Chaley aaou, ghuleyn phir sey, wasl kee sougaat dey-ley!

by abdbundeli on June 29, 2009, 01:59:46 PM
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Aaj abroun ney kiyaa hai tarbtar mujh ko akeyley!
Kaash woh bhi saath aa bheegey mujhey aagosh mein ley!!

Aaj abroun ney kiyaa hai tarbtar mujh ko akeyley!
Kaash woh bheegaa huaa aaye, mujhey aagosh mein ley!!

Gulistaan weeraan-saa hai: jahaan khush they gul-o-bulbul;
Rahey lagtey andleeboun key jahaan par roz meyley!

Bheegatey they saath ham tab, saath jagtey , saath sotey;
Yaad aayen, kaash, us ko bhee, kabhee jo kheyl kheyley!

Saath sarmaa, saath garmaa, saath baaraan ao baharaan;
Saath pee may masarrat kee, saath gam-o-gubaar jheyley!

Jab rahaa hai saath, saathee rahey hain apney jhakorey!
Roo-b-roo sailaab-o-baad-e-tund key hain aaj reyley!!

Jahaan tak mujh ko patah hai, naheen kuchh bhee chhupaa tujh sey:
Sabhee hai, mahboob, teyraa: chaahiye jo tujhey, leyley!

Yaad kartey hee, bahee hai, itrayezee baad-e-mashriq;
Kyaa samaa ho, khileyn gar phir chameylee key saath beyley!!

"Abd', kyaa hai shai, ki, jis mein is qadar masroof ho tum?
Chaley aaou, ghuleyn phir sey, wasl kee sougaat dey-ley!


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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2009, 02:41:33 PM »
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Bundeli Sahab,

Very nice ghazal indeed.

Shayara
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2009, 02:52:25 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on June 29, 2009, 02:41:33 PM
Bundeli Sahab,

Very nice ghazal indeed.

Shayara
Shukriyah Shayara ji! Muhtarmah, jab aap khud naam sey bhee shayara(h) hain, to aap kee pasand bhee shayaraanah to zaroor hee hogee! Your assessment has certainly pleased me a lot! Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakhiyegaa!
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 09:35:21 PM »
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Very beautiful gazal Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2009, 03:42:20 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 29, 2009, 09:35:21 PM
Very beautiful gazal Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause  Thumbs UP
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Madhu ji!
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2009, 08:40:18 AM »
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bhut khoob abd ji, mashallah bhut hi achay
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2009, 12:43:02 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 30, 2009, 08:40:18 AM
bhut khoob abd ji, mashallah bhut hi achay
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah aaina ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2009, 01:56:48 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhh mashaAllah
bahut khubsoorat ghazal likhi hai
har sher bemisaal hai
daad qabool farmayein
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 02:17:44 PM »
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Quote from: Nira on June 30, 2009, 01:56:48 PM
wahhhhhhhhh mashaAllah
bahut khubsoorat ghazal likhi hai
har sher bemisaal hai
daad qabool farmayein
nira

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nira ji! Mujhey khushee hai, ki, aapko yah gazal pasand aayee!
                 
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2009, 08:53:51 PM »
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Bohot khoobsurat ghazal hai Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2009, 11:10:27 PM »
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Ek aur behtreen Ghazal, Abd Ji! Bahut Khoobsurati se Alfaazon ko sajaaya hai! Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 06:11:53 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 30, 2009, 08:53:51 PM
Bohot khoobsurat ghazal hai Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Celmira!
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2009, 06:12:46 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 30, 2009, 11:10:27 PM
Ek aur behtreen Ghazal, Abd Ji! Bahut Khoobsurati se Alfaazon ko sajaaya hai! Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Deepati!
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