Chiryaa Dana Kahan Se Laati Hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on June 18, 2010, 11:28:59 AM
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Ahle Bazm Aadab O tasleemath , Eak Tawil Arse ke baad Fir se Khuch Kahene Ki Koshish ki hai , Apni Qimti Aara se Nawazen ,,  



Yaad unki to yun satati hai
Jaan jati hai jaan aati hai

Rakh ke pesh-e-nazar sawalon ko
Zindagi raat bhar rulati hai

Aaj choora hai mauth ne chokar
Hai duaa maa.N ki Jo bachati hai

Bhooki beti ne mujh se ye pucha
Chiryaa daanaa kahan se laati hai

Narm bistar tume Mubarak ho
Jhunparee aankh bhar sulati hai


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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2010, 11:41:18 AM »
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qadeer shab bahut kuhoob Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2010, 11:56:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2010, 12:09:03 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Qadeer Bhai,.
Har Ashaar Dil Ke Kareeb Raha, Bohat Achchi Peshkash Hai,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Khush Rahe,.

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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2010, 12:51:02 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Bahut Hi gehre Jazabaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne,Koi lafz Nahi Hai Mere Paas, Jo iss Ghazal Ki tareef mein Kuch keh Sake..Ghazal Likh Dena Asaan Hai par Itne Gehre Ehsaaso Ko Ek Ghazal mein Kalamband Karna Bahut Mushkil..

"Bookhi Beti Ne mujhse Pucha
Chidiya Daana Kaha Se Laati Hai"...

Iss Ashaar Ne Aankhein Hi Nam Kardi..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2010, 05:03:32 PM »
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QADEER SAHEB EK LAMBE ARSE KE BAAD AAP KO DEKH KAR HAIRANI OR KHUSHI SAATH SAATH HUI.ITANI SANJEEDAGI KE SAATH LIKHI HUI YE PESHKASH MANN KE KAI KONO KO EK SAATH BHIGO GAI.ISI BAARISH ME BHEEGTE HUE APNE SE KIYA QOUL BHI BHOOL BAITHI.EK EK LAFZ DARD KI BUKKAL ODHE HUE SEENE ME NASHTAR SA CHUBHA JATA HAI.ANTARMANN SE VEDNA KE KAI SWAR EK SAATH FOOT PADE.
HAR SHER QABILE TAREEF HAI.AHSAS KIS TARAH ALFAZ KE AANSOO ROTE HAIN.AAP KI LIKHI YE GAZAL IS BAAT KI MISAAL HAI.KUCH BHI KAHNA SOORAJ KO DIYA DIKHANE JAISA HAI.......
EESHWAR AAP KO KHUSH RAKHE......
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2010, 05:50:15 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 18, 2010, 11:28:59 AM
Ahle Bazm Aadab O tasleemath , Eak Tawil Arse ke baad Fir se Khuch Kahene Ki Koshish ki hai , Apni Qimti Aara se Nawazen ,, 



Yaad unki to yun satati hai
Jaan jati hai jaan aati hai

Rakh ke pesh-e-nazar sawalon ko
Zindagi raat bhar rulati hai

Aaj choora hai mauth ne chokar
Hai duaa maa.N ki Jo bachati hai

Bhooki beti ne mujh se ye pucha
Chiryaa daanaa kahan se laati hai

Narm bistar tume Mubarak ho
Jhunparee aankh bhar sulati hai


Qadeertoopchi

BAHUT KHUB KHAS TOR SE

BHOOKI BETI----
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2010, 07:06:45 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 18, 2010, 11:28:59 AM
Ahle Bazm Aadab O tasleemath , Eak Tawil Arse ke baad Fir se Khuch Kahene Ki Koshish ki hai , Apni Qimti Aara se Nawazen ,, 



Yaad unki to yun satati hai
Jaan jati hai jaan aati hai

Rakh ke pesh-e-nazar sawalon ko
Zindagi raat bhar rulati hai

Aaj choora hai mauth ne chokar
Hai duaa maa.N ki Jo bachati hai

Bhooki beti ne mujh se ye pucha
Chiryaa daanaa kahan se laati hai

Narm bistar tume Mubarak ho
Jhunparee aankh bhar sulati hai


Qadeertoopchi

BHOOKHI BETI NE MUJH SE......QADEER SAHAB MAIN AAP KO ISS LINE KEY LIYE KOI DAAD NAHIN DE SAKTA....YEH DO LINE ITNI ANMOL HAIN...MERI AAKHEN NUM HO GAYI......INN DO LINES KO MAIN CHERISH KAR KEY RAKHOON GAA........!!! MAIN AAKEY ISS NAZM KAA KOI JAWAB NAHIN DEY SAKTA.....SIMPLY OUTSTAAAAANDING HAI...ALLAH AAP KO AUR BHI BEHTREEN NAZAM AUR GHAZAL LIKHNEY KI SALAAHIYAT ATAA KAREY AAMIN..........DOA MEIN ISS NACHEEZ KO YAAD RAKHEN
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2010, 09:30:46 PM »
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Qadeer saab...wakei apki yeh peshkash behad khubsoorat hai...koi lavz nahin tariff karne ke liye..
Bahaut sari duaein apke saath hai...for me, ur like an inspiration...hamesha kuch seekhne milta hai apko parr kar...

Khush rahiyega
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2010, 02:03:52 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut sundar peshkash hai aapki ye.... bahut khoobsurti se aapne ek ek shabd joda hai... bahut hi umda...!!!
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Wah wah Abdul Qadeer Bhai bahut ba-wazn, aala meyar ki ghazal aapne khai hai. Takhayyul ko badi maharat ke saath ash-aar mein munakkash kiya hai. Taghazzaul se bharpoor is takhleeq ke liye main aapko daad deta hun.
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«Reply #11 on: June 19, 2010, 03:19:39 AM »
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QADEER BHAI......shabd nahi daad ke liye.........bahoooooooooot hi behtreen peshkash....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2010, 05:49:32 AM »
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Quote from: taheer_khaja on June 18, 2010, 11:41:18 AM
qadeer shab bahut kuhoob Applause

Karam Nawazi Ke liye Shukarguzaar hon Tahir Khawja Saheb ,,


Duwa go

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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 18, 2010, 11:56:14 AM
Bahut khoob Qadeer Ji


Zarra Nawazi hai apki rajesh saheb .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

Apka bhai

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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2010, 04:57:01 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 18, 2010, 12:09:03 PM
Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Qadeer Bhai,.
Har Ashaar Dil Ke Kareeb Raha, Bohat Achchi Peshkash Hai,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Khush Rahe,.

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bhai azeem salamwalekum ,


tumne hamesha mujhe himmat o hausla diya hai ,apke alfazon se apna pann saaf chalakta hai ,umid hai ke aage bhi issi tarhan inayath bani rahegi ,, allah tumhe khush rakhe mere bhai ,,apke ghar ghar me sub ko salam o duwa darja ba darja ba darja ,,



apka bhai


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