Chale tu saath ager saath aasmaan chale

by khalidrawat on March 05, 2008, 08:42:35 AM
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Chale tu saath ager saath aasmaan chale
Qadam ke saath mila ker qadam jahan chale

ager tu sair ko nikle kabhi gulistaa.N ke
Tu sir jhuka ke tere saath gulsitaan chale

Kabhi nazar jo teri aasmaa.N pe uth jaye
Zami.N pe waqt bohut ho ke meherabaan chale

Chupae phirta tha jo aastee.N mai.N tu khanjer
So wo bhi raaz khafi aaj tera jaan chale

Mile ju saath tera tu bawaqt-e-marg sanam
Badan se koi bhi hasrat na le ke jaan chale

Khafi: Chupa hua, hidden
Bawaqt-e-marg: Marte waqt, at the time of death

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2008, 01:21:47 AM »
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Wah Kya baat he!!!

KAMAL KAR DIYA IS SHER ME:-
Mile ju saath tera tu bawaqt-e-marg sanam
Badan se koi bhi hasrat na le ke jaan chale
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2008, 08:15:12 AM »
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Wah Kya baat he!!!

KAMAL KAR DIYA IS SHER ME:-
Mile ju saath tera tu bawaqt-e-marg sanam
Badan se koi bhi hasrat na le ke jaan chale

bohut shukriya aap ki hoosla afzai aur sataish ka,
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2008, 10:22:21 AM »
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Humesha ki tarah bohot achcha likha hai aapne Khalid Sahab Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2008, 08:05:31 PM »
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Wese tamam gazal hi lajwab he khalid sahab, magar mujhe wo sher jisme tamam hasrat ke poora hone ka zikr he behad pasand aaya
is lye uske hwale se likha albatta tamam ash'ar behtareen kahe aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 10:40:59 AM »
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Chale tu saath ager saath aasmaan chale
Qadam ke saath mila ker qadam jahan chale

ager tu sair ko nikle kabhi gulistaa.N ke
Tu sir jhuka ke tere saath gulsitaan chale

Kabhi nazar jo teri aasmaa.N pe uth jaye
Zami.N pe waqt bohut ho ke meherabaan chale

Chupae phirta tha jo aastee.N mai.N tu khanjer
So wo bhi raaz khafi aaj tera jaan chale

Mile ju saath tera tu bawaqt-e-marg sanam
Badan se koi bhi hasrat na le ke jaan chale

Khafi: Chupa hua, hidden
Bawaqt-e-marg: Marte waqt, at the time of death

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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