Chhota Sa Ek Kan Mitro / छोटा सा एक कण मित्रो ...... Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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है आदि काल से मानव का आचरण मित्रो
ये छोड़ पाया न इच्छा को एक क्षण मित्रो

बहू की चाल ने सबके ह्रदय को मोह लिया
बिना हटाए ही मुखड़े से आवरण मित्रो

जो पूजनीय हों, पैरों को उनके, पैर नहीं
हमे सिखाया गया है, कहो चरण मित्रो

किसी भी आँख से आँसू निकाल सकता है
पड़े जो आँख में छोटा सा एक कण मित्रो

बहुत ही त्रस्त हैं निर्धन, है ऐसी मँहगाई
बिगड़ गए हैं बचत के समीकरण मित्रो

किये हैं आपने उपकार अनगिनत मुझ पर
न भूल पाउँगा मैं जिसको आमरण मित्रो

नहीं करेंगे जो शोषण वो होंगे शोषित ही
'रक़ीब' जैसे हैं लाखों उदाहरण मित्रो

hai aadikaal se maanav ka aachran mitro
ye chhod paya na ikchha ko ek chhan mitro

bahu ki chaal ne sabke hraday ko moh lilya
bina hataae hi mukhde se aavran mitro

jo poojneeya hain pairon ko unke pair naheen
hamen sikhaya kaya hai kaho charan mitro

kisi bhi aankh se aansoo nikaal sakta hai
pade jo aankh men chhota sa ek kan mitro

bahut hi trast hain nirdhan, hai aaisi manhgaaee
bigad gaye hain bachat ke sameekaran mitro

kiye hain aapne upkaar unginat mujh par
na bhool paaunga main jisko aamran mitro

naheen karene jo shoshan wo honge shoshit hee
'Raqeeb' jaise hain laakhon udaaharan mitro

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2014, 01:28:44 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2014, 02:09:23 PM »
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bahut khoob . Sundar rachna ke liye haardik bahai.
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2014, 07:39:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob rachna Satish sir, bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2014, 04:52:00 AM »
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kyaa baat hai bade hee naye andaaz men nai ghazal

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya Saini Sahab....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2014, 05:22:40 AM »
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bahut khoob . Sundar rachna ke liye haardik bahai.

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ....Hasan Sahab..... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2014, 09:02:37 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on September 30, 2014, 12:28:08 PM
है आदि काल से मानव का आचरण मित्रो
ये छोड़ पाया न इच्छा को एक क्षण मित्रो

बहू की चाल ने सबके ह्रदय को मोह लिया
बिना हटाए ही मुखड़े से आवरण मित्रो

जो पूजनीय हों, पैरों को उनके, पैर नहीं
हमे सिखाया गया है, कहो चरण मित्रो

किसी भी आँख से आँसू निकाल सकता है
पड़े जो आँख में छोटा सा एक कण मित्रो

बहुत ही त्रस्त हैं निर्धन, है ऐसी मँहगाई
बिगड़ गए हैं बचत के समीकरण मित्रो

किये हैं आपने उपकार अनगिनत मुझ पर
न भूल पाउँगा मैं जिसको आमरण मित्रो

नहीं करेंगे जो शोषण वो होंगे शोषित ही
'रक़ीब' जैसे हैं लाखों उदाहरण मित्रो

hai aadikaal se maanav ka aachran mitro
ye chhod paya na ikchha ko ek chhan mitro

bahu ki chaal ne sabke hraday ko moh lilya
bina hataae hi mukhde se aavran mitro

jo poojneeya hain pairon ko unke pair naheen
hamen sikhaya kaya hai kaho charan mitro

kisi bhi aankh se aansoo nikaal sakta hai
pade jo aankh men chhota sa ek kan mitro

bahut hi trast hain nirdhan, hai aaisi manhgaaee
bigad gaye hain bachat ke sameekaran mitro

kiye hain aapne upkaar unginat mujh par
na bhool paaunga main jisko aamran mitro

naheen karene jo shoshan wo honge shoshit hee
'Raqeeb' jaise hain laakhon udaaharan mitro

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka baht shukriya.... Hriday Ji
 .... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Bahut khoob rachna Satish sir, bahut khoob.

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka baht shukriya.... Iftakhar Ahmad Sahab .... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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waah waaah waaaaaaH Janaab kyaa baat hai, nihaayat sunder rachnaa hai, ek rau ke saath daad qabool Karen Rakeeb Sahib.
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Bahut shukriya ..... Surindarn Ji .... Raqeeb
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Bahut shukriya .... Rajigujral Ji ..... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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