut mubaarakbaad aap ko is behtareen qalaam par !!

Applause


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Re: chaand poora hai.........................saru................85

«Reply #37 on: May 08, 2014, 06:10:07 PM »

thanks a lot sheba ji
wav

Quote from: Sheba on May 05, 2014, 08:03:48 PM

wah wah wah saru !


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