CHAHATAA HOON ..(A.B)

by adil bechain on October 26, 2009, 09:01:35 AM
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                           KOI JAANWAR NA SAMJHEY ISS KHAYAL SE DARTAA HOON,
                           AB TO INSAAN HONEY KAA BHI 'FAKHR' NAHIN KARTAA HOON,


                           IZZAT KEY LIYE AB YAHAAN KAUN MARTAA HAI,
                           DIL KO MAAR RAKHAA HAI, SIRF DAULAT KEY LIYE MARTAA HOON,

                   
                           99 KEY CHAKKAR MAIN PHANSAA HUA HAI SANSAAR SAARA,
                           ISEE KASHMAKASH MAIN MAIN HAMESHAA JAAGTAA HOON,

                     
                           KAUN JAANEY BAAD MAUT KEY TU SAKOON PAAYE GAA BECHAIN,
                           SAAREY SUKH BUSS INN CHUND ZINDAGI MAIN CHAHATAA HOON...!
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2009, 02:20:59 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Adil .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!

Keep writing..
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2009, 02:24:16 PM »
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waah Kya Khoob Khaa Hai Dost Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2009, 02:33:24 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   ADIL BECHAIN JI...

AAJ KAL INSAANO KO HI SHARAM AA RAHI HAI KHUD KO GINTE INSAANAO MAIN,
INSAANIYAT BACHI HI KAHAN HAI,JO SAMJHE KHUD KO INSAANO MAIN.
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2009, 07:28:56 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Adil ji and Cara ji ,very touching and wonderful gazal,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 08:17:25 AM »
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Janaab Adil Bechain Ji! AOA! Kya hi achchha hota agar ye ghazal bahr (meter) meiN hoti. Aage khayaal rakheiN. Ghazal ko bahr mein hi hona chaahiye warna woh ghazal nahin nasr hi kahi jaayegi. Aap aik achchhe ghazal-go shaayar ban sakte haiN kyonki aap mein woh tamaam khoobiyaN maujood haiN jo aik shaayar meiN honi chaahiye. Agar bura man jaayeN to maaf kijiyega.
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2009, 08:37:49 AM »
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Janaab Adil Bechain Ji! AOA! Kya hi achchha hota agar ye ghazal bahr (meter) meiN hoti. Aage khayaal rakheiN. Ghazal ko bahr mein hi hona chaahiye warna woh ghazal nahin nasr hi kahi jaayegi. Aap aik achchhe ghazal-go shaayar ban sakte haiN kyonki aap mein woh tamaam khoobiyaN maujood haiN jo aik shaayar meiN honi chaahiye. Agar bura man jaayeN to maaf kijiyega.


SHUKRIYA JANAB MAIN DHYAA RAKHOON GAA.. AAP KI SUGGESTION KAA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2009, 08:38:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on October 26, 2009, 02:20:59 PM
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Adil .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!

Keep writing..

THANK U SOPHI JI
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2009, 08:39:05 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on October 26, 2009, 02:24:16 PM
waah Kya Khoob Khaa Hai Dost Bohat Achche,.

SHUKRIYA AZEEM SAHAB
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«Reply #9 on: October 28, 2009, 08:39:38 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   ADIL BECHAIN JI...

AAJ KAL INSAANO KO HI SHARAM AA RAHI HAI KHUD KO GINTE INSAANAO MAIN,
INSAANIYAT BACHI HI KAHAN HAI,JO SAMJHE KHUD KO INSAANO MAIN.

THANX CARA JI
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«Reply #10 on: October 28, 2009, 08:40:09 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Adil ji and Cara ji ,very touching and wonderful gazal,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

THANK U MADHUWESH
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«Reply #11 on: October 28, 2009, 02:26:41 PM »
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Nice Gajal Ji Adil JI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2009, 07:20:37 AM »
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Nice Gajal Ji Adil JI Applause Applause Applause

Thank u Rishi ji
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