Chand Tanha Hay ...

by RamSagar on May 17, 2006, 02:47:25 PM
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Chand Tanha Hay .....

Chand tanha hai aasman tanha
Dil mila hai kahan kahan tanha
Bujh gae aas chup gaya taara
Thartharata raha dhuwan tanha
Zindage kiya issi ko kehte hain?
Jism tanha hai aur jaan tanha
Hamsafar koi ager mile bhi kahin
Donon chalte rahe tanha tanha
Jalti bujhti roshni ke pare
Simta simta sa ik makan tanha
Raah dekha kare ga sadiyon tak
Chor jaen ge yeh jahan tanha

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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2006, 02:12:19 PM »
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kya ramsagar bhai,
kya kah dala hai aapne...bas ye kahoon to ki aapko bhi pata nahi hai, lekin jo bat apke dil mein aaye hai lagta hai bas use hi apne panne par utar dala ho.

behad nayab hai....
apke next ghazlon ka intezar rahega.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2006, 02:19:43 PM »
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Thank you qayda ji....
mai to koi gazalkar nahi hoon ...bas man me aaya to likhata hoon..nahi to kisiki likhi acchi lagi to yoindia ko share karta hoon.......

Ye jeevan hai aisa khilona....
mil jaye to mitti...na mil jaye to sona.....
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2006, 08:26:41 AM »
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Ramsagar ji i m reading you for the first time and this ghazal of urs is beautiful. it has so much deapth in it, and the pain is described so tenderly. good job.. i wd love to read more from you.
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2006, 06:56:11 AM »
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Tanha tanaha jeevan saara...
Tanaha hai  ye safar zindagi ka...

Likhate hai hum tanhayike waste..
koi tanha jo mile hume..es tanhayi ke raste...
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2006, 09:01:28 AM »
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aapki tanhayion ke waste
ek khud ko tanha kiya maine

ab mere sawalon ka jawab
kaun ho ga aapki tanhayion ke siwa
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2006, 09:44:16 AM »
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Nice One Ram sagar and kamayani,...

Chand Tanha Hai Asmaan Ki Misaal Banke,..
Main Tanha Hoon Zameen Ki Misaal Banke,..

Jaane Kyun Sab Tanhaai Se Darte Hain,..
Ke Sab Yahan Tanhaai Ki Aad Mein Hi Marte Hain,..

Tanha Hoon Main Chand Ki Tarah Wo Udaas Hai Apni Chandni Ke Liye,..
Main Bhi Tanha Bhatak Raha Hoon Duniya Mein Apni Zindagi Ke Liye,..

_________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2006, 07:29:07 AM »
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Very nice....jaanasheen..kamyayni....

             Kissi ko mohabbat ki sachai mar dalegi,
             Kissi ko mohabbat ki gehrai mar dalegi,
             Kar ke mohabbat koi nahi bachega,
             Aur jo bachega use tanhai mar dalegi
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2006, 08:09:39 AM »
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Shukriya Ramsagar,..
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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2006, 11:05:09 AM »
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thank you ramsagar ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 30, 2006, 01:28:11 PM »
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Maut Aayi Jise Sakoon Mil Gaya,..
Ke Murjhaya Hua Phool Jo Khil Gaya,..
Taradpte To Wo Hain Jo Marte Nahi,..
zamaane Se Kuch Log Darte Nahi,..
Kahe Aur Kya Hum To Hairaan hain,..
Khuda Jaane Kaise Ye Insaan hain,..

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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2006, 06:41:25 AM »
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Thanks Jaanasheen,kamyayni
pls..dosto..Ji mat likho re.....mai to abhi jawan hoon....Ji

Mohabbat tabi rang deti hai..
Jab Dil Dilse milta hai...
Lekin muskil to ye hoti hai..
Ki dil dilse bade muskilse milta hai...
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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2006, 09:32:31 AM »
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ek mohabbat wo bhi hoti hai
dil ki chahat dil me rehati hai
aankho me pyaar hota hai
aur zubaan khamosh rehati hai
hum fana ho jate hain
unko khabar bhi nahi hoti hai
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«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2006, 09:37:45 AM »
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bahot khub kamyayni Ji..

E Khuda Aaj Ye Faisla Karde,
Use Mera ya Mujhe Uska Karde.
Bahut Dukh Sahe He Maine,
Koi Khusi Ab Toh Muqadar Karde.
Bahot Muskil Lagta Hai Usse Duur Rehna,
Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
Use Utna Kareeb Karde.
Nahi Likha Agar Nasib Me Uska Naam,
To Khatam Kar Ye Zindagi aur Mujhe FANAA Karde.
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2006, 06:48:16 AM »
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Wah Bahoot Acha Likha Hai Kamyani and Sagar Bhai,..
Lage Raho,.
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