Chiragon Ko Benoor Mat Karna

by Rayees Figar on October 03, 2010, 10:53:29 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 08, 2010, 05:17:50 AM »
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GHAZAL

Aks mera na too dikha mujhko
Meri nazron mein mat gira mujhko
Mujhko rahne de mera jaisa hi
Apne jaisa na too bana mujhko
Ek sookha hua shajar hoon main
Itna zyada bhi mat jhuka mujhko
Bhool jaaun na main udaan apni
Chor kuchh der tak khula mujhko
Main hoon khusbu mujhe bikharna hai
Ae hawa door tak udaa mujhko
Ek paisa faqeer ne lekar
Bakhsh dee dher si duaa mujhko
Hindu muslim to phir banaana tu
Pahle insaan to banaa mujhko

Rayees 'Figaar'
Rayees Sahab Aadaab O tasleem !

Aapka Yo India ke mehfil meiN isteqbal hai....... Usual Smile
Yeh Shayad aapki paheli kalaam hai yahaaN Kafi umdaa
Ahsaas o khalaayoN se saji is kalaam per dil se daad
Hazir hai .,...... Daad kabool kijiye...... Usual Smile

 




Janab Rayees Sahab aapki yeH umdaa pesh kash dil ke behad kareeb rahi.... Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye...

Aate rahiye......
Likhate rahiye......
Khush o aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile

         


Janab Parvaz saheb aadab aapka shukriya ada karta hoon ke aapne meri kawish ko saraha abhi mein aaplogon ke kalam nahi parh paya . khair mulakat hoti rahegi aap ek achche insan hain . khuda hafiz.
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Rayees Figar
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«Reply #16 on: October 08, 2010, 05:24:49 AM »
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GHAZAL

Aks mera na too dikha mujhko
Meri nazron mein mat gira mujhko
Mujhko rahne de mera jaisa hi
Apne jaisa na too bana mujhko
Ek sookha hua shajar hoon main
Itna zyada bhi mat jhuka mujhko
Bhool jaaun na main udaan apni
Chor kuchh der tak khula mujhko
Main hoon khusbu mujhe bikharna hai
Ae hawa door tak udaa mujhko
Ek paisa faqeer ne lekar
Bakhsh dee dher si duaa mujhko
Hindu muslim to phir banaana tu
Pahle insaan to banaa mujhko

Rayees 'Figaar'
Janab Rahim ji aadab aapne meri ghazal parhi aur saraha aapki zarra nawazi ka mamnoon hoon . aapki ghazalein bhi zaroor parhoonga .khuda hafiz.
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«Reply #17 on: October 08, 2010, 05:30:48 AM »
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Ghazal
Unke chehre pe barhami dekhi.
Zindgi ik jagha thami dekhi.
Dharkane dil ki ruk gayin shayad.
Dard me aaj kuch kami dekhi.
Chand qatre gire thai aankho se.
Khusk dharti me bhi nami dekhi.
Rat bhar aasma bhi roya hai
Ghass aangan ki shabnami dekhi.
Bhar gaya lo "figaar" zakhme dil.
Barf sehraon me jami dekhi.
       Rayees "figaar"
bahot khub..........
  Janab Shah_a saheb asslamo alaikum aapne meri ghazal ki taeed mein jin lafzon ka istemal kiya hai wo qabil-e-gaur hain shukriya ada karta hoon khuda hafiz.
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«Reply #18 on: October 08, 2010, 05:35:49 AM »
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Ghazal
Unke chehre pe barhami dekhi.
Zindgi ik jagha thami dekhi.
Dharkane dil ki ruk gayin shayad.
Dard me aaj kuch kami dekhi.
Chand qatre gire thai aankho se.
Khusk dharti me bhi nami dekhi.
Rat bhar aasma bhi roya hai
Ghass aangan ki shabnami dekhi.
Bhar gaya lo "figaar" zakhme dil.
Barf sehraon me jami dekhi.
       Rayees "figaar"
aji rayees sahab bas wah wah bolne ko jee karta he 2nd or 4th sher gajab dha gaya...

behetreen peshkash~
Janab Abhi Tamrakar ji aadab aapne kya khoob tareef mere ashaar ki ki hai be had mamnoon hoon  .aapse mulakat hoti rahegi khuda hafiz.
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