chahane bhar se jo khushi milti

by poonam singh on December 01, 2010, 08:21:51 AM
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chahne bhar se jo kisi ko khushi milti,
kyu kisi ke daamam me koi kami milti.

jaha me wajood hota nahi kahi gam ka,
na kisi ki koi aarju aadhuri milti.

hoke aajij jo tune  kabhi pukara hota,
tuje har taraf meri yado ki roshni milti.

dame rukhsat bhi jo mud ke dekha hota,
meri aankho me tujhe apne liye nami milti...

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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2010, 08:28:54 AM »
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wah wah Poonam ji
bhut khubsurat nagma
yar sahi pure dil se likha aapne...
umda peshkash..
bhot khub..
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2010, 08:40:06 AM »
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shukriya killbill ji.
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2010, 09:23:41 AM »
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really its a grt poem..
wakai dil ko chu gai
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2010, 08:03:54 AM »
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Lajawaab!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Poonam Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2010, 08:05:23 AM »
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nice feelings poonam ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2010, 09:20:57 AM »
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Poonam ji.....achhe bhav hain aapke..... Applause Applause Applause


Chahne bhar se khushi milti nahi kisi ko
Kismat mai jo likha hai uss-se jayada bhi
Nahi milti hai daulat bhee jag me kisi ko
Ye agar jaanle insaan tou dukhi na ho kabhi
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 09:28:06 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob poonam ji


dhers aari daad..

sare lines apne aap me kai sach ke barabar hain~

likhte rahiye`
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2010, 09:30:35 AM »
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bht hi badhiya likha hai poonam tumne...bht hi khubsurat rachna.......
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2010, 03:52:21 AM »
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buhat buhat shukriya kasak ji,abhi ji,koyal,khwaish ji,sahill ji.aap sabhi ne ise padha aur sraha iske liye aap sab ka tahe dil se shukriya karti hu.
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