D H O O M .................................... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 13, 2012, 05:41:10 AM
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«Reply #30 on: July 23, 2012, 05:07:58 PM »
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damaal ka... kamaaal ka likha hai jee  Applause Applause
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«Reply #31 on: July 25, 2012, 12:41:22 PM »
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wah wah wah aur sirf wah ,mujh jaise adna insaan ke pass is se zyada alfaz nahiN haiN is ghazal ki tareef ke liye . aur is shair  ke liye zindabad...


Bhor   meiN  ,  GaoN  ke   panghat   pe  ,  chahakti   SakhiyaaN  ,
Radha  ke  charche   kaheeN   haiN ,to  kaheeN  Shyam  ki  dhoom.


mere hisab se hasil E ghazal shair raha .. sir dheerooooon daaad qubool kijiye ... aur rau bhi

Bahut  bahut  shukriya  ,  Arish  aur  duaaein .
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«Reply #32 on: July 25, 2012, 07:36:13 PM »
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KahiN   Saghar   ke   Qaseede   hain , kahiN   Jaam   ki   dhoom  ,
Har  gali  kooche   meiN   hai , Saaqi   tere  naam   ki   dhoom


Pyar    mein   hadd    se    guzarne   ka    yeh   in'aam   mila  ,
Bazm - e - Ushshaq   meiN   hai   aaj   mere   naam   ki   dhoom


Mujh    se    ahbaab   ne    kuchh    aur    siwa    hi   chaaha  ,
Raas   aayi   na    kabhi    mujhko   mere   kaam    ki    dhoom


Kuchh   bura   to  na   hua   ,  pyar   meiN    ruswa   jo   hua  ,
Chaar - soo   machne  lagi  hai   Dil - e - Badnaam   ki   dhoom


Bhor   meiN  ,  GaoN  ke   panghat   pe  ,  chahakti   SakhiyaaN  ,
Radha  ke  charche   kaheeN   haiN ,to  kaheeN  Shyam  ki  dhoom


Manzar - e - Subh - e - Banaras   na    adhoora    chhoRo  ,
Dekh  lo   aa  ke    Awadh    bhi    Awadhi   shaam   ki   dhoom


Waah !  Arbaab - e - Hukoomat   ki   yeh  tu - tu  ,  maiN - maiN  ,
Saare  Aalam   meiN , 'Hasan' ,  hai  mere   hukkaam   ki   dhoom







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qasede = poetic praises ; Bazme ushshaq = ashiqon ki mahfil  ;ahbaab= dost / saathi ;
arbaab=members  ; hukkaam=haakim /rulers

ye to DHOOM -5 HAI ............FHS---------1 RAU
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«Reply #33 on: July 27, 2012, 05:46:10 AM »
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Kamlesh yadavji , shukrguzaar  hoon .
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«Reply #34 on: July 31, 2012, 09:31:56 AM »
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Waqai dhoom macha di iss ghazal ne, behad khoob Hasan saheb, maza aa gaya padh kar. Khaas taur pe doosra aur paanchwa sher kaafi achhe lage.
iftakhar  saheb , zarra nawazi ke liye bahut shukriya,duaaein.
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«Reply #35 on: August 03, 2012, 11:18:48 PM »
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SUMAN JI , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #36 on: October 03, 2012, 04:48:09 PM »
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 Khamosh   Aawaaz   saheb  ,  Shukriya  aur  Aadaab .
ye to DHOOM -5 HAI ............FHS---------1 RAU
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«Reply #37 on: October 07, 2012, 05:52:09 AM »
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MoHtaram F.H.SIDDIQUI salaam a'laikum ! Bhai aap ki ghazal ka o'nvaan dekha to ishtiyaaq itna baRha ke paRhe baghair na reh sakaa. Yaqeenan aap ki ghazal ne khoob dhoom machaa rakhi hai. Ghazal ka ijmaali rang-dhang khoob hai radeef ko bhi ba khoobi nibhaane ki koshish ki hai, ba har Haal aap ki ghazal daad ki musHiqq hai, so meri jaanib se bhi is shokh kalaam par dili daad qubool farmaayeN...
       Haider
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«Reply #38 on: October 09, 2012, 03:46:06 PM »
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Bahut  bahut  shukriya , zarranawazi  Ghulam  Haider  saheb . Jub kisi sukhanwar ka khuloos milta hai to behad khushi ka ehsas hota hai. Bhai waqt guzari ke liye tukbandi karta rahta hoon . Kabhi kabhi ghairmanoos radeef o qafye mil jaate hain to unmein kahne mein ziyada maza aata hai.Yeh bhi aisi hi eik koshish thhi.aap ne saraha,bahut mamnoon hoon duago,Hasan
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