~~"CHEHRE SE PARDA UTHAO ZARA"~~ by Shally.

by k.shael on May 05, 2009, 08:15:40 AM
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Ye Meri pehli ghazal hai khumar-e-ishq me, umeed karti hoon aap sab pasandh karenge,


Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,

Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 08:26:19 AM »
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Wow Kya Baat Hai Shally.. Aisa Laga Nahi Ki Yeh Tumhari Pahali Gazal Hai Khumar-e-Ishq Me..!! Har Lafz Mohabbat se Bhara Hai..!!

Ek Aahiq Ki Nazar se Likha Yeh Qalaam Waqai Bahut Khubsoorat aur Pyaar Bhara Hai..!! Really Beautiful Words.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2009, 08:34:13 AM »
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Waah bahoot bahoot khoob Shally sis....aap to maahir hai khumar-e-ishq me love4
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 08:36:23 AM »
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hmm....very nice...bahut pyaari lines hai shally.... Applause aapki ye pyaar bhari peshkash mujhe bahut pasand aayi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2009, 08:41:18 AM »
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Nawab ji,

Kya baat hai ! Bahut khoob Applause

Khumar se bharpoor ghazal ! Winking

Lage raho ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2009, 09:24:44 AM »
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Bahoot Khooob Shally ji
Very Nice
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2009, 09:35:42 AM »
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Waah Jitni Taareef Karoon Kam Hai Shally, Great Work,.
BohatDino BaadItni DamdaarIshq Waali Ghazal Pardhne Ko Mili,

Kisi Ki Nazar Na Lagaa,Yunhi Likhte Rehna,May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 10:23:56 AM »
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Bahut behatareen Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Shally Ji Khumar-e-ishq me
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wonderful, Mind-blowing, Shally Ji

Aapki itni sunder peshkash per mujhe apni ghazal ke chand ashar yaad aa gaye

NAZAR JHUKI HAI MAGAR DIL ME BEKARARI HAI
HAYA KI AAD ME JAISE KOI SHIKARI HAI

HUM BHI KHAMOSHI KO SUN LENE KA FUN RAKHATE HAIN
ZINDAGI HUMNE BHI YUN HI NAHIN GUZARI HAI

BAND HOTON ME MUHABBAT KO CHHUPA LE LEKIN
SURKH CHEHARE SE ZIGAR KA BAYAN JAARI HAI

AANKH KE TEER SE ZAKHMI HUE ZIGAR KITANE
AISA LAGATA HAI KI AB TO HAMARI BAARI HAI

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2009, 10:54:08 AM »
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Ye Meri pehli ghazal hai khumar-e-ishq me, umeed karti hoon aap sab pasandh karenge,


Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,

Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.


bahut khoob Shally
really nice post...
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 10:55:21 AM »
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Bahut behatareen Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Shally Ji Khumar-e-ishq me
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wonderful, Mind-blowing, Shally Ji

Aapki itni sunder peshkash per mujhe apni ghazal ke chand ashar yaad aa gaye

NAZAR JHUKI HAI MAGAR DIL ME BEKARARI HAI
HAYA KI AAD ME JAISE KOI SHIKARI HAI

HUM BHI KHAMOSHI KO SUN LENE KA FUN RAKHATE HAIN
ZINDAGI HUMNE BHI YUN HI NAHIN GUZARI HAI

BAND HOTON ME MUHABBAT KO CHHUPA LE LEKIN
SURKH CHEHARE SE ZIGAR KA BAYAN JAARI HAI

AANKH KE TEER SE ZAKHMI HUE ZIGAR KITANE
AISA LAGATA HAI KI AB TO HAMARI BAARI HAI

SARVESH RASTOGI


equally nice reply Sarvesh ji Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 11:00:35 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Shally Ji
N Nice response Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2009, 11:47:56 AM »
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subhan allah shally ajj tumne dil jeet liya ..ye apki makkamil ghazal kahe sakte hain wah ji wah har ashar eak dusre ko dara raha hai kya rawani di hai janab ..subhan allah karoodo dad qubool kijiyega ...aaj apko pad kar khas taur per mujhe behad khushi howi ...allah tumhe khush rakhe !! ameen..

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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2009, 11:56:34 AM »
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shally, main kya kahoon, alfaaz hee nahi hain yaar! ishq kee shiddat iss tarhaan se lafzon me utaarna, bahot kum logon se hota hai. tumne tho, Subhan-Allah waah!

sarvesh ji, equally same. kya kahe koi inn nazmon k agay?...


Hay, na ahaen bharo iss tarhaan se k meri jaan jaatee hai,
Parde se dahka rehne do ye husn tumhaara, k humaaree aankh ko bhi sharm aatee hai.

Chand par lehaf tehra nahi ka bhi, usski roshnee me sub jhalakta hai,
Na dehko unn teekhee nazron se, k dil aur bhi taez dhadrakta hai.

Tum tasweer ho chaman kee, ya hooron kee baadee kee mailka, muhje pata nahi.
Har koi hai fida tum par, main b aashique bana, iss me meri khata nahi...



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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2009, 12:20:28 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah shally beautifull creation by you g88 lines
bohat khoob...
Winking
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 12:21:09 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah shally beautifull creation by you g88 lines
bohat khoob...
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Hum karenge wafa tumse har ghadi
Shikaayat ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Haste haste guzaarenge ye zindagi ka har lamha
Kabhi roothne ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Aankhon mein kajal banke sajna hai humen
Tumare dil mein dhadkan banke dhadkenge har ghadi

 
 
 
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