Chalaata wo meri kashti, hai uska dum safeeney mein

by livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:35:29 AM
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Chalaata wo meri kashti, hai uska dum safeeney mein
Mazaa bhi khoob hai uski ibaadat kar ke jeeney mein
Jisne usko na dekha kisi bacchey ke ansoo mein
Wo kya paayega usko, jaakar madeeney mein

Talaasha umra tak logo ne duniya bhar  ke cheezo mein
Koi kehta raha khuda  toh rehta hai seeney mein

Lipat jaata hai mujhse din dopehar, badbu badan kya hai
Wo kehta hai usii ki khusboo hai mere paseeney mein

Thokar mein rakh lu, ghar bana lu, chedh du gagan
Pathar mein hai jo baat, kahan wo hai nageeney mein

Baadal ka seena faadkar, bujhaaye pyaas dharti ki
Wahi banke fuhaar aaye saawan ke maheeney mein

“Deepak” toh kuud jaata hai, toofan mein yun hi
Uski rehmat ka bas umeed rakhta hai seeney mein
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2012, 04:42:41 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:35:29 AM
Chalaata wo meri kashti, hai uska dum safeeney mein
Mazaa bhi khoob hai uski ibaadat kar ke jeeney mein
Jisne usko na dekha kisi bacchey ke ansoo mein
Wo kya paayega usko, jaakar madeeney mein

Talaasha umra tak logo ne duniya bhar  ke cheezo mein
Koi kehta raha khuda  toh rehta hai seeney mein

Lipat jaata hai mujhse din dopehar, badbu badan kya hai
Wo kehta hai usii ki khusboo hai mere paseeney mein

Thokar mein rakh lu, ghar bana lu, chedh du gagan
Pathar mein hai jo baat, kahan wo hai nageeney mein

Baadal ka seena faadkar, bujhaaye pyaas dharti ki
Wahi banke fuhaar aaye saawan ke maheeney mein

“Deepak” toh kuud jaata hai, toofan mein yun hi
Uski rehmat ka bas umeed rakhta hai seeney mein
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2012, 05:17:43 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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Quote from: livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:35:29 AM
Chalaata wo meri kashti, hai uska dum safeeney mein
Mazaa bhi khoob hai uski ibaadat kar ke jeeney mein
Jisne usko na dekha kisi bacchey ke ansoo mein
Wo kya paayega usko, jaakar madeeney mein

Talaasha umra tak logo ne duniya bhar  ke cheezo mein
Koi kehta raha khuda  toh rehta hai seeney mein

Lipat jaata hai mujhse din dopehar, badbu badan kya hai
Wo kehta hai usii ki khusboo hai mere paseeney mein

Thokar mein rakh lu, ghar bana lu, chedh du gagan
Pathar mein hai jo baat, kahan wo hai nageeney mein

Baadal ka seena faadkar, bujhaaye pyaas dharti ki
Wahi banke fuhaar aaye saawan ke maheeney mein

“Deepak” toh kuud jaata hai, toofan mein yun hi
Uski rehmat ka bas umeed rakhta hai seeney mein



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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 08:07:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2012, 08:41:27 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:35:29 AM
Chalaata wo meri kashti, hai uska dum safeeney mein
Mazaa bhi khoob hai uski ibaadat kar ke jeeney mein
Jisne usko na dekha kisi bacchey ke ansoo mein
Wo kya paayega usko, jaakar madeeney mein

bahut umda  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Talaasha umra tak logo ne duniya bhar  ke cheezo mein
Koi kehta raha khuda  toh rehta hai seeney mein

 Applause Applause
Lipat jaata hai mujhse din dopehar, badbu badan kya hai
Wo kehta hai usii ki khusboo hai mere paseeney mein

 Applause Applause
Thokar mein rakh lu, ghar bana lu, chedh du gagan
Pathar mein hai jo baat, kahan wo hai nageeney mein

 Applause Applause
Baadal ka seena faadkar, bujhaaye pyaas dharti ki
Wahi banke fuhaar aaye saawan ke maheeney mein

bahut khoob...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
“Deepak” toh kuud jaata hai, toofan mein yun hi
Uski rehmat ka bas umeed rakhta hai seeney mein



wah deepak ji... bahut bahut khoob ... Usual Smile
dhero daad mubarakbad.. Usual Smile
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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wah wah wah bahut khub bahut hi lajawab..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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waah waah bahut khoob

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Quote from: mkv on August 15, 2012, 08:07:05 AM
Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Applause Applause Applause

thank you sir ji
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 15, 2012, 08:41:27 AM
wah deepak ji... bahut bahut khoob ... Usual Smile
dhero daad mubarakbad.. Usual Smile
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriyaa sir ji
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Quote from: soudagar on August 15, 2012, 10:14:21 AM
wah wah wah bahut khub bahut hi lajawab..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you sir
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