*******CHAAND UTAREGA ZAMI PAR********

by Dineshkumarjonty on March 01, 2015, 12:20:37 PM
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**Gazal+Geet=Gafal**

Chaand utarega zami par nahi utar chooka hai
Aasma jhookega zami par nahi jhook chooka hai*******

Gazal jispar gazal kah jaye
Baate uski aayete ban jaye*******

Chaand.....

Sitare gawah hai us mahjabi ke
Suraj uake jaisa dhale aur ooge*******

Chaand.....

Jaise kagaz par utari humne gafal
Jiske liye din raat rahe hai badal*******

Chaand.....

Aankho ke kinare aasma ka chhor
Kadmo ke tale chhitiz gumsum shor*******

Chaand.....

Chaand utarega zami par nahi utar chooka hai
Aasma jhookega zami par nahi jhook chooka hai*******

Dinesh kumar


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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2015, 01:24:02 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2015, 04:00:20 PM »
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Mai Aap ka GAFAL se thoda sa taroof kara deta hop*******

Ye gazal ar geet ko milakar bani hai iski khasiyat ye hai ki ye apne aap me apurn hai ar confused hai par for bhi apni baat kah jati hai isko Maine kavi ar shayar dono ko milakar banaya hai jaha par shayar ki har huyi thi bus usi ke shudhar ke liye banaya hai*******isme pahli do line gazal ki tarah hai par geet ke bol jaisi hai antre me shayri hai jo adhuri hai par baat kah jati hai*******ise Kevel urdoo ke shabdo dawra nahi banaya ja sakta at kevel Hindi me dawra iska makasd puraa nahi hota hai*******

Dhanyvad dosto AAPKA dinesh*******
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2015, 05:43:36 PM »
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waaaaaaaaahhhhh bohat khub dinesh ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2015, 09:56:45 PM »
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waah waaaaaah bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2015, 02:39:03 PM »
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Thank you SAINI SIR*******
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