Chal Na Dena Kaheen Tu Ta Ta Kar / चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर.......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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वह सताता है दूर जा जा कर
रात में फिर क़रीब आ आ कर

याद कर सुब्ह से उसे कोयल
जाने क्या कह रही है गा गा कर

उसके दिल में है क्या वही जाने
गिफ़्ट देता है रोज़ ला ला कर

अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर

कितने मरते हैं भूक से, कितने
साँड़ जैसे हुए हैं खा खा कर

कोई आता नहीं मदद को 'रक़ीब'
देखते सब हैं दर को वा वा कर

woh satata hai door ja ja kar
raat men fir qareeb aa aa kar

yaad kar subh se use koyal
jaane kya kah rahee hai ga ga kar

uske dil men hai kya wahee jaane
gift deta hai roz la la kar

apna rishta janam janam tak hai
chal na dena kaheen tu ta ta kar

daste muflis pe kuchh to rakhana seekh
kam, ziyaadabhale ho, na na kar

kitne marte hain bhook se kitne
saand jaise huye hain khaa khaa kar

koyee aata naheen madad ko 'RAQEEB'
dekhte sab hai dar ko waa waa kar


--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2013, 10:29:24 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 13, 2013, 08:57:49 PM


वह सताता है दूर जा जा कर
रात में फिर क़रीब आ आ कर

याद कर सुब्ह से उसे कोयल
जाने क्या कह रही है गा गा कर

उसके दिल में है क्या वही जाने
गिफ़्ट देता है रोज़ ला ला कर

अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर

कितने मरते हैं भूक से, कितने
साँड़ जैसे हुए हैं खा खा कर
ha ha ,sir
कोई आता नहीं मदद को 'रक़ीब'
देखते सब हैं दर को वा वा कर

woh satata hai door ja ja kar
raat men fir qareeb aa aa kar

yaad kar subh se use koyal
jaane kya kah rahee hai ga ga kar

uske dil men hai kya wahee jaane
gift deta hai roz la la kar

apna rishta janam janam tak hai
chal na dena kaheen tu ta ta kar

daste muflis pe kuchh to rakhana seekh
kam, ziyaadabhale ho, na na kar

kitne marte hain bhook se kitne
saand jaise huye hain khaa khaa kar

koyee aata naheen madad ko 'RAQEEB'
dekhte sab hain dar ko waa waa kar


--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


very nice,sir
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2013, 10:34:30 PM »
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kya baat hai satish jee..

behad umda peshakash..

bada maza aaya padh kar..

dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2013, 11:21:06 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut khoob ek alag andaaz mein likhi gayi is khoobsurat ghazal par hazaron dili daad...
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2013, 01:19:27 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2013, 03:11:11 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 13, 2013, 08:57:49 PM


वह सताता है दूर जा जा कर
रात में फिर क़रीब आ आ कर

याद कर सुब्ह से उसे कोयल
जाने क्या कह रही है गा गा कर

उसके दिल में है क्या वही जाने
गिफ़्ट देता है रोज़ ला ला कर

अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर

कितने मरते हैं भूक से, कितने
साँड़ जैसे हुए हैं खा खा कर

कोई आता नहीं मदद को 'रक़ीब'
देखते सब हैं दर को वा वा कर

woh satata hai door ja ja kar
raat men fir qareeb aa aa kar

yaad kar subh se use koyal
jaane kya kah rahee hai ga ga kar

uske dil men hai kya wahee jaane
gift deta hai roz la la kar

apna rishta janam janam tak hai
chal na dena kaheen tu ta ta kar

daste muflis pe kuchh to rakhana seekh
kam, ziyaadabhale ho, na na kar

kitne marte hain bhook se kitne
saand jaise huye hain khaa khaa kar

koyee aata naheen madad ko 'RAQEEB'
dekhte sab hai dar ko waa waa kar


--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2013, 03:15:03 AM »
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वह सताता है दूर जा जा कर
रात में फिर क़रीब आ आ कर
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =)na aise chain lene deta na waise chain lene deta acha tecnique hai ji uska per main aise nahin sataati wo kaun hai mujhe bhi uss se milawa do kuch naye technique main bhi seekh loon
याद कर सुब्ह से उसे कोयल
जाने क्या कह रही है गा गा कर
acha koyal bhi mujh pe fida hai. khuda ki shaan hai ji jo mujhe aisa banayaa hai.......! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
उसके दिल में है क्या वही जाने
गिफ़्ट देता है रोज़ ला ला कर
mere dil mein kuch nahin hai bus mujhe idhar udhar se gift aate rahte hain to itna khaan rakhoo.n so tumhein bhejwaa deti hoo.n agar pasand na aaye to doosre kisi YOINDIA ke miskin shayar ke ghar bhejwaa dena kahna sheba ne bheja hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर
nahin ji main TATA, bajaj. nahin kahti mujhe TOYOTA, HONDA CIVIC PASAND HAI
AGAR AUDI MIL JAAYE TO KYA KAHNE Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर
main sadqa waghairah deti rahti hoo.n haan agar dil rakhne ki baat hai to ye dast-e-ghani pe rakhoo.n gi. paisa hi mohabbat hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
कितने मरते हैं भूक से, कितने
साँड़ जैसे हुए हैं खा खा कर
haan ji allah raham kare sab pe sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
कोई आता नहीं मदद को 'रक़ीब'
देखते सब हैं दर को वा वा कर
ye aaj ki duniya hai . bahut afsos hota hai soch kar sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
woh satata hai door ja ja kar
raat men fir qareeb aa aa kar

yaad kar subh se use koyal
jaane kya kah rahee hai ga ga kar

uske dil men hai kya wahee jaane
gift deta hai roz la la kar

apna rishta janam janam tak hai
chal na dena kaheen tu ta ta kar

daste muflis pe kuchh to rakhana seekh
kam, ziyaadabhale ho, na na kar

kitne marte hain bhook se kitne
saand jaise huye hain khaa khaa kar

koyee aata naheen madad ko 'RAQEEB'
dekhte sab hai dar ko waa waa kar


--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



bahut haseen aur jawaan aur khoobsoorat ghazal........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2013, 05:54:28 AM »
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great one
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marhabaa marhabaa
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2013, 10:15:01 AM »
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अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2013, 11:53:24 AM »
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nice,satish ji
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chal na dena kahiN tu ta ta kar, kaafi refreshing andaaz raha aapka saaheb, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi likhte raheN...!!
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 13, 2013, 10:29:24 PM
very nice,sir

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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kya baat hai satish jee..

behad umda peshakash..

bada maza aaya padh kar..


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Raqeeb


dhero daad..happy9
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Quote from: aqsh on July 13, 2013, 11:21:06 PM
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waah waah waah. bahut khoob ek alag andaaz mein likhi gayi is khoobsurat ghazal par hazaron dili daad...


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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