Chalo, tumhain sunaauun eik gazal khalwat mein!

by abdbundeli on March 20, 2009, 09:28:17 AM
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Chalo, tumhain sunaauun eik gazal khalwat# mein!
Chalo, tumhain dikhaauun dil key mahal, khalwat mein!
 
Yun to mein ney kahaa hai tum sey na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Chalo, tumhain bataauun haal-e-asal## khalwat mein!

Haarnaa-jeetnaa ulfat mein sunaa hai yuun to;
Chalo, tumhain jitaauun, tark khalal*, khalwat mein!

Samajh mein Galib-o-Momin agar naheen aatey;
Chalo, tumhain sujhaauun adab-e-sahal** khalwat mein!

Roothh jaatey ho roz; ‘naa-nukar’ kaa huun maaraa:
Chalo, tumhain manaauun kar key pahal khalwat mein!

Daaltey roz khalal neend mein sawaal kayee;
Chalo, tumhain sulaauun, dey key wahal@, khalwat mein!

Justjoo@@ mein mileen tanhaaiyaan, futoor rawaan$;
Chalo, tumhain milaauun dil sey tahal khalwat mein!

Dour-e-qismat sey pareyshaan ho: mujhey maalum hai!
Chalo, tumhain sikhaauun ilm-e-ramal$$ khalwat mein!

Sataa chukey ho bahut: bhar gayaa ho jii, to, ab,
Chalo, tumhain sataauun khol key dil khalwat mein!

Uljhaneyn laakh jagaatiin hain, ‘abd’, khwaaboun sey;
Chalo, tumhain jagaauun, wasl hai hal+, khalwat mein!

#  A situation when the beloveds are all alone.
## The reality of a condition.
*  Setting aside all the obstructions.
** The easily understandable literature.
@  Come on, let me divert your thoughts to sleep you.
@@ Discovery.
$  Mobile affectations.
$$ Knowledge/skill of RAMAL (An apparatus or way for making forecasts).
+  Conjugal meeting is the solution.   

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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2009, 09:43:46 AM »
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Very NICe ABD ji

Urdu thodi weak hai .. kuch sabdo ka matlab samaj nahi aaya.. end mea word ka matlab ad kar doge tho thoda samajne mea asani hogi..
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2009, 10:15:34 AM »
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Aa kare kaamil mohabbat ko "ABD" milkar
Kaar-o-baar yeh tera bhi hain mera bhi
Naachar q samjhe hain tu khud ko yaha par
Naadir-e-rozgaar sanam tera bhi hain mera bhi

-SG-
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2009, 10:47:16 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 20, 2009, 09:28:17 AM
Chalo, tumhain sunaauun eik gazal khalwat mein!
Chalo, tumhain dikhaauun dil key mahal, khalwat mein!
 
Yun to mein ney kahaa hai tum sey na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Chalo, tumhain bataauun haal-e-asal khalwat mein!

Haarnaa-jeetnaa ulfat mein sunaa hai yuun to;
Chalo, tumhain jitaauun, tark khalal, khalwat mein!

Samajh mein Galib-o-Momin agar naheen aatey;
Chalo, tumhain sujhaauun adab-e-sahal khalwat mein!

Roothh jaatey ho roz; ‘naa-nukar’ kaa huun maaraa:
Chalo, tumhain manaauun kar key pahal khalwat mein!

Daaltey roz khalal neend mein sawaal kayee;
Chalo, tumhain sulaauun, dey key wahal, khalwat mein!

Justjoo mein mileen tanhaaiyaan, futoor rawaan;
Chalo, tumhain milaauun dil sey tahal khalwat mein!

Dour-e-qismat sey pareyshaan ho: mujhey maalum hai!
Chalo, tumhain sikhaauun ilm-e-ramal khalwat mein!

Sataa chukey ho bahut: bhar gayaa ho jii, to, ab,
Chalo, tumhain sataauun khol key dil khalwat mein!

Uljhaneyn laakh jagaatiin hain, ‘abd’, khwaaboun sey;
Chalo, tumhain jagaauun, wasl hai hal, khalwat mein!

                                     - abd bundeli


Sir ji agar aap thoda translate karde to samajhne me asani hogi apko to pata hai na meri urdu Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2009, 11:58:09 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 20, 2009, 09:43:46 AM
Very NICe ABD ji

Urdu thodi weak hai .. kuch sabdo ka matlab samaj nahi aaya.. end mea word ka matlab ad kar doge tho thoda samajne mea asani hogi..
Quote from: salma786 on March 20, 2009, 10:47:16 AM
Sir ji agar aap thoda translate karde to samajhne me asani hogi apko to pata hai na meri urdu Thumbs UP
Thanks! I've given the meanings (near translations).
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2009, 12:01:16 PM »
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O thanks .. now the Creation of ur so clear to understand..

Realy beautiful !
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2009, 12:09:55 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 20, 2009, 10:15:34 AM
Aa kare kaamil mohabbat ko "ABD" milkar
Kaar-o-baar yeh tera bhi hain mera bhi
Naachar q samjhe hain tu khud ko yaha par
Naadir-e-rozgaar sanam tera bhi hain mera bhi

-SG-
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 20, 2009, 11:48:17 AM
Khalwat:   privacy, retirement. Solitude

Mahal:   palace, location, seraglio, harem

Haal-e-asal:   Ground reality

Khalal:       gap, ruptures, fault, disorder, hinderance
 
Adab:       etiquette, repect, courtesy, literature    

Futoor:     weakness, infirmity, quarelling    
   
Tark:   to give up, omission



Tum ney samjhaa bhi hai: samjhayaa bhi: bahut achchhey!
Tarjumaa karney mein maahir ho: shak naheen koyee!!
Chalo, saajhey mein karobaar kareyn, mouj kareyn;
Aaj kaa faisalaa zaahir ho; shak na ho koyee!!
          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2009, 12:31:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 20, 2009, 12:01:16 PM
O thanks .. now the Creation of ur so clear to understand..

Realy beautiful !
Thanks for taking a lot of trouble! I'm happy you found it worth reading!
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2009, 01:33:29 PM »
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Not a problem Abd ji. kam se kam issi bahane hum urdu k kuch aur alfaaz seek lenge. so thanks to u.
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2009, 02:50:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 20, 2009, 01:33:29 PM
Not a problem Abd ji. kam se kam issi bahane hum urdu k kuch aur alfaaz seek lenge. so thanks to u.
You're welcome, Sophi ji!
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