Chal Na Dena Kaheen Tu Ta Ta Kar / चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर.......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: July 14, 2013, 04:02:58 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2013, 04:09:16 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2013, 04:24:01 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: July 14, 2013, 05:24:03 PM »
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bahut haseen aur jawaan aur khoobsoorat ghazal........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Hamesha kee tarah wahi pyari ada...har she'r par juda tabsira

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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2013, 08:12:37 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: July 15, 2013, 05:43:48 AM »
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waah waah Sir hamesha ki tarah ek ghazab ki khumaar bhari ghazal, dil jhoom utha padh kar, taareef k liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe. Kya khoob kaafiye chune hain. HazaaroN daad aur ek rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se aur aap se guzaarish hai k aap hamesha bazm meiN aate raheN.
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«Reply #21 on: July 15, 2013, 01:10:40 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: July 15, 2013, 02:25:05 PM »
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marhabaa marhabaa

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«Reply #23 on: July 15, 2013, 02:52:05 PM »
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अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर
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«Reply #24 on: July 15, 2013, 06:52:53 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 14, 2013, 11:53:24 AM
nice,satish ji

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«Reply #25 on: July 15, 2013, 07:01:28 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 13, 2013, 08:57:49 PM


वह सताता है दूर जा जा कर
रात में फिर क़रीब आ आ कर

याद कर सुब्ह से उसे कोयल
जाने क्या कह रही है गा गा कर

उसके दिल में है क्या वही जाने
गिफ़्ट देता है रोज़ ला ला कर

अपना रिश्ता जनम जनम तक है
चल न देना कहीं तू टा टा कर

दस्ते मुफ़लिस पे कुछ तो रखना सीख
कम, ज़ियादा भले हो, ना ना कर

कितने मरते हैं भूक से, कितने
साँड़ जैसे हुए हैं खा खा कर

कोई आता नहीं मदद को 'रक़ीब'
देखते सब हैं दर को वा वा कर

woh satata hai door ja ja kar
raat men fir qareeb aa aa kar

yaad kar subh se use koyal
jaane kya kah rahee hai ga ga kar

uske dil men hai kya wahee jaane
gift deta hai roz la la kar

apna rishta janam janam tak hai
chal na dena kaheen tu ta ta kar

daste muflis pe kuchh to rakhana seekh
kam, ziyaadabhale ho, na na kar

kitne marte hain bhook se kitne
saand jaise huye hain khaa khaa kar

koyee aata naheen madad ko 'RAQEEB'
dekhte sab hai dar ko waa waa kar


--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

waah waah shukla ji bohut umda khyaal ,,
lajawaab likha hai
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«Reply #26 on: July 15, 2013, 07:55:46 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 14, 2013, 12:25:13 PM
chal na dena kahiN tu ta ta kar, kaafi refreshing andaaz raha aapka saaheb, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi likhte raheN...!!

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«Reply #27 on: July 15, 2013, 08:14:59 PM »
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bahut umda satish ji.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #29 on: July 16, 2013, 01:03:18 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 14, 2013, 08:12:37 PM
bahut khoob

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