Chura le gaya mera chain-o-sukoon............IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on May 20, 2012, 08:13:48 PM
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Baat mujhse wo ek mukhtasar kar gaya
Baat choti magar pur-asar kar gaya

Jaane kis mulk se aaya wo jaadugar
Aaj mujhpe wo kaisa sehar kar gaya

Ab ye duniya mujhe sab begaani lage
Aaj mujhpe wo aisi nazar kar gaya

Chura le gaya mera chain-o-sukoo.n
Haye! Mujhpe wo kaisa qahar kar gaya

Uss se bachne ki jadd mein raha Iftakhar
Saari tadbeerei.n meri be-asar kar gaya


Mukhtasar: short
Pur-asar: asardaar
Sehar: jaadoo
Jadd: koshish
Tadbeer: upaay, koshish
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 02:47:17 AM »
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Bahut khoob iftakhar bhaai
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne..
ye choti choti bate hi to dil pe ek chaap chod deti hai..bas inhe samjhne ki jaroorat bhar hai..
kabhi phool bhi pheko to patthar ki tarah aur kabhi patthar bhi phool ki tarah lagte hai..
likhte rahiye. khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye..jindgee ka kuch thikaana nahee.
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Bahut bahut shukriya Mukesh bhai itni taareef aur hausla afzai k liye.
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 03:47:20 AM »
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bahut khoob iftakhaar bhai dheron daad aur ek rau
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Bahut bahut shukriya Saini Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2012, 05:25:31 AM »
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Ahmed Bhai

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob. Bahut Asrdar Likha hai Aapne humari dili - daad kubool karein.
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2012, 05:36:04 AM »
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BAHUT  ACHHI  GHAZAL , IFTAKHAR  SAHEB.
DHERON  DAAD. DUAGO , HASAN
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2012, 06:06:12 AM »
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Sabhi ghazal padhne walon ko tah-e-dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2012, 08:42:17 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE IFTAKHAR JEE

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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2012, 09:36:17 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 20, 2012, 08:13:48 PM
Baat mujhse wo ek mukhtasar kar gaya
Baat choti magar pur-asar kar gaya

Jaane kis mulk se aaya wo jaadugar
Aaj mujhpe wo kaisa sehar kar gaya

Ab ye duniya mujhe sab begaani lage
Aaj mujhpe wo aisi nazar kar gaya

Chura le gaya mera chain-o-sukoo.n
Haye! Mujhpe wo kaisa qahar kar gaya

Uss se bachne ki jadd mein raha Iftakhar
Saari tadbeerei.n meri be-asar kar gaya


Mukhtasar: short
Pur-asar: asardaar
Sehar: jaadoo
Jadd: koshish
Tadbeer: upaay, koshish

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